Date: 02/25/10 01:41 pm Title: 3: Is this the AA meeting?
I love it:D
I really like Anna, she's pure gold.
And though Charlotte seems kind of perfect, she doesn't seem like a Mary Sue.
Do you plan to continue? Pleaaase say yes!
Date: 12/16/09 10:00 pm Title: 3: Is this the AA meeting?
UPDATE!!!
I wanna see how things will turn out between Bill and Charlotte...and i'm just giving a heads up...this story better have a happy ending...lol...and by that i mean:
BILL + CHARLOTTE = HAPPILY EVER AFTER!!
=D
Author's Response: Haha, well you'll just have to wait and see ;) rnAnd I apologise for my crappy lack of updates but I just haven't had the time, I'll try and get another chapter up as soon as I can! :D
Date: 11/30/09 12:09 pm Title: 3: Is this the AA meeting?
Seems like she's in for a bumpy ride!
Author's Response: Hmm quite possibly so... Thanks for the review :)
Date: 11/30/09 08:50 am Title: 3: Is this the AA meeting?
That was amazing I love this fic and I'm always waiting for more =D
P.S HAPPY BIRTHDAY...for yesterday babe xxx
Author's Response: Awwh, that's always nice to hear! And, thank you so much :D x
Date: 11/29/09 08:11 pm Title: 1: Prologue
This is an impressive story!
Nice plot line! How old are these characters? Just to clear it up?
Keep going! Its really good!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you for the lovely review!rnWell Charlotte's 22, I imagined her friends as all being a couple years older and as for Bill, I originally planned to keep him at his current age, however I think the plot would be a tad more believable if he were three or four years older also... I hope that clears things up for you? :)
Date: 11/29/09 07:11 pm Title: 3: Is this the AA meeting?
omg!!!!plz hurry with updates!!!
Author's Response: Haha, I'll try! Thanks for the review :)
Date: 11/29/09 06:00 pm Title: 3: Is this the AA meeting?
I like it! Alot alot! And i want to know what happens next!! Please update soon and yesterday was my birthday too!!!! HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! (I turned 21) :)
Author's Response: Awesome, I'm pleased that you like it! I'll try and be quick with the next post! Oh, happy birthday to you too! Lucky you, I only turned 17 :'(
Date: 11/20/09 07:30 pm Title: 2: The Birthday Girl
Bill's engaged? And yet he kept the card. Well, I guess I now know how she becomes the mistress. I don't know how why he abandoned her when he was supposed to meet up with her months afterwards, shown in the first chapter.
You have me extremely intrigued. I'll definitely be following this story. :]
-Kariey.
Author's Response: Sorry if it's confusing, things will slowly but surely untangle themselves. I'm glad you like it so far, thank you for taking the time out to leave me a review! :) x
Date: 11/20/09 07:24 pm Title: 1: Prologue
Wow. I think this is the first time that a story on this site has captured my attention the way this one has. I'm on to the next chapter. :] -Kariey.
Author's Response: Awh, that's good to know, I hope I don't disappoint you! :)
Date: 11/19/09 01:40 am Title: 2: The Birthday Girl
really like the story so far! please continue!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you! I'll be as quick as I can with the next post.
Date: 11/18/09 07:04 am Title: 2: The Birthday Girl
Oh my God...some shit is gonna go down hard style =D xxx
Author's Response: Haha, quite possibly... thanks for reviewing! :) x
Date: 11/18/09 06:19 am Title: 2: The Birthday Girl
oh so good so far
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! :)
Date: 11/17/09 04:07 pm Title: 2: The Birthday Girl
I reviewed this story on my youtube http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hT1eRK949YQ
Author's Response: Awwh, that was so sweet, thank you for taking the time to review it! I apologise if Charlotte's character is a tad cliche at the moment, but she breaks the mold as the story goes on, and btw, you can just call me Lauri :) Once again, thank you so much for the lovely review, I'm super pleased you're enjoying it so far!
Date: 11/17/09 01:58 pm Title: 1: Prologue
For a mistress she's a big huge baby. Mistress' do not cry over clients not showing up. Mistress make their clients beg to have them back. Is she new? Is she not getting paid for this?
Author's Response: Uhm, I think you're thinking of a different kind of mistress entirely... Charlotte isn't like an escort, she's more like 'the other woman' in Bill's life, he's not paying her for sexual favours... I hope that clears things up? Sorry if you're disappointed.
Date: 11/15/09 09:34 am Title: 1: Prologue
oooooh I can see this being very naughty and naaaastay!!! =D xxx
Author's Response: Haha, well there might very well be quite a bit of that going on in this fic, I hope I don't disappoint! :)
Date: 11/14/09 09:23 pm Title: 1: Prologue
you have definitely caught my attention =D
Author's Response: Well that means a lot coming from you, since I'm such an avid reader of all your stories! Definately one of the best Het writers I've come across! :)
Date: 11/14/09 08:05 pm Title: 1: Prologue
I came across your story while browsing and it caught my eye. After reading the prologue I'm very interested in seeing how this plays out. I think it is very well written as well! I can't wait for your next update.
Author's Response: Awh, thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I want the plot to play out realistically and in order to do that I think it's important that I don't rush through this fic, however I'll try and be as consistant as I can with updates! :)
Date: 11/14/09 07:48 pm Title: 1: Prologue
When I saw that it was het, less than 500 words, and that it was your first story, I expected this to be complete shit. But you write perfecty well, and the idea seems intriuging. I'm assuming you know that less than 1200 words is pathetic; less than 2000 unsatisfactory. This was just a prologue, so the length was ok. Can't wait to see more.
Author's Response: When I said this was my first story, what I really should have said was that this is the first one I've actually gotten round to posting on here. I've written a fair few fictions thus far but I think this one is panning out to be my favourite. Generally my word count per chapter ranges from 3,500 - 5,000... give or take. I'm glad it didn't turn out as shit as you thought it would, I'll try and get the next post up when I've got time. Thanks for reviewing! :)
Date: 11/14/09 06:50 pm Title: 1: Prologue
Before reading the prologue, I thought, the idea of the story is very good in my opinion but I had a feeling you're not going to fulfill it like it should be. You proved me wrong though, I expected it to be afwully written and cliché'd. But I like it so far and hope you'll keep it up.
Author's Response: I don't really delve into Slash very often, so as a Het reader and writer I find it very frustrating that there are so many poorly written Het stories going around. I think that's what inspired me to try and come up with something more original, and as the story progresses I hope I'll succeed in maintaining that originality. Thank you for taking the time to review and I can only hope that I'll continue to meet your expectations. :)
Date: 11/14/09 06:42 pm Title: 1: Prologue
good start! so refreshing to see at least a decent het story! my only suggestion is that you change the word 'suspenders' to the word 'garters'
Author's Response: Ah, thank you for the review and your advice, it's always appreciated! :)