Date: 11/12/09 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 2: Twenty Years of Insanity
Wow, As i said in my last review
its awesomee
Author's Response: Thank yous for the review!!!!! Working on chapter 3 now.
Date: 11/12/09 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 2: Twenty Years of Insanity
man this should be good,sure if u update soon,great and awfully painful
Author's Response: Why do people keep saying it's painful? *innocent face* Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 11/12/09 05:09 pm Title: Chapter 2: Twenty Years of Insanity
This was really really good!
Can'twait for the next chapter xD
*high fives for effort*
Amazing xD
Author's Response: *high fives back* thanks! I guess that means I have to work on three now...
Date: 11/12/09 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 2: Twenty Years of Insanity
Who was laughing??? WHO WHO WHO??? another chappie already excellant stuff. waiting for more +gives bill shaped cookies+
Author's Response: Your gonna have to wait a little while before you can figure that out. Thanks! *munches on the cookiez* Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 11/12/09 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 1: Promises Made and Broken
WOW
Author's Response: I know right?! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 11/11/09 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 1: Promises Made and Broken
Oh my God that was so horrific! How much of a good film would this make =D xxx
Author's Response: One of my guy friends at school said the exact same thing...weird. Anywayz! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 11/11/09 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 1: Promises Made and Broken
oh my God!! i want to know more.. of course it's so sad that they died but still i want them to haunt the rooms and know what happens next.. please wright the next chapter quickly!!! :D
Author's Response: Haha, the haunting may not be exactly what you think it is.... Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 11/11/09 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 1: Promises Made and Broken
Ahh, im crying! How could you do that to Bill's beautiful face! I entregeed (sp) to read more! Good stuff. (apart from the grusom murder)
Author's Response: I'm sorry I made you cry! I absolutely hated typing out Bill's murder (although making the banner pic was fun!!). I'm glad you liked it and thanks for reviewing!
Date: 11/11/09 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 1: Promises Made and Broken
Wow that was awesome :O
Author's Response: Thanks! and thanks for reviewing!
Date: 11/11/09 01:20 pm Title: Chapter 1: Promises Made and Broken
OMGGGG!!! That is soooo.... Unfair! :(
But amazing! :D
Can't wait for an update!!! :D
Author's Response: Yes, very unfair. I hated typing out the deaths, especially Bill's. But everything is gonna be okay, just wait. Thanks for the review!!
Date: 11/11/09 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 1: Promises Made and Broken
Wow.....
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 11/11/09 12:52 pm Title: Chapter 1: Promises Made and Broken
I promise I won't kill you. If you update soonly. OMG BILL!!! That's just so harsh. HOW COULD THEY???
Author's Response: They wanted to make Tom suffer and what worse way to do that then to make him watch his twin burn to death. These people are sick bastards. Thanks for reviewing, chapter 2 is coming soon!
Date: 11/11/09 12:45 pm Title: Chapter 1: Promises Made and Broken
... huh, thas one way to start a story XD
Ooh Im gonna watch this it might get interesting O.O
Author's Response: Thanks. My english teacher said the hardest part of a story was starting it, but this one seemed easy... I think I might have problems. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 11/11/09 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 1: Promises Made and Broken
OMG! it was so so heartbreaking. The end sounds like a piece of text from wikipedia. Like some old musicians dieing from overdose. I'll keep tracking this story. Great. can't wait to hear more from you.
Author's Response: I could tell, my friend was about to cry when Tom died. I guess the ending came from reading waaayyy to much wikipedia. Chapter 2 is coming up soon! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 11/11/09 11:37 am Title: Chapter 1: Promises Made and Broken
OH OH OH OH THAT WAS GRUESOME but i like it made me shiver more plz
Author's Response: People keep telling me this stuff, just be glad I haven't seen the 'SAW' movies or else the murders would have been a little more fucked up! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 11/11/09 10:35 am Title: Chapter 1: Promises Made and Broken
:O
:O
:O
Wow.
This is astonishingly horrendous. I would adore it if you continued it. I'll track it if you do ;]
Author's Response: Aww thanks! I was wondering if you ever read any of my stories! :P Thanks for reviewing Savi!
Date: 11/11/09 09:19 am Title: Chapter 1: Promises Made and Broken
As a fan of everything dark and sinister I can't wait to see how this develops. You started very well. I wait for more!
Author's Response: More is coming up! I am just debating with myself on where to start chapter two on. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 11/11/09 09:10 am Title: Chapter 1: Promises Made and Broken
that is sooo fucking disgusting!
i wanna know how it ends
Author's Response: I have a fucked up mind apparently. Thanks for reviewing but it won't be over just yet!
Date: 11/11/09 08:18 am Title: Chapter 1: Promises Made and Broken
As wierd as it may sound, I Really liked it. Well not killing Bills pretty face part, but the whole plot of the chapter.
But i though that the names would be different? So will the people [the band] who will be staing at the hotel, have the same names?
Update quick!
Author's Response: That seems to be the part that freaks everyone out. No the people won't have the same names, It's going to be a completely different band. I messed with the fabric of time a little. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 11/11/09 06:10 am Title: Chapter 1: Promises Made and Broken
Oh, well this is sick, twisted and juicy... >:] It sounds promising, can't wait to read more and see how this whole things unfolds itself. :)
Author's Response: You know, that is exactly what half of my friends said when I asked them to preread the rough draft. It'll be good I promise!