Date: 05/22/10 06:43 am Title: 8. Logic For The Tenant?
Holy shit, that was creepy. I love it, I can't wait for more on this story.
Author's Response: ;D Thanks for the review.
Date: 05/20/10 05:27 am Title: Prologue
uuuppdaaaateeee *puppy eyes*
Author's Response: I diiiiidddd *excited puppy eyes*
Date: 03/21/10 01:34 am Title: 7. Colors
this confused me but it was good :D
Author's Response: eeps! glad you thought it was good though. I guess.. :)
Date: 03/20/10 08:12 am Title: 7. Colors
OHHHHHHHHHHHHH SNAP
Author's Response: Snap indeed *nods*rn
Date: 03/19/10 06:32 am Title: 7. Colors
Omg Tom helped Jacob with the bags? Hahahahaha I find that really funny actually. Poor poor billa (I feel like I say this every chapter) always being haunted by escalades and toms(but they're actually there!!!!!!) can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: No way!!! :D I don't think anyone can say it enough, no matter the story lol. The chapter should already be up.
Date: 03/19/10 03:27 am Title: 7. Colors
OMG I can't wait for the next chapter. Things are getting more intense, I love it.
Author's Response: Wait no longer, it should be up. Intensity shall only increase. Hopefully :D Glad your loving it.
Date: 03/19/10 03:08 am Title: 7. Colors
I can't wait until you get the next chapter up! I absolutely love the story.
Author's Response: It should be up! So glad you do. :)
Date: 02/28/10 04:58 pm Title: 6. Coast Back
Omg You're just building up my excitement x]. I like how you're taking it slow, which means when the action actually gets here, it'll be fucking awesome.
I missed this story *hugs it*
Author's Response: I think its better I take it slow, I don't want to rush into it and than everyone is really lost. I'll confuse myself too. :/ So hopefully I'll be able to manage it and turn it into something awesome for you. :Drnrn
Date: 02/28/10 04:07 pm Title: 6. Coast Back
Great chap! Tom's out, wonder if he's going to find Bill...
...and has Tom gone to the hair salon or something? It's just the way you wrote it seemed to make me think he might have...
Anyways, i'm excited now! XD
Author's Response: Actually...you'll have to read the next chapter to find out. ;D Glad your excited!
Date: 02/28/10 02:40 pm Title: 6. Coast Back
Loved it!
Andreas is annoying me, but he always does in every story, lol. Bc he's getting so into things with Bill that he can't understand. And I love it anyways! Bill, poor him. I can't wait to see what Tom does though :D I'm excited.
Author's Response: So glad! I'm actually very picky when it comes to Andreas in a lot of stories. Sometimes I feel like I have too many expectations for him. :/rnGlad your excited tho.
Date: 02/28/10 10:27 am Title: 6. Coast Back
Hmmmm......Tom is out...giddy for Tom is not good at all....poor billa he never has a break from being distressed. Can't wait to see what happens when they meet again cause it's obvious Tom is going to go see/find bill
Author's Response: Well obviously. :) I'll give you that. lol And poor Bill is going to have to endure it.rn
Date: 02/27/10 09:21 pm Title: 5. Reviewing Realization
I've been waqiting this for so long and thyank you for giving me my dear Tom (My? Hah!). Yes, soft landing back to a story. I had to read the two previous chapters again to make sure I haven't forgot anything and to get into a mood. It was worth it.
I loved how you described Tom's characters here again, after a long time. Also something new from his life and David's POV. I still don't fully understand David, because obviously Tom is no way safe to be released. As much as I love his character, I have to say that...
But he is leaving, he is going to Bill and damn, Bill can see how no Jacob in this wporld can fill his needs like Tom can. I can't wait to see their messed up relationship to burst into life again, because after all, it never stopped, right?
I hope you can update soon again, because I just love this universe so much.
Author's Response: Yeah, I had to re-read the story to get back into, which was sort of sad but ti was worth it as well. I'm glad your happy to have the story back. I myself am happy to be writing it again.rnI'll try and update soon, but I should be able to! Thanxs. :)
Date: 02/27/10 02:04 am Title: 5. Reviewing Realization
Awesome job :D
So glad your updating again!
Author's Response: Thanks! Me too :)
Date: 02/26/10 06:54 pm Title: 5. Reviewing Realization
i love Saw :)
good chapter, cant wait to read on.
xx
Author's Response: Thanks. :)
Date: 02/26/10 12:52 pm Title: 5. Reviewing Realization
I can't believe I have never read this story!! It's fantastic! (: update soon!!!!!!!! Pretty pleaseee
Author's Response: You've never read? Well I'm glad you have now!! :DrnI'll try and update again soon.
Date: 02/26/10 08:23 am Title: 5. Reviewing Realization
Huh so David is letting Tom out again....can't wait to see what happens
Author's Response: That he is...
Date: 02/26/10 08:05 am Title: 5. Reviewing Realization
YAYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT'S AN UPDATE *squee dance* *does bad imitation of one person conga line* UPDATE, UPDATE UPDAAATE! UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDAAATE! UPDATE UPD-- I'm sorry... I got a little over excited there...
Well, that and the cold medicine in my system is fucking with me... i swear, that shit does things to me O.O...But anywhore! Swiftly moving along...
It's about time. It really is. I've been all keyed up about tom seeing bill again and take comfort in the fact that we are inching closer and closer (how ever long it may take) to their reunion... and what FUN THAT WILL BE!
So yeah, Loved the chapter, squeed at the prospect of tomi getting out and i really can't wait for more...
Also, I FRICKEN LOVE the Saw franchise... whatever it is, if it has ANYTHING to do with Saw, I am SO THERE!
Just point me in the general direction. :D
Thank you for the update. I like updates... :D and cold medicine... weeeee! (Oh my god, how sad am i? I get hallucinations from codral cold and flu *shakes head at self* oh well... Hi there pyscho!tomi, wanna let me watch you fuck bill? ...No? Aw, sadness...)
I'm not crazy, I swear... well maybe I do have a few screws loose... and I'm going to shut up and press submit now...
Author's Response: Yay, an update! lol Sucks to hear that your sick. I hate being sick. Its no fun, but I don't know anyone who likes it anyways.rnYes, it is exciting to know that Tom may get out. I'm sure Bill and his reunion would be something.rnI'm glad you liked the update and I'll try again soon!rnrnAnd don't worry, we all have a few loose screws!!! XD
Date: 02/26/10 05:33 am Title: 5. Reviewing Realization
I am so glad that you updated. I felt bad that David wasn't going to let Tom out after Tom has helped him out..even though Tom is dangerous and all< I wanted him to be able to come out.
So I really liked the way the chapter ended and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Glad you liked the way the chapter turned out. Thanxs for the review and I hope you enjoy the next one. :)
Date: 01/17/10 09:54 am Title: 4. Get Out
*raises hands, waving you down like a jet plane* ME ME ME ME! I LOVE SAW! ... there's gonna be saws? *looks up expectantly* ... i'll help you out... i may have only seen them a few times but i hav a photographic memory for stuff like that...
will there be saws??? Blood? Crazy ass plot twist? If so, I'm in... whatever the hell it is, I'm in!
but back to the chapter... ngahhhhhhh! that was epic... i squee SO hard when i saw there was another chapter!
I'm guessing that tomi is going to come for bill... in more ways than one (heh heh heh... imma pervert...) and just fck shit up all around... maybe mess with jacob a little... maybe alot? (there's just something about jacob that i find strange-- weird how i'll think nothing suss of bat shit crazy tomi but i'll be watching jacob like a hawk... eh, the weird ones are fine- it's those normal that you gotta look out for...) but anywhore, i'm ranting
okay so, i loved the chapter, i'm looking forward to more and i can't wait to find out what happens next...
Farewell for now--keep your dreams sweet and your nightmares sweeter... (O__O.. I'm not entirely sure what compelled me to write that, i am a little creeped out at myself but meh, can be bothered to press delete.. aw shit, I'm ranting again!) *is pressing submit now*
Author's Response: Idk about saws now, but who knows about later on rite? So I may take you up on your offer. :)rnrnAs for Tom, I'm sure he misses Bill. Probably a lot. :) I'm glad you were excited that there was a new update. Hopefully I'll be able to update more so I'm not totally depriving you guys. rnThanxs for the sweat dreams and nightmares. Hopefully they'll be goodies. XD
Date: 01/08/10 12:34 am Title: 4. Get Out
I am so glad to see a sequel to PI :-)
I'm sure that this one too will become another favorite of mine..and to answer your p.s., yes i LOVE LOVE LOVE the Saw franchise :-) They were works of genius!
Author's Response: :) I sure hope it does. I'd be so pleased to hear if it was a favorite of yours. rnAnd yes, I must admit... those Saw movies definitely are somethin', aren't they? :D