Date: 03/23/10 12:04 am Title: Chapter 4: Morning Incidents
Oh wow I am soooooooooooooo sorry!
I haven't been on THF in FOREVER so I didn't know you had updated! D;
I feel absolutely horrid. D:
The chapter was great though!
If you're still up to it, I'll keep tracking this story in case you ever get the urge to update this again.
I am honestly sorry. I really do like this story. O;
Great update and hopefully more soon?
Date: 12/16/09 10:09 am Title: First Sight
This is a great start for the story I just read the first 4 chapters and their are lovly :) it's difrent from other storys and I love it! Continue soon,and I love the long chapters too :D
Date: 09/14/09 08:12 pm Title: Dinner
Haha too cute. :3
I love how a lot of it is based off of the little mermaid, but you've also added your own twist. :3
Haha anyways, very cute update and more when you can? :D
Date: 09/13/09 03:18 am Title: Dinner
How many chapters is it in this story ?
Author's Response: I'm not sure right now, really as many as it takes to get through the story of the little mermaid.
Date: 09/13/09 02:59 am Title: Dinner
this is cute.. I like it I cnt wait to read more of it.
Date: 09/12/09 09:58 pm Title: Dinner
I love this story, More please!!!
Date: 09/12/09 09:51 pm Title: Dinner
i love this story. Tom just kiss Billa.
Date: 09/12/09 09:35 pm Title: Dinner
I really like this. It's so different. Can't wait until you update!
Date: 09/11/09 09:00 am Title: Changes
I love The little mermaid and I especially love it with Tom and Bill :D
Date: 09/07/09 10:52 pm Title: Changes
Wonderful! I love this! Please update soon!
Date: 09/07/09 06:29 pm Title: First Sight
More soon?
Please? :3
Date: 09/07/09 06:28 pm Title: First Sight
Haha this story is sooooooooo CUTE! :3
Oh wow I can imagine this story being amazing.
Date: 09/07/09 12:59 am Title: First Sight
Ooh, I really like this. I almost passed reading it but I'm glad I clicked on it. It's really well written and I'm intrigued with the scenario. Yay, I'm excited for this now! I can't wait to hear more. *plants self down and grabs popcorn*
Date: 09/05/09 02:39 pm Title: First Sight
yayyyyyyyy! more please
Date: 09/05/09 02:28 pm Title: First Sight
What is the difference bewteen the kingdoms?
Author's Response: There's not really that much of a difference betweeen them, they're just different kingdoms. I hope that answers your question well enough. Thanks for reading!
Date: 09/05/09 02:07 pm Title: First Sight
I really enjoyed this. It's interesting. I'm fving this nd please update soon!