Date: 12/26/09 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 18-It all falls down
aww this was a really great story and i loved this chapter...that riley man...it doesn't make any sense how someone's jealousy can make them do some of the craziest things...im glad they are together
Date: 12/26/09 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 12- I am here
oh my that so sweet that song is my favorite song and it fit so well
Date: 12/26/09 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 11-what to do...
no not jamal i honestly don't like him and omg sam isn't dead thank god!!
Date: 12/26/09 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 10-Suspense
OMG i can't believe she died...was she killed? oh why am i asking i will just continue to read but wow i honestly thought she wasn't going to die
Date: 12/23/09 01:08 am Title: Chapter 9- Silence heard around the world
omg i know riley and monica had something to do with it...oh she's such a bitch she just doesn't like people dating musicians...i mean what is her deal
Date: 12/22/09 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 6-Suprise
aww tom is such a sweety...i really liked how you portrayed him in this chapter...great job
Date: 12/22/09 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 3: A stare from across the room
omg that was like the best concert experience ever!!
Date: 12/21/09 12:33 am Title: Chapter 1: Tickets
hehe i like her mother she is pretty funny...and omg her aunt riley is such a bit, im a little anxious to see what's the deal with her family...great chapter..this story really caught my attention
Date: 09/22/09 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 1: Tickets
Oh and about your response thing to my last post, I thought that was the reason why! lol ^_^ But then I thought it was just a mistake because after a while my name wasn't there anymore. But s'all good. I still love this story. xD
Date: 09/22/09 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 18-It all falls down
I've run out of critiques, it seems. Well, not really. Just been busy catching up on other stories with hardly any time but here I am! ^_^ I can't believe she was about to get married and everything. THROWDOWN AT THE ALTAR!! xD Finally, the truth comes out! Well, almost. Riley hasn't admitted anything and it looks like Tom and Sallie have started over.
Date: 09/22/09 01:28 pm Title: Chapter 18-It all falls down
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
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AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYY!!!!!
LOVED it!!!! xD WHOOT! Tom and Sallie!!!!!! :D
Date: 09/17/09 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 15-broken hearts on the dance floor
Okay...*tries to breathe* Wow.
I can't say expect anything less of him because I would've done the same thing. You can't play with a person's heart, especially not with a person who is keen on love anyway. I just can't believe that it could be possibly over between them!! OVER! :O Oh and my computer is being stupid so I can't contact you. :( Did you make me a co-author because it says that this story is by the both of us.
Author's Response: well you gave me the ideas for the past two chapters haha so why wouldn't I put your name on it? :D
Date: 09/17/09 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 15-broken hearts on the dance floor
tom's an idiot. *glares at him*
update soon!
Date: 09/17/09 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 15-broken hearts on the dance floor
awwwwwwww
Date: 09/16/09 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 12- I am here
I can't believe my whole review for this chapter wasn't sent. :( I was completely honored I helped to inspire this chapter. Also, the fact that Jamal proposed was shocking! Bill must've felt horrible because he was unaware and I would've probably fainted from the pressure and stress if I was Sallie!
Date: 09/16/09 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 14-Fate
OOO... a bad feelin in the pit her stomach? :x Why do I have the feeling Sallie's gonna walk into one of those clubs and then she sees this girl all over Tom, or he's all over her. God, it's getting intense! Also, I can't believe she finally said that she didn't love Jamal!! I bet his face was priceless. lmfao I wonder what Aunt Riley's say is, in all of this. Oh well, who cares, nobody likes her. x'D I deff can't wait for the next chapter. ^_^
Date: 09/16/09 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 13-forget me
One more time.. OMG. He proposed, again, and Sallie said yes! What?! I could see myself being that girl who made that rant video. lol xD TEAM TOM AND SALLIE!
Date: 09/16/09 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 12- I am here
OMG. Tom definitely wins the corny award, courtesy of corn! xD I agree with Rupert though, that was just too cute to ignore.
Date: 09/16/09 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 14-Fate
I. WANT. MORE. NOW!!!
hahah
this is soo good!
:)
Date: 09/16/09 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 13-forget me
ugh! SALLIE IS FREAKING RETARDED!!!! Sam should slap some sense into her
good chapter though!!! :)