Date: 04/11/10 01:28 am Title: Chapter 8
hehe i like were that is going.
Date: 04/04/10 02:20 am Title: Chapter 8
Hmm... Not sure what I think about this story yet. I'm completely intrigued though. More, please!
Date: 04/03/10 07:12 pm Title: Chapter Two - That's My Boy
You write like shit. It's stupid and boring and maybe you should learn to be a better writer. Complete utter shit wat going through your head when you wrote this? My 12 year old brother can write better than you.
Author's Response: I don't care what you think of my writing. I purposely wrote horribly. It was obvious.
Date: 04/03/10 07:09 pm Title: Chapter One - He Doesn't Look Too Bad
Boring...Hopefully the next chapter will be better...
Date: 04/03/10 12:52 pm Title: Prologue
I can't tell you how excited i was to see that you had updated. Hopefully you'll be able to continue :)
Date: 10/24/09 11:48 pm Title: Chapter Six - First LOVE
Wow. Can totally see the next parts coming... Is that a good thing?
Date: 10/23/09 11:13 pm Title: Chapter Six - First LOVE
lolz..no=] maybe..idk..lolz..more plz=]
Date: 10/23/09 11:58 am Title: Chapter Six - First LOVE
Not really xD
I like the story though *tracking story*
Date: 10/23/09 01:56 am Title: Chapter Six - First LOVE
whoa wait dude im so lost i dont really understand what just happened in this last chapter but either way post soon! this is way good =D
Author's Response: That chapter was Simone's teenage years meeting her father's drug dealer. It was her first love and is relevant in later chapters.
Date: 10/22/09 11:42 pm Title: Chapter Six - First LOVE
it was so not predictable for me,
maybe me is slow :o
me love
Date: 10/22/09 09:26 pm Title: CHAPTER FIVE - Told You
keep it comin!
Date: 10/22/09 09:09 pm Title: CHAPTER FIVE - Told You
Dun dun dun...and so the fun sort of starts.....but what will happen when bill finds out who the stranger is....can't wait for more :)
Author's Response: And that isn't even the right chapter up. I forgot to put up chapter four. Dear freaker. It's on it's way to being fixed as of now. I just have to wait for it. So, yeah.
Date: 09/22/09 11:10 pm Title: Cháptér Thréé- Níné Pércént Ín Lóvé
Awesome!
Date: 09/19/09 10:02 pm Title: Cháptér Thréé- Níné Pércént Ín Lóvé
I like this story. I liked it a lot so far x]. It's amusing and I'm addicted
Date: 09/19/09 06:32 pm Title: Cháptér Thréé- Níné Pércént Ín Lóvé
XD MOAR
Date: 08/02/09 12:11 am Title: Chapter Two - That's My Boy
wow luvd it!
Date: 07/30/09 09:49 pm Title: Chapter Two - That's My Boy
lmao Georg's such a girl maaayun!
Date: 07/30/09 09:06 pm Title: Chapter Two - That's My Boy
awww that was adorable...to bad Georg didn't notice that Gustav knew who he was talking about...
Date: 07/29/09 10:21 pm Title: Chapter One - He Doesn't Look Too Bad
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Meet again! Meet again!!!!
Date: 07/29/09 06:32 pm Title: Chapter One - He Doesn't Look Too Bad
Haha yeah! This story sounds really good so far.