Date: 08/20/11 03:03 pm Title: Careless Whispers
Loved it! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 08/20/11 02:47 pm Title: The Real Haus of Georg
Loved it!
Date: 08/20/11 02:27 pm Title: The Search Begins
Loved it!
Date: 11/26/10 04:38 am Title: Careless Whispers
Even tho evidence doesn't show that she is georg daughter there is something there. As sick as it sounds...i do love this! in reality it is a no-no, but i guess that is wats great about fiction, anything goes! i find it sad that u had writers block, and hope that u find the will to keep going because as i said it is very enjoyable. Hope to hear from you soon...Good luck!
P.S if ppl can accept twincest how come not this? ha
Date: 09/22/10 04:29 pm Title: Careless Whispers
ohh. very good please update soon...
i feel i want her to end up with Tomi and these feelings stop but it could end either way... =/ :D keep writing! :D x
Date: 06/04/10 06:45 pm Title: Careless Whispers
OH COME ON!
Date: 06/04/10 06:39 pm Title: Secret Agent Dad
fuck her Georg. May be that would clear her mind a little.
Date: 06/04/10 06:25 pm Title: The Real Haus of Georg
ROFL! okay. :D
One: I wish he could rape her
Two: I really wish this had a little more depth. We can guess what can happen from now on so it is quite predictable. I suggest you make it a little more twisty? Adding some spices ,more feeling and passion to the characters.. a lot more confusion and just let Georg and Ari drift to their thing on their own accord.
He just met her... realized she was his daughter and WOOP waking up with a hard on? Soon much? I really think if he hadn't learnt she was his daughter.. he wouldnt be that... confused..
All in all, my advice is to make the plot more tense, and bring some depth to the characters and the dialogue.
PS: Loved the song.
Date: 02/28/10 07:04 am Title: Careless Whispers
Uh. update please?
Date: 09/04/09 08:18 pm Title: The Search Begins
Loving ur story. Plz updated soon (=
Date: 08/04/09 11:51 am Title: Careless Whispers
Oh my , oh my what has he gotten himself into...
Date: 08/04/09 01:53 am Title: Careless Whispers
Ooooooo Me likey
Date: 07/27/09 02:57 am Title: Secret Agent Dad
this is so... wrong... in an oddly good way?
Date: 07/26/09 08:32 pm Title: Secret Agent Dad
Cute!!
Especially, when she threw the heels at Georg.