Date: 12/05/09 07:21 am Title: O4.
Spongebooooob :'D
Jayla sounds like a really cute kid. I think I know who painted a picture of Biiill.. :D
Date: 07/14/09 09:37 pm Title: O4.
awwwwwww. Loved the chapter. I bet Tom did that portrait of Bill, but then again i could be absolutley wrong, anyman Great work, Keep going! ^_~
Date: 07/14/09 09:16 pm Title: O3.
I can honestly say, i love this story so much ^_^ The beginning part of this chapter i was not expecting, but now it all makes sense of how Jayla is without a mother, You're a really great writer! ^_~
Date: 07/03/09 11:24 pm Title: O4.
Raaah, I love this story so much.
Date: 07/03/09 03:46 pm Title: O4.
Again, I start my review with an "awww". :( I mean, whose life is sadder..??? I couldn't really tell. I think I've got an idea of who did Bill's portrait, though. ;) Hope to read more soon, I really like it! :)
Date: 07/03/09 02:52 am Title: O4.
omg poor tom and jayla and bill thats so sad
Date: 07/02/09 11:46 pm Title: O4.
I'm really liking this story please update soon =)
Date: 07/02/09 06:00 pm Title: O4.
Awww :) that was cute, well, okay so maybe not cute because Bill thinks he's being stalker or something and Tom yells at his Aunt, but hey...if you push all that away it was cutish :) And then that Tom and Bill are both afraid of storms... :) hehehe, ignore me :)
In the words of Gustav Schäfer, preposterous.
Hehehehe, good going Gustav :)he seems very calming in this fic, and that's good Bill needs someone like that. I didn't understand at first why Gustav mentioned it was going to rain, like was it just to show Bill there was something realistic and normal in his life? but now it makes more sense :) poor Jayla, she seems so sweet. But I'm still not quite sure why Tom blew up on Aunt Grace. But yeah, I lik the story so far :) ew jammed finger....stinky :) happy it's better, especially since it got me another chapter of this :)
Date: 06/28/09 05:45 pm Title: O3.
Awww :) it seems like awwing is the onl thing I can do when I read this! And again, I don't know who I feel the most for. :( Tom's story is very sad... but I'm glad they live so close, actually I'd have never figured that, it was a nice surprise. ;) I really like how you made them meet! And I also hope you'll post soon. :)
Date: 06/23/09 11:34 pm Title: O3.
Huh, I like it, I really like it, can't wait to read the next chapter.
Date: 06/23/09 05:22 pm Title: O3.
plzpzl update sooon=] thx soso much=]=]
Date: 06/23/09 04:52 pm Title: O3.
-sniff- I've wanted to cry the last two chapters and you've finally dragged it out of me. That opening scene was so awfully sad. But the chapter was amazing, as always. Thanks for updating. (:
Author's Response: Awh.
D':
-wipes away joor tears-
Thanks for the review! <3
Date: 06/20/09 06:14 pm Title: O2.
AWWWWW :( I don't know whom I'm awing the most for :( they're both so adorable and helpless, I seriously... I don't know they're so lovely! I hope you'll update soon, honey, I really love your characters so far, and I'm sure I'll love your plot too! :)
Date: 06/18/09 06:21 pm Title: O1.
Awwwwwwwwwwwwww *saddest look ever* it's so so so pretty! I wouldn't say beautiful or breathtaking because it's just SO soft and delicate those adjectives are too strong for it, they'd break its fragile features. Seriously, that's what it felt to me! Awesome, it did interest me and made me curious, I will so surely track and favourite this. Lovely!
Date: 06/17/09 06:01 am Title: O2.
Munchkin. *Giggles* Love that word.
Its so awesomely amazing how Both Bill & Tom do art. I'm very much more into this story now than i was before. This Chap was great, More please <3
Date: 06/16/09 11:31 am Title: O2.
Aaaw, so cute^^
But how old are Tom and Bill in this?
Author's Response: Thanks!
That will be pointed out later on in the story. ;D
Date: 06/15/09 11:02 pm Title: O2.
That was heartwrenching. Seriously, I'm like..fighting back tears right now. This is so sad. I really can't wait for more, though.
Author's Response: Awh;; It'll be okay! Thanks for the review!
Date: 06/14/09 05:36 pm Title: O1.
Awwwwwwwwwww. Tom's really sweet. I'm definitly interested and i hope you continue ! It would be a shame to let this story go since i loved it so much. I also really like your style of writing, it's awesomesauce :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :'D
Date: 06/14/09 05:17 pm Title: O1.
Love it so far. (: It'd be great if you continued but of course, no pressure. Tom's daughter is such a sweetheart. I love the image of Tom in that jumpsuit as well.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I have every intention in the world of continuing this, but of course, that depends on the readers. I write to please.
And, oh my gosh. I keep picturing Tom in the jumpsuit, and I like, drool every time. :'D
Much love for the review. (
Date: 06/14/09 02:39 pm Title: O1.
Oh... wow. I admit I wasn't surely expecting a new fiction, to be honest, but don't worry, it's okay. :)
It was well written, as usual; unfortunately, mistakes weren't for me to find, but I found your style still awesome and captivating, that's for sure. You always get my attention, your writings look like real books, I'm serious.
I respect the fact you decided to write a General story this time. It was sweet. Jayla is, too. :)
... but what about your other stories? XD I know, I don't mean to bother you, but still, lol. I did miss you and your writings, so please, keep sticking around. :)
See you!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review, hon! It's much appreciated. And about the other stories, I really have no idea. The inspiration for the others left the building, and I know I had people waiting for those to be finished and what not, but I just can't seem to finish those. Thanks for being patient, though. <3