Date: 09/12/12 07:05 pm Title: Control
not bad at all, a bit intense yeah but I have to admit that the ending was a bit disappointing as Bill 'got his control back' lol but still good :3
Date: 04/18/11 09:39 am Title: Control
Uh... I'm not sure what to say. I did enjoy the fic but the end note threw me a little.
Date: 09/02/10 01:19 am Title: Control
that is not exactly true...about not being rape if you liked it....this was...wow...a very dark side of Tom...it was kinda disturbing actually I see what you mean about feeling bad after you wrote it..I feel kinda bad reading it and not in that deliciously naughty way...
Date: 06/12/09 11:48 pm Title: Control
AAAHHHH it was awesome!!!! *squeaks* I love a good rape scene! fab!
Date: 05/12/09 02:38 pm Title: Control
The way this is written is perfect considering the plot and content of the story. I was just amazed by this fic... Loved it!
Date: 05/12/09 10:39 am Title: Control
it can still be rapeif you liked it. if you didn't give permission and they go ahead anyway, that's rape.
but anyway, i love this a lot, i hope you write some more similar fics.
Date: 05/12/09 09:41 am Title: Control
Great Job. Very interesting that when it's all over, Tom's dissapointed that Bill liked it. I liked your take on it and how you wrote Tom's perspective throughout; it really allowed me to get inside his head.
Date: 05/12/09 06:51 am Title: Control
wootwoot!.
I liked it...
Date: 05/12/09 12:04 am Title: Control
hah. i loved this story. i love tha tin the end, Bill still has control over Tom. It's totally awesome and something that I could see happening.