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Reviewer: torturedsoul1787 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/03/12 05:28 pm Title: It Takes Six to Cum

........................................................................................................................I wanna be Elena. Enough said.

Reviewer: TomKaulitzLuvr Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/11 11:29 pm Title: Kinky Kaulitz's

I don't even remember my twisted thoughts that brought this story to life... Hmm...

Author's Response: lol neither do i!

Reviewer: kawaiicoyote Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/11/10 01:59 am Title: First Kiss

*squee* oh now that was just too cute. *snorts* of course Geo knocked someone up XD

Reviewer: VivianneKS Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/12/10 10:51 pm Title: Kinky Kaulitz's

You shouldn't write their moaning, as in
"ahhhh, OH MY GOD, grrrr" that makes it all kinda lame. Write it as in screaming and moaning instead. And then only write "Ahh, mm" and so on now and then. That would have made this story perfect!

Reviewer: Phantomrider92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/28/10 07:32 pm Title: Kinky Kaulitz's

Fucked right into the wall. Lol that was funny xD

Reviewer: 30061995xx Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/23/10 01:23 am Title: First Kiss

Im sorry WHAT TEH FUCK. all you people and your slash/twincest stories. youre just fucked up in the head. :/

Reviewer: liveincolor Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/10/10 11:28 am Title: Kinky Kaulitz's

RAPE oh yeah!:)))x00

Reviewer: liveincolor Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/09/10 03:08 pm Title: Boy Toy

great story!!could you make one where bill is raped by tom?anyway ,you are awesome!congrats.!!!

Reviewer: Luvs_Cherries Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/10 08:27 pm Title: It Takes Six to Cum

omigosh that was just...*flails* That was HOT *flails some more*

Reviewer: tracyjj Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/06/09 10:39 pm Title: It Takes Six to Cum

wow...lol..bubble gum..lol...i like it!!

Reviewer: Velia Mineantea Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/27/09 12:57 am Title: Boy Toy

Wow, it was... strange. I mean, a spirit can really have sex? Was he dreaming? So many questions I got, strange but interesting, and different.

See you later!

Reviewer: QTPieS Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/13/09 08:54 am Title: Don't Jump Butterfly

Amazing!!! kids can be so cruel=[ i love how you actually made up all the bad things, and it wasn't like she was going to jump for no reason. Good job. one of my favourites:D

Reviewer: tokio_hotel_luver Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/09 10:13 am Title: First Kiss

i just love this lol

Reviewer: tokio_hotel_luver Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/09 10:09 am Title: Boy Toy

sad, cute, and kinky at the same time. how do you do it?lol

Reviewer: TomKIzHawt Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/08/09 07:13 pm Title: Kinky Kaulitz's

HOTTTTTTTTTTT

Reviewer: Aylin Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/13/09 08:30 pm Title: It Takes Six to Cum

oh my fucking god holy shit mother fucker!!!
i dont know wut else to say....
*falls out of chair in shock*
its ok..i'm still breathing.

Reviewer: feco Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/13/09 04:23 pm Title: Tomi, I'm scared

So nice =)

Reviewer: myself225 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/29/09 03:31 pm Title: Boy Toy

honestly, i don't understand.. sorry hun

Author's Response: hahhaha no worries :)

Reviewer: Ash1986 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/28/09 04:22 pm Title: First Kiss

that was every good.

Reviewer: Katjana1989 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/26/09 05:36 pm Title: Kinky Kaulitz's

Omg!
I thought they were being raped, but at the end it was just some kind of role-play!
Nice!

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