Date: 08/14/14 09:53 pm Title: Becoming Trapped
OMG!!!! This story is awesome! Please please please update!!!!!! Pwetty pwetty pwease??? 😢
Date: 07/22/12 05:41 pm Title: Becoming Trapped
Oh my god! I HATE you! I decided to read Everything Fades to Black realizing there was a sequel that hadn't been updated in, like, four years, but I read it anyway thinking most authors make a sequel to a COMPLETED story that doesn't end on a cliffie. But Nooooooo not you, you decide to split what would be a perfectly acceptable single story into two and end the first as a MAJOR cliffie so I would HAVE to read the sequel. Thanks, now I love this thing, and it'll probably never be finished.
Seriously, this is a great fic and I really hope you finish it. I would love to find out why Tom really created these personalities to begin with , if Jorg really abused them, and if that's why Simone left him , or if something else happened, what.
Date: 03/04/12 11:37 pm Title: Becoming Trapped
This is so intriguing! Please update?
Date: 12/31/11 07:02 pm Title: Becoming Trapped
wow, this is so weird and confusing but amazing at the same time. It was written really well and i can't wait to find out what happens next, its a shame there are many fics out there like this, please update soon!!! xxxx
Date: 10/18/10 03:30 pm Title: Becoming Trapped
Are you going to complete this? I read the 1st part and the sequel is just as good.
Date: 08/18/10 03:42 am Title: Becoming Trapped
I really hope you finish this story. I would say it was one of my two favourite stories ever. I love it so much and really can't wait to see how it ends
great writing
xx
Date: 08/15/10 12:02 am Title: Becoming Trapped
uh!!! thats it?!?!?! this was so good!!! I hope you update again. this series is so damn full of intrigue. I can't seem to get enough.
Date: 08/14/10 11:35 pm Title: Everything Fades to Black
well I just finishede this and I must say it is very interesting. I started planning on just giving it a chapter or 2 to get me intersted and then It was like...well ok one more chapter...ok one more....and i couldnt stop. it was very good. I'm going to go read the next one now...oh ps...is it too late to get in on one of the Bill and Tom plushies?
Date: 08/03/10 05:14 pm Title: Becoming Trapped
i love it please update
Date: 07/26/10 07:11 am Title: Becoming Trapped
PLEASE PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY!!! I LOVE IT SO MUCH AND IT KILLS ME TO NOT SEE IT BEING FINISH ... I really need the next chapter! great writing
Date: 07/12/10 12:12 am Title: Becoming Trapped
I love this story so much and have been kind of attached to it lately .... it's and amazing piece and I would love to see what happens next
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE
Date: 07/11/10 02:09 pm Title: Becoming Trapped
I love your story so much ... you are an amazing writer and I have read every single chapter of both stories and can't wait for the next ... deffinately one of my favourites out of anything I've ever read
xx
Date: 07/11/10 01:38 pm Title: Everything Fades to Black
this was amazing.... I need more :P
Date: 06/30/10 08:19 pm Title: Everything Fades to Black
More more
Date: 06/30/10 07:50 pm Title: Everything Fades to Black
Sooo wow. I'm confused lol but I love it good work
Date: 05/17/10 02:06 pm Title: Everything Fades to Black
I really liked this story, but I don't think that it was... whattayacallit, thourough. The "Gustav" personality wasn't in it at all, and it seemed kind of choppy-- not very discriptive, and the ending had me at a loss.
I just don't get why you'd end the story here and start a sequal, because really the story isn't finished. There was a beginning and a middle and that was it. The plot was just introduced and BAM the stories over.
IMO, the sequal shouldn't of started here. You should of just continued with the story cuz there's no ending.
Besides all that, it was a very interesting and different story and I really liked it. I just wished it was ended properly.
Author's Response: The sequel will be the end. It explains more of everything. thanks for the review.
Date: 04/22/10 12:40 am Title: Becoming Trapped
*sigh* are you ever going to update this story?
its ok if you never do... so many ppl on this site keep abandoning such great stories.
Author's Response: I am going to try, I've had a lot going on. I just started a new fanfiction archive site. It a multi-fandom site for twincest. Thank you for liking my story. If I ever do finish the next episode will be about cocoon and Judith. rnrn----rnrnwww.tabootwins.com
Date: 03/30/10 05:02 am Title: Becoming Trapped
Finally found this story, i was looking forever it seems... and im totally in love with it! i love how Bill is sorta making Tom want him~ more twin love please? i hope you update this, sugar~ i love you and this story makes my world complete... ~hugs~
Date: 03/01/10 04:26 pm Title: Becoming Trapped
Oh I just read though the first five chapters and desided I have to track it. I read the first part and started bouncing up and down when I read the last chapter. Hehe. It's amazing! I can't wait for more!
Date: 12/29/09 10:07 pm Title: Becoming Trapped
Real great sequel to everything fades into black, really, this is more like some kind of insight writing or something but I quite dig it as it is. Will you update soon?