Date: 03/23/16 01:46 pm Title: Stubble
Can't wait for another chapter!
Date: 04/25/15 11:18 pm Title: Stubble
Oh wow dude...........brilliant. So good. This series is really amazing, like a work of art. I hope you'll write one more about Tom and Bill, but if not, then this is a good ending too. It's amazing how the real Bill isn't even in any of the fics. Only in Tom's mind and memories. I looooooooved this. "You'll have to forgive me, I'm imagining you're a woman again"..... Oh man, that line is just gold. Everything just clicks so perfectly, just in case we hadn't got the picture yet. But oh, Tom's poor girlfriend. Hehe. I was in the mood for something a little "different" tonight, but still twincesty, and this fulfilled all my fantasies. I'm so glad I read this. Thank you for writing. :) :)
Date: 04/25/15 10:51 pm Title: The Right Paint Job
So this one confirms all my suspicions about this series.... Tom's is totally confusing his girlfriend and Bill in his mind. I think he likes it that way too. and trying to relive old memories of Bill with her. When he speaks of "you", it's both. And yet if you pick up the clues, you'll know which one of the two "you"'s it is he's talking about. That's how I'm reading this series so far and I think it's brilliant. Can't wait to find out happened to Bill, or why they're not together. :) :)
Date: 04/25/15 10:33 pm Title: Picnic
Hmmmmmmmm.... This is getting interesting. I love seeing this confused, almost delirious Tom, and you write the ambiguity very well. Can't wait for part 3....... :) :)
Date: 04/25/15 10:22 pm Title: Trigger
I started reading this series tonight cuz I felt like something a little different and you just posted the 4th fic in this series. So I've started from the beginning. This was interesting, in a poetic way. So Tom is fantasizing about Bill while he's with his girlfriend I presume? I think the second-person narration is working in your favor for this plot, cuz as an ardent twincest fan, it helps one read between the lines without being slapped with the plot. I hope that's what's going on at least... I can stomach another 3 Het stories if Tom's heart is really with Bill.......I'm on to the next one. ;)
Date: 04/25/15 07:01 am Title: Stubble
I don't get it please explain it to me :( D: I have read and re read 3 times!! and i still dont get it.:(
Author's Response: Did you read the other 3 parts? The story is confusing, but like I said in the notes, it's kinda meant to be that way. I explain things better in the next 2 chapters, don't worry. By the end, things will be resolved and clear. :)
Date: 04/25/15 01:52 am Title: Stubble
How sad and heartbreaking...
Date: 12/30/10 02:03 am Title: Picnic
Shit... Tom... >.<
Bill, where the HELL are you?!
Author's Response: He'll...maybe come around some time. These stories are just little one-offs in the same universe that hit me out of the blue. I have some ideas for how to connect them but for now, I just wait for a 'trigger' to come to me. :)
Date: 12/30/10 01:58 am Title: Trigger
:/ I hate this girlie I want Bill there again. Just like Tom does :/ beautifully done though :)
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Date: 12/30/10 01:51 am Title: The Right Paint Job
Gosh is there another part where you fix this?! I'm off to find it now! Well, this was gorgeous honey :) bril writing :)
Author's Response: I see you've found the other parts. Not so much fixed, though. lol
Date: 04/17/10 04:53 am Title: The Right Paint Job
...
Author's Response: Well, thanks for reading.
Date: 03/22/10 10:42 pm Title: The Right Paint Job
So heartbreaking. Tom obviously wants to be back with Bill again - no one else will be good enough or come close to what they had. What split them apart, and where is Bill now? Will they ever belong to each other again? So sad that Tom's making do with a surrogate "Bill".
Author's Response: It is sad. :( I wish I could answer all of your questions, but I don't even know what those answers will be. Thanks so much for reviewing, though. Every time I read a new one, I get a little motivation to pick this series back up. :)
Date: 06/07/09 11:09 am Title: Trigger
I just read all of this series and it is sooo painful. Will there be more? I want Tom to go back to Bill so bad since he's obviously unhappy. *sigh*
Author's Response: As of right now, there is another installment in the works. I haven't decided what's going to happen, if anything, so all I'm giving is little glimpses of what Tom's going through. I WANT there to be some kind of closure, but I don't know what that will be yet.rnrnThank you for reading. :)
Date: 01/18/09 07:26 am Title: The Right Paint Job
i didn't read them yet.. that would probably be a good idea :) thanks sweetie
Author's Response: You might want to do that then. You're welcome. :)
Date: 01/17/09 07:02 am Title: The Right Paint Job
i didn't really get this one :s it's probably my fault though.. x
Author's Response: None of that now. The story is a bit confusing. Have you read the other two in the series? That might help. I mean, it would give you some sort of idea as to what's going on. Though, probably not much.rnrnBasically, the stories are glimpsing through Tom's eyes. He's not entirely sure what's going on around him or inside of his head, so neither is the audience.
Date: 01/14/09 08:27 am Title: The Right Paint Job
It's very good.
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Date: 01/14/09 05:16 am Title: The Right Paint Job
Great story :) Tomi is in love with Bill ^^ And uses his girlfriend for it xD Lolz xD
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: Thanks. Oh, Tom's much more than 'in love'. So much more. ;)
Date: 01/14/09 01:49 am Title: The Right Paint Job
Still my favorite of the Triggers. ^_^
In my haste, I push against the wrong hole and you cry out.
LOL. That bad boy.
Author's Response: Not bad, just...confused. ;)
Date: 08/01/08 04:15 pm Title: Picnic
I'm very sorry, but I don't get this fic.. what do you mean with: "without either of you for a while"??
Author's Response: If you read Trigger, then it might make a little more sense. But, really, it's supposed to be confusing because I want the readers to feel the way Tom does as he is lost about what's going on with him as well.rnrnMaybe try reading it again, as well as Trigger, and things might click a little more. ;)
Date: 08/01/08 02:15 am Title: Picnic
o...m...g....I think this has to be like, the most amazing thing I've read in a while. I want to know why Tom feels like he can't tell Bill, and I love how you put it on Tom's point of view. That doesn't usually happen! I love it!
Author's Response: O_O The most amazing thing? No way!rnrnAll will be revealed in due time, I promise.rnrnI'm so very happy that you loved the story! XD