Date: 04/19/15 02:39 am Title: For The First Time
It's really lovely! I love that song, it is one of my favorites
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! It's one of my favourite songs too. :)
Date: 12/01/14 06:46 pm Title: Hilf Mir Fliegen
wow this awsome If i could meet them in person that would be so cool.
Author's Response: It would be so cool to meet them in person. Glad you enjoyed the story and thank you so much for reading and reviewing. :)
Date: 03/08/14 12:24 am Title: 'Til Death Do Us Part
:O wtf !! how! omg! who did it!!?
Author's Response: I guess we'll never know! Thanks for reading and reviewing. :)
Date: 01/05/14 07:49 am Title: Pieces
Maril, your stories are always so beautiful. But one thing I would advice you to is that you write more between Tom and the OFC where they talk together and experience some things, like show how Tom tried to get this girl back and how she at first wouldn't just accept his apology because she'd really felt hurt but she eventually realized he was worth the second chance and then show how their relationship goes on... and like, some nice details in between. This story is so sweet, but it all happens so fast... in my opinion Chris just took him back and I don't think he deserved that. He had to really prove himself in my opinion. At least have them talk some more before she just responds "I love you too" - I know this is a one shot and it's very short, I'd love if it was much longer and there was a lot more talking between one another... and you wrote about how Tom reacted once he saw her for the first time again... stuff like that really makes a worlds difference - to me at least. But still; very cute story!
Author's Response: Thanks Em. I hope my writing has come a bit further since I wrote this story three years ago. At that time I was pumping out one shots for people on THO and probably didn't take the care I should have. I will take your advice to heart and hopefully my writing will improve. :)
Date: 01/04/14 08:33 am Title: Silence Is Golden
I love this story so much. I wish this was long and that there was much more convo/talking between them, but I LOVE this story sooo sooo sooo much.
Author's Response: Awww thank Emily. I'm still trying to come up with an idea for a new story for you. Do you want sweet or porn? lol :)
Date: 11/13/13 05:21 pm Title: Hilf Mir Fliegen
I really liked it!! You made me crie!!
Author's Response: I'm so sorry the story made you cry bit I'm really glad you liked it! Thank you for reading and reviewing. :)
Date: 09/17/13 07:13 pm Title: The Closest To Heaven
aaaaaaaawwwww wat a sweet story , loved it
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)
Date: 07/18/13 10:17 am Title: A Beautiful Lie
I love love love this, Maril.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you do sweetie. I loved writing it. :)
Date: 05/04/13 07:29 pm Title: Hilf Mir Fliegen
Awwwwh this story made happy bubbles form in my tummy. Great story, I love how Bill repented in the end.
Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Oh gosh, I hope it wasn't gas! lol Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to leave a wonderful review. :)
Date: 05/04/13 07:29 pm Title: Hilf Mir Fliegen
Awwwwh this story made happy bubbles form in my tummy. Great story, I love how Bill repented in the end.
Keep up the good work!
Date: 01/09/13 04:37 pm Title: 12 Sexy Days of Christmas
The banner is.......Uhm....No Comment XP
Great and funny story btw!
Author's Response: I did the banner my own self! *sticks chest out proudly* My banners usually suck but I especially like this one. :)rnrnGlad you enjoyed the story. I had such fun writing it. :)
Date: 01/09/13 04:34 pm Title: A Beautiful Lie
I love the part where Em looks diffrent and happy to Marina when she is with Tom. Falling in love really changes you in a beautiful way and makes you happy. If the other person is loving you too of course...
Great story! ( At first I thought it was a song fic about " A Beautiful Lie " from 30 Seconds to Mars :P)
Author's Response: I'll tell you a secret...it was supposed to be a song fic but the story starting morphing into something completely different than the idea I started with. :)rnrnI'm so glad you enjoyed it. :)
Date: 01/08/13 01:20 am Title: 12 Sexy Days of Christmas
This was very sweet. I really enjoyed reading it :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm very glad you enjoyed it. :)
Date: 12/23/12 04:11 pm Title: The Closest To Heaven
(((o(*'3*)o))) *dances like Bill in the Jumbie video* Loooooooooovvvve It!
Author's Response: I'm so happy you enjoyed this story. Thank you so much for the review. :)
Date: 12/23/12 04:07 pm Title: Ticket To Anywhere
Alcohol ruins families... /(;_;)
Author's Response: Sadly, you are so right. Thanks for reading. :)
Date: 11/27/12 10:10 am Title: Hilf Mir Fliegen
Amazing love it :) Thank you for writing this.
Author's Response: Awww thank you very much for both reading and the lovely review. :)
Date: 11/14/12 09:29 am Title: Love The Way You Lie
This should be an interesting long/short story. I'm currently in love with this song so I'm glad you wrote this story. I really like it. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm so glad you liked the story. I love the song too! :)
Date: 10/28/12 03:03 pm Title: Silent Healer
it`s good that she was able to get her freedom . don`t like how her father mbemanded Tom to marry her and blackmail them , but so glad they were happy together .
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. I wasn't fussy about her dad in this story that's for sure. :)
Date: 10/27/12 04:58 pm Title: Time Of Your Life
oh no , hope they don`t quit anytime soon , will miss them . though they deserve a good like with significate others . good story thanks
Author's Response: I hope they don't either. Thanks for reading and reviewing. :)
Date: 10/27/12 04:45 pm Title: Hello Fascination
nice story , really liked it . Tom likes to drive fast and this is the story for him . LOL
Author's Response: Thank you. I know Tom likes to drive fast so this was a perfect fit. :)