Date: 11/22/10 10:44 pm Title: Anemone
I think you're right. Without the original (which I haven't read), the story is a bit confusing and, unfortunately, that detracts from the story here. I never quite knew what was going on or what was supposed to be happening. I don't know if the end is happy, sad, or both. And the love triangle is a bit odd. But, I appreciate the fact that it is well-written and that the emotions of the story are very raw (to the point that they're on the edge of sanity) between the three guys.
Date: 11/18/10 06:45 pm Title: Anemone
This was beautiful and tragic and BEAUTIFUL! I loved it, I think it was a wonderful remix, and I liked how you incorporated the flashbacks, they scared me a little! Which is a good thing 'cause it means your writing was awesome :D You have me shivers! This is a REALLY good entry, your writing was wonderful and the story was wonderful and it was all kinds of wonderful, even if poor Bill and Georg aren't so wonderful ;___; poor guys, and Tom too. Aw, lovely!
Date: 11/18/10 01:28 am Title: Anemone
This is a really different take on the remixed story and such an original idea! Very well written, too. I very much enjoyed this! :D
Date: 11/17/10 03:43 pm Title: Anemone
Oh, this was really intresting to read! I liked how you twisted it around, gave the plot of my fic an whole other meaning. And I'm soo glad you chose to rewrite this one, I wrote it to be one of my three fics to chose from in the first place so I'm glad you did!
Date: 11/17/10 03:30 pm Title: Anemone
Woah....This was really good! I liked this take on the story! Best of luck in the contest!
Date: 11/17/10 03:27 pm Title: Anemone
Wow. That was intense. I haven’t read the original so I was a bit confused at first, but I think you did a good job at explaining things enough in the remix. I think this was very well written, it was beautiful and heartbreaking to read. However, I didn’t expect the ending, at all. It would probably make more sense if I read the original. I a big fan of twins and happy endings, so reading this ending made me really sad. Bill said that nothing can compare to Tom so I guess they won’t ever be truly happy... :( I feel so bad for them. I enjoyed this remix overall, you did a good job :)