Date: 02/14/11 03:17 pm Title: "There. Just enjoy your Skittles."
wow!!! donīt give up on it it sounds too be an amazing story specially since this chapter!
Date: 04/22/09 02:17 am Title: "Tomi.. I think we should go before we get hit."
PS- forgot 2 mention an xtra idea- I really like ya titles 4 each chapter! Kick-ass cynical&dry, but ingenious! u certainly've got an awesome sense of humour, entertainin' us at every chance u get! fantastic, keep dat up!! por favor!! see, now ya readerz r askin'&pleadin' u! my, how da tablez hav turnd... apologies 4 da brief wierdness, I'm just slightly odd, as well, more like insane-in-the-membrane type! eh, well, what can I do?! got these tremendous fics dat compensate...
Author's Response: haha thank you. actually, what i put in my fics is a lot less humorous than what i actually like, and i've been trying to put more funny into it. i think Tom's point of view is a lot more funnier than Bill's. but anyways, thanks so much for the reviews.
Date: 04/22/09 02:00 am Title: "There. Just enjoy your Skittles."
U're very welcome, but u dservd dat entirely, no gratuitous flattery or anythang, was just bein' honest&u askd so sweetly 4 dat feedback&didn't want u ditchin' da story! thanx 4 da Tom point-of-view switch, gettin' sum of his impressions! ending of dis chapter promises yummyness 2 ensue wit da... person observin' 'em 2 hotttt twinz! again, a genuinely betta approach than seein' mushy-mushy, seedy romancin' 4 da otha 2! also, u know ya punk trivia, nice choice wit da sex pistols, they'r indeed da ultimate representatives&da true forerunnerz of it all! hope dis review was somewhat soothin' 4 da soul&sanity! by all means, don't allow these 2 b affectd in da slightest, cause bizzare, u'r good, just da right amount...:) no doubt!!
Author's Response: my god, shadow you are the best reviewer i have. thank you for all of the insight on how each chapter is and yeah. you da besssttt, home skillet.
Date: 04/21/09 10:54 pm Title: "There. Just enjoy your Skittles."
This is really good. And Jett looks rather interesting in that picture from that link last chapter.
Author's Response: thank you. and you know, i agree. he's actually the enitre reason i wrote this story. i saw his picture and thought: "oh my god, that's a great idea" and so yeah.
Date: 04/21/09 08:25 pm Title: "There. Just enjoy your Skittles."
eeh I dont like the last paragraph ... its mean, theya re lovers or what?? no no... Is like Bill was the boyfriend no the brother x.x
Author's Response: well, he's the brother and the sort of boyfriend. they're secret lovers, you know? but also, Tom is angry at Bill in the brotherly sense because this was their day together, and Jett came and ruined it, in Tom's opinion.rn
Date: 04/20/09 12:24 pm Title: "Tomi.. I think we should go before we get hit."
Ohlalala, I'm excited for this.
:)
Author's Response: yay, thanks. i am too, actually.
Date: 04/20/09 02:41 am Title: "What the hell is Skull Fetish?!"
so, then don't quit! If we're reading both chapterz, we obviously like where it's goin'&what u're writin'! By da way, do any of the 'punks' manage 2 sway Tom's opinion of 'em, perhaps one also catches his eye?!... I'm kiddin', it's just u've made him so adamant, skulkin'&all, I mean he's 'gangsta' afta all! well, respect 2 u 4 dis original&new approach 2 Bill's preferences, not only effeminate guyz, like da usual story threadz! U chose 2 go wit sum ragingly unconventional rebels! u know what? inspird! bsides, Bill's style's not that far away from it eitha, but a combo T.vs/&punk would just b xtremely interestin' 2... C'mon, keep updatin'! I'm curious 2 bout what's in store! fic's dfinitely got potential...
Author's Response: thank you so so so so so SOOO much for your input. i mean, i know if people read it then they like it, but i like reviews so i know what i need to fix, or suggestions, etc. they keep me inspired.
rnand you know.. that's not too bad of an idea. i'll have to see what my mind can conjure up for Tomi.
rni'm glad you like the idea. i thought it was pretty different too, actually. it makes me happy.
Date: 04/20/09 02:33 am Title: "What the hell is Skull Fetish?!"
*raises hand* i like it
Author's Response: awe thanks :]