Date: 06/24/09 09:41 pm Title: The Runaways
i hope jorg doesnt find them ever!
i hate that man!
Date: 06/22/09 05:51 am Title: The Rescue
OMG the suspense is killing me. Is Mrs. Hale really that nice? I don't know why but I don't trust her... she seems too nice and nosy like she could be the one informing Jorg.
Date: 06/22/09 05:36 am Title: The Feeling
Wow, well done. This chapter had my heart pounding like crazy. Poor Bill, I hope they some how figure out that Jorg has him.
Date: 06/22/09 05:16 am Title: The Call
"Unbeknownst to them, Jorg was across the street at the hardware store, picking up some items as he talked to Andreas. He clutched his phone in his hand as he sneered, clearly seeing his nephew talking to his son in the diner. Andreas was in on it…the blond was definitely going on his list of enemies. But a smug smile then crossed his face. He knew where Bill was. The teen was within his reach again, and he didn’t even know it…-This part really scared the shit out of me. I could picture it perfectly and it's like watching a scary movie.
Date: 06/21/09 12:53 pm Title: The Rescue
That was entirely too easy. Easy is bad, because it doesn't take long for the world to cave in around your ears. Don't get me wrong, I'm glad they got Bill and Kale, but Jorg is bound to make another appearance. If he does, they should just kill him off and hide the body. No one would really miss him.
Loving the story. Great plot, great characters. Like usual.
Date: 06/19/09 10:39 pm Title: The Rescue
omg that was so awesome!!!! =D
Date: 06/19/09 10:37 pm Title: The Rescue
oh my gosh, anony this is amazing!!!! UPDATE MORE SOON!
I think this story should be featured! it is so original!
Author's Response: awww thanks hon. -huggles- ich liebe dich
Date: 06/19/09 09:56 pm Title: The Rescue
Yes yes! more sooooo goodd
Date: 06/19/09 08:39 pm Title: The Rescue
Ooohh! I'm so freaking happy Bill's her "dad" now. I'm so glad Tomi's going with him, but I really do hope they come back.
Date: 06/19/09 08:39 pm Title: The Rescue
get them outta there! hurry
Date: 06/19/09 07:43 pm Title: The Rescue
Yay for Andreas!!!! He came to the resuce....now just gotta do something about Jorg, starting to become a tad irritating!
Date: 06/19/09 04:12 pm Title: The Rescue
Andreas is awesome, and so is Tomi of course. It must have been bad for Bill to start stuttering again.
Date: 06/19/09 03:45 pm Title: The Rescue
aww=] update soon plz=] thx
Date: 06/19/09 01:32 pm Title: The Rescue
NEEEEXT PLEASEE OMG!! SO AWESOME *-*
Date: 06/19/09 12:26 pm Title: The Rescue
wooooooooooooooooot He's rescued!
Date: 06/19/09 12:26 pm Title: The Rescue
wooooooooooooooooot He's rescued!
Date: 06/19/09 12:08 pm Title: The Rescue
aww this is awesome.
keep going
Date: 06/19/09 11:40 am Title: The Rescue
Aw, I hope things work out in the end, something tells me Jorg is hot on their trail already....well now that Bills gone again that is.
Date: 06/19/09 11:07 am Title: The Rescue
*singing* We are off to the road, running away for all i know, we will be executed... If the gangstah runs and falls...
Soooorryyyyy! lol, great chapter as always! I loved it... KEEP GOING! DON'T EVER STOPPPPPP!