Date: 04/23/09 06:25 pm Title: Cause I'm Broken
Oh shit stupid Tom he needs to get the f over his fear of bill leaving, Im pretty sure bill would never leave again if they were together.
Date: 04/23/09 05:44 pm Title: Cause I'm Broken
Yeah, The G's!
And things better be fixed in the next chappie!!!! I mean, Gusti is almighty!!!!
Date: 04/23/09 05:18 pm Title: Cause I'm Broken
I love how his girl friends kinda stepped in when he began to flounder. They are MADE of osm!
I DON'T LIKE SARAH! SHE NEEDS TO HAVE THE EVER-LOVING CRAP BEAT OUT OF HER!
I liked how Geo man-handled Bill. It fit in perfectly with everyone's quirky personalities. And he really is the strong sensitive type. *swoon* I love his character in this.
I love how Gusti made it sound all, like, mysterious when he was leading Tom away. And then he nearly SHAT himself! That made me laugh.
Have I mentioned how STUPID Tom is lately?
Date: 04/23/09 05:11 pm Title: SCHREI!
FOXTROT! UNIFORM! CHARLIE! KILO! I love that song, but I'm sure you're aware of that.
Boys are sooooooo stupid! Thick headed and stubborn and stupid. OK, rant done for now...
I love the chapter, it helped to put things into perspective, a little bit. They're both hurting, but Tom's a jackass and Bill's too fragile.
And I always knew Gusti could pull himself together if the occasion called for it.
Date: 04/23/09 12:48 pm Title: Cause I'm Broken
AWWWW please let them work it out and be together again, they deserve happiness...
Date: 04/23/09 12:20 pm Title: Cause I'm Broken
Ooooh, more, plz!!
Date: 04/23/09 11:47 am Title: Cause I'm Broken
fiuuu, alright just finished reading offline and now these first chapters of offline 2.
Amazing job girls! you two rock!
poor bill ,poor tom, dunno what to say..
I need to know what is gonn happen between them, please update super-fast ^^
hugs;]
Date: 04/23/09 11:22 am Title: Senior Year!
Ahh!
Now I want to see what happens!!!
You have me hooked already, update soon if you can (:
Date: 04/23/09 10:51 am Title: Cause I'm Broken
0.0 NOOOOOOOOO DON'T STOP THERE!!!!! GIVE ME MORE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wnat to kick Tom in the as! Relly good chapter give me more soon!
Date: 04/23/09 10:22 am Title: Cause I'm Broken
wow.... lOVE IT!! update plz!
Date: 04/23/09 09:39 am Title: Cause I'm Broken
O.O now i have my heart in my hand until i read how that little chat is gonna work!!!
Date: 04/23/09 06:32 am Title: Cause I'm Broken
.....evil cliffie.
Hate those!
Date: 04/22/09 07:51 pm Title: SCHREI!
dman! stubborn, stubborn boys.
maybe bill's friends will help with the relationship...?
Date: 04/22/09 04:24 pm Title: SCHREI!
Never would say I want to smack those two as much as I do now! WHY are boys so STUBBORN??
Date: 04/22/09 01:57 am Title: SCHREI!
oh the drama
me like
awesome chappy
=]
Date: 04/21/09 08:24 pm Title: Senior Year!
i like it (:
Date: 04/21/09 08:01 pm Title: SCHREI!
Why does Tom have to be a typical boy and be so thick headed? Not that Bill's any better, but yeah . . . Can I kick them in the shins?
Date: 04/21/09 08:00 pm Title: SCHREI!
-sighs- dammit Tom! atop being so damn stubborn. Bill you too!
Date: 04/21/09 06:22 pm Title: SCHREI!
awww i hope everything gets better!
Date: 04/21/09 04:44 pm Title: SCHREI!
^_^! An update!
But, poor Billa. D;
I hope it all works out... ]: