Date: 12/21/10 04:51 am Title: The Girls Help
D: Ahh my godd! make another chapter.. or a few! pleaseeeeee! pleasseee! pleassssssee!?
your an amzzing writer.. D: you have to continue this.. lol.
Date: 12/20/10 09:12 pm Title: The Girls Help
omg whyd u abandon it D:
Date: 09/24/10 10:22 pm Title: The Girls Help
In all honesty i was really hopping you would finish this story for real or maybe add in a "Offline.v.3," But it is your story so i respect your decisons in your writing. You are an amazingly epic writer and i read every story you write :)
Date: 08/12/10 02:58 pm Title: The Girls Help
im going to kill u guys
continue this plz dont abandoned PLEASE!
Date: 06/16/10 06:21 pm Title: The Girls Help
ANONY u cant abandon this story!!!!!!!! If you continue, i'll ask Gusti to give u cookies n cakes n ill buy u Skittles!!!! Please!!!! *billpout*
Date: 06/09/10 05:37 am Title: The Girls Help
awww D:
cant wait for more!
Its really awesome!
xoxo
Date: 03/28/10 11:34 am Title: The Girls Help
Really wish there was more on this. Like Billa get a text from Tom that he and Sarah broke up or smting. But really good, just sad it isn't more ._.
Date: 02/02/10 03:50 pm Title: The Girls Help
intersting... there more?
Author's Response: no, there's not. that's why it says that it's abandoned/on hiatus.
Date: 01/23/10 09:31 pm Title: The Girls Help
omg... i don't think i reviwed this before but i like it... i hope that sometime tom and bill will be able to patch themselves together and be happy
Date: 10/09/09 07:28 pm Title: The Girls Help
i like this, read the first one too of course. i couldn't stop laughing when i read one of Bill's girls was named Thea; that's my name xD love it.
I love the maniac Gustav is.
Date: 08/09/09 06:49 pm Title: The Girls Help
Aww nice story! I loved Offline and I already love this one too! (:
Can't believe I didn't see it earlier, though. Tsk shame on me xD
Aber you write really well and I'm waiting for more! :D
Date: 08/09/09 02:11 pm Title: The Girls Help
damn it to hell.
TOM AND BILL CAN NOT DO THIS TO EACH OTHER! they are using each other for the wrong reasons....and is awful. they obviously know they still completely love each other. so what is the big fucking hold-up here???? i really wish they would just drop everything and realize how STUPID they are being.
hahaha at least the ending made me smile. those girls sound like really good friends for Bill.
eeekkkk i really need more of this!! PLEASE????
Date: 08/05/09 11:25 am Title: The Girls Help
wow, this is soooo good fic! i've laughed very much and i think my abs are aching now :----D i love georg, he's so adorable b29;
i hate sarah. i wanna punch her for cheating on tom (tom can cheat anyone he wants, not bill though).
will u update soon? and plz, more g/g? :------D
and yes, i posted a comment to bill's blog like 5 minutes ago but i promised to review. :-----D and 'cause i'm a terrorist, i terrorize Offline in all possible ways.
now i'm gonna go and steal gustav's cookies >>:----D muahahahahaha.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you like it. I hope to have an update soon-ish. ^^
Date: 08/03/09 05:12 pm Title: The Girls Help
OMG! I just want More!! lol.. Updates? Soon? PLEASE!?!
Date: 07/21/09 05:17 am Title: The Girls Help
oh i missed this story... so hilarious...
Date: 07/17/09 09:01 pm Title: The Girls Help
So I had to re-read the whole previous story and this one in order to review it. Again, I do absolutely love it.
First thing: way to many new characters introduced all at once with no real description: I iz confuzzled.
Second: everyone seems to have the same voice and speech pattern. Remeber that speech is part of your identity and is different for every person. While there are small differences, not really enough.
Thrid: try and vary your verbs. You use 'said' an awful lot. Just one of those small things that makes a big difference :)
I (honestly) hope you put an update on this soon.
Date: 07/09/09 06:07 pm Title: The Girls Help
wow. the girls seem a little aggressive. Love Bill's blog. Hopefully everything will get better, right?
Date: 07/09/09 01:53 am Title: Repairing the Broken Link
You know, I always listen to music when I read, especially songs that go really well with what I'm reading. I must say that from the time that Tom walks up those stairs to when the POV changes to the G's, the song All I Need by Within Temptation is the best fit on the planet! Especially the line, "Don't tear me down, what's left of me, make my heart a better place." and "You've opened a door now don't let it close." I recommend u check out the song.
Author's Response: Hmmm...thanks for the suggestion. I'll so go check that out when I get the chance. THanks for that. :D
Date: 07/08/09 06:56 pm Title: The Girls Help
Good that they both saw it wasn't working! ^_^ Awww, Bill has the best friends!
Date: 07/07/09 12:23 am Title: The Girls Help
Woot! I'm so loving those girls! *cough* So...
The update was osm! I love this story, it's so full of angsty goodness and cookies!