Date: 04/22/09 07:15 am Title: A Moment in Time
...I’m not taking him away...I’m giving him a choice... - aaaawwww yje right of all freeborn men ^___^
*loves... u really should do a sequal... or just continue from here... that was amazing... (and i don't even like history!) ^____^
Author's Response: Not like history? Blasphemy! But seriously - I'm very pleased you liked it in that case, thank you!
Date: 04/20/09 05:13 pm Title: A Moment in Time
Wow! God, I'm speechless! One of the best stories EVER! Everything is just perfect, from the plot to the way you work with the characters and the settings, and it's just - WOW! Please, PLEASE continue this, a favorite like this just can't be ignorerd! I would be criminal ;)
Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you so much. I'm afraid I'm not likely to continue it, but thank you so much ♥
Date: 04/18/09 07:52 pm Title: A Moment in Time
Ahh!
I love this.
Where would we be without history?
This one was amazing.
AND THE WAY IT ENDED!
It makes you kindahh guess
but... you already know the answer
(:
Loved the storyy
Author's Response: Thank you!! So very pleased you enjoyed it, and that you liked the ending! ^_^
Date: 04/18/09 05:44 pm Title: A Moment in Time
History geek? Nooo,come on ;)Facts and history only give the story credability,dear:) I really hope you will turn this into a series. This was well written and engaging. I really want to know how the path of Bill and Tom turn out.
Author's Response: I'm a proud history geek! Thank you!
Date: 04/18/09 05:02 pm Title: A Moment in Time
That was awesome! I loved the open-ended ending. Haha, that sounded funny. ANYWAY, that was one whopper of a chapter. So good, though. I can't imagine Bill going for some reason, I can't.
Author's Response: I'm kind of glad of that in a way, that you can't see Bill going - proves that the open ending was right because people can draw their own conclusions. Thank you!
Date: 04/18/09 03:22 pm Title: A Moment in Time
Haha, I love history, too. ♥
And I really, really liked this. So...*cough*....we get more, right?
I'd love you...FOREVER. *begs*
Author's Response: ♥ Loving history is the win! So glad you liked it, thank you ^_^ I'm not sure about more for this verse, but there'll likely be more period fic. I'm a dork like that.
Date: 04/18/09 02:23 pm Title: A Moment in Time
This story was great. I really liked it; it was so dofferent from the others and I loved the dialogues! You described Tom's chacater wonderfully and the way he interacted with Bill totally amazed me =). I think you're a great writer! Going saight on my faves!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked the dialogues - I was worried I was getting a bit too geeky with the content, so I'm really pleased. Thank you for your review!!
Date: 04/18/09 01:43 pm Title: A Moment in Time
omg such a great story
i'm keeping an eye on u from now on
i like passionate and powerful Tom
and i like history too
more stories to come
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked passionate and powerful Tom - it was difficult to try and keep him 'in character' when he's nearly a decade older, with totally different life experiences and a different context, so I'm glad it seems to have gone down so well. Thank you!
Date: 04/18/09 12:44 pm Title: A Moment in Time
This story was amazing, and so well-written. I'm a history fan so this was perfect for me. You obviously hae a great deal of knowledge on the subject and the way you portrayed and wrote both Bill and Tom's characters was amazing. I'm hoping you continue with another part of this story because it was incredible, and their love scene, left me speechless it was just perfect. Great job.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much ^_^ I'm really glad that it all came together so well for you, and thank you for such a lovely review.
Date: 04/18/09 11:27 am Title: A Moment in Time
Wow, this is really good. You had the vocabulary that matched perfectly with the scenery. They were all in character. I mean Bill was obediant and cute & Tom smart and witty. Dude thanks so much for writing this . It had so much substance I had to stop everything to read this. I lost 40 minutes reading this but I don't regret not even one second. Man I'm getting rusty, I must read more TH fics , starting with yours . I hope you have more.
Soda.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this! I'm glad you thought they were in character since that did feel like a bit of a challenge with the period, and quite proud to have snagged your attention for 40 minutes. Hope you enjoy the other fics and thank you again ^_^
Date: 04/18/09 11:09 am Title: A Moment in Time
I loved it ^^ it kinda reminds me of all the historical romance novels i read when i was younger, but much less ridiculous and waaaaaay hotter ;)
Author's Response: Lol, thank you! I'm glad you liked it so much.
Date: 04/18/09 10:42 am Title: A Moment in Time
you're amazing! oh my god. it was so intense. i was 6 inches away from the screen the whole time. lol i never thought history could be so interesting. i wanna know what happens next, though. i think you should keep going with it!
awesome job!!
Author's Response: I think your review just made my day - I'm so glad if I can make history interesting for people reading this. Thank you so much ^_^
Date: 04/18/09 10:18 am Title: A Moment in Time
Oh my god!
I loved it!
Your descriptions are so well done, the care you had with the way your characters are talking to each other (sometimes you read a story in wich Bill says what's up in like ancient rome, yeah that's weird)
The way Tom is always looking at him, the intensity of it all...
It killed me!
Please continue, I think this would do a great chaptered story.
Good Work!
Author's Response: Thank you very much - I'm really glad the intensity came across so well. This is meant to stand alone, so I won't be continuing it, but I am so pleased you enjoyed it so much ^_^
Date: 04/18/09 08:01 am Title: A Moment in Time
*___* Soooo good. It was refreshing to see a story with a highly political background in this fanficdom. You've dealt with it better than most of the stories I've come across, mostly in other fandoms. But because of that background, it's appropriate that the story contains just what it does, and ends where it does, because the background is so complicated that it would be difficult to do more. Kudos for a very enjoyable and well-done story! Hoping for more and more stories from you. =D
Author's Response: It is a fabulously complicated political background and I love it - I'm glad you thought it was handled well in the fic. This era was my specialist subject at university, so that may explain why lol. Thank you so much for such a lovely review.
Date: 04/18/09 05:46 am Title: A Moment in Time
There is nothing wrong with us history geeks. xD
I loved reading this story! =)
*faves*
Author's Response: Not at all, history rocks! Thank you!
Date: 04/18/09 01:55 am Title: A Moment in Time
Fantastic story. I could feel Bill's reaction to seeing Tom and vice versa. I knew then that this would be no ordinary encounter between them and I was right. I LOVED how in his own way, he was trying to make Bill see things from a different pov and that moment at the end just made me smile.
Beautiful story really. Going on my faves!
Author's Response: Thank you! ^_^ I'm so glad you enjoyed this because I loved writing it, especially all Tom's attempts to show Bill a new pov. Thanks again!