Date: 05/15/09 09:39 pm Title: Laying the cards out: The Second
Oh tom-shakes head-
Author's Response: I know. Silly Tom. Silly Bill.
Date: 05/15/09 07:37 pm Title: Laying the cards out: The Second
What the fuck? I was all in the groove of the story, flying along, and then BAM! There was no more... I need an update as quickly as possible, please...
What the hell is Bill's problem? Slamming the door in the middle of a movie like that is totally rude and unacceptable! lol
Author's Response: I know! He probably made everyone miss the most important part of the WHOLE movie!
Date: 05/15/09 06:43 pm Title: Laying the cards out: The Second
:O *stares at screen* BILL GET YOUR ASS BACK IN THAT APARTMENT AND HAS MAKEUP SEX RIGHT NAO!!!
Author's Response: Best. Review. Ever.
Date: 05/15/09 05:36 pm Title: Laying the cards out: The Second
...Whitney's question made me smile. And I think Tomi has some splainin to do!!!
Author's Response: Whitney is beginning to be my favorite person. She's fun to write, which is why I'm starting to shove her in a bit more :) Tomi has a lot of 'splainin to do! (That reminded me of Rugrats!)
Date: 05/15/09 05:33 pm Title: Good Morning, Manhattan!
Agree! ^^
I think Bill wants everything to work out his way, but he's not thinking of what he did to Tom long term. But I'm sure if he stops and really thinks about it, he'll get where Tom's coming from.
Date: 05/15/09 05:33 pm Title: Laying the cards out: The Second
ooh, good updates!! I like the development with Samantha. keep up the great work!
Author's Response: I really liked writing Samantha's part of the story. I like giving people another view of the situation. Two parts of the story down, one more left :)
Date: 05/15/09 05:32 pm Title: Laying the cards out: The Second
Uh oh. Drama is a comin. :D love your story!
Author's Response: Maybe, maybe ;) I love your reviews!
Date: 05/15/09 04:33 pm Title: Laying the cards out: The Second
"Why don't you just tell her that you don't want to be with me because you don't trust me and you're afraid I'm going to go back to Samantha?"
OMG OMG...as much as I love Bill...I truly understand Tom...for self experience I think Tom is being wise and obviously that kinda hurt Bill wich proves that karma is a bitch!
Don't get me wrong...I don't want to see Bill hurt, but I just think that it's the way life is...you just can't throw your life for anyone else!! YOu have to look for yourself because if you don't anyone's gonna do that and that's exactly what Tom is doing right now!!
Gosh! You're an incredible writer and I truly want you to know how much I love this...I loves the detail on trying to show people's part...
Tom should definitely stand in this decition...after all it is true...Samantha and Bill haven't goten everything figured out yet...there's so mucho to get over...including his trust in Bill...it's hard I know but...If Bill was in love with Sam and then fell for Tom and cheated on her...how could Tom not think that Bill's gonna do the same to him??
Ok...I started the rambling again...sorry!!
Update soon!! :D
Author's Response: I love your rambling reviews, so there's no need to apologize :) They're amazing. I'm glad you understand why Tom isn't so quick to forgive Bill and start a relationship with him, though. I don't want to give too much away about how Tom feels since it's going to be in the next chapter, but he does feel like since Bill fell for him while in love with Samantha, what's going to stop him from doing the same to him? I'm glad you like the story, though, and understand all of the emotional pain both of them are going through :D
Date: 05/15/09 04:17 pm Title: Laying the cards out: The Second
I'm not sure who to feel worse for...Bill or Tom.
I think I'm going for Tom. :(
Author's Response: I could never pick since I'm emotionally feeling the pain of the both of them :( But, I suppose Tom does have the worse end of the stick.
Date: 05/15/09 03:00 pm Title: Laying the cards out: The Second
oh....
Author's Response: Ooooooh :)
Date: 05/15/09 01:54 pm Title: Laying the cards out: The Second
oh lordy. and here i was hoping that they'd be able to deal with this WITHOUT fighting xD
Author's Response: What fun would that be :P?
Date: 05/15/09 12:37 pm Title: Laying the cards out: The Second
temper temper.
Thank you for posting so quick
Author's Response: Bill can be bitchy. And you are very, very welcome :)
Date: 05/15/09 12:24 pm Title: Laying the cards out: The Second
Poor Tom, doesn't even relaize what he walked into.
Author's Response: He might think Bill is worth it. No one knoooows just yet :)
Date: 05/15/09 12:03 pm Title: Laying the cards out: The Second
oO whoa, suprise at the end o:
Like I've said before, I'm basically in love with this story.. Hope you update soon (:
Author's Response: Again, I'm glad you love the story :) I'll start the next chapter sometime tonight or tomorrow, depending on what I get roped into doing this evening. Hopefully the next chapter will end with a better surprise!
Date: 05/15/09 11:44 am Title: Laying the cards out: The Second
"What the fuck just happened?" - Same question. *confused*
Anyway... loved it as usual. :)
Author's Response: All will be explained :) I'm glad you loved it :D
Date: 05/15/09 11:39 am Title: Laying the cards out: The Second
Omg :O Tom better make up for this one O.o
Can't wait till the next chapter :D
Author's Response: Both Bill and Tom need to make up for it. But, we all know they will :D
Date: 05/15/09 10:39 am Title: Laying the cards out: The Second
bill has a point there
but tomi is hurt too
awwww alaric is the sweetest baby in the whole world
Author's Response: I could imagine Bill producing the most well behaved infant. I'm not sure why, but I always have.
Date: 05/15/09 10:22 am Title: Laying the cards out: The Second
Boy, don't you just that??? When some shit happens around you and you weren't privy to it except to watch the pissyness play out and you're just *blinkblink*. I SO went through that about 3 days ago. UGH.
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaanyway, beautiful chapter, except that last part at the end there that made me want to slap the both of them!
I can understand why Tom feels that way, i do, since the basis of all relationships is love and trust. Bill proved he couldn't be trusted ONCE though, because he lied, but he was honestly sorry about it and eventually came clean and ready to accept Tom in his life.
But he should also take into consideration that Tom been willing to give him the world but he chose to continue with his deception, so that trust will take a while. He obviously wants to be with Tom and vice versa, so maybe the two of them just need to take it one day at a time just like they are. I dunno!
Author's Response: Bill has to take the consequences for his actions, starting with the long wait for Tom's trust in him to be restored :) It's going to be a long haul, but, hopefully they'll both stay in it forever. One day at a time seems to be working good for them so far!
Date: 05/15/09 12:23 am Title: Thump.
um, just one question. did tom really redo his hair?
Date: 05/15/09 12:07 am Title: Laying the cards out.
Uh-ooooh...
This is going to be interesting...
Author's Response: :D