Date: 05/14/09 01:19 am Title: Laying the cards out.
angsty. i feel like your actual writing has been better, lke the background if that makes sense, but i love the plot line and i'll still loyally wait for the next update *snuggles alaric* great name btw
Author's Response: Thank you :) That's such a compliment, so that makes me feel a lot better. I'm glad you're going to be watching for my next update :D And thank you! I love the name Alaric.
Date: 05/14/09 01:16 am Title: Laying the cards out.
I feel sorry of all of them there. Poor Billa, poor Tomi, poor Samantha and even poor Alaric; cause he has to grow up without both parents... And i know what does that feel... :/
Anyway; I loved it as always. The end made me wait for the next chap! And PLEASE Update soon! (a)
Author's Response: I know how it feels not having both parents, as well. It sucks a lot. I'm glad you loved this chapter, though :) I'm about to start writing the next!
Date: 05/13/09 10:10 pm Title: Always.
ohhh, it seems like things are going to get better.. -crosses fingers-
I liked Bill's little er..speech about what happened
and how he feels about Tom
I really felt the emotions.
Author's Response: That was a hard part to write. I rewrote it about a thousand times, but that finally sounded perfect. I'm glad you could feel the emotions. I was afraid it would come off as a forced apology or something along those lines.
Date: 05/13/09 09:45 pm Title: Are u gay?
omg! what a great, one lined, email! wow, just that one line, sparks so many emotions and possibilites, a great little cliffy!
Date: 05/13/09 07:08 pm Title: Always.
No it wasnt a sucky chapter i like it. I'm happy they end up tgother
Author's Response: They haven't ended up together just yet ;)
Date: 05/13/09 04:37 pm Title: Always.
This chapter didn't suck!
Really, it was really, really good:D
Author's Response: Thank you :) I'm happy you liked it!
Date: 05/13/09 03:51 pm Title: Always.
This is just so adorable. I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm so glad they're speaking again!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it :) I'm happy that they're speaking again, too. If I didn't write this chapter the way I did, I'd have about another five chapters of just Bill wallowing in self pity. So, I'm very glad I decided to stick with this chapter and I'm very glad you liked it!
Date: 05/13/09 03:26 pm Title: Always.
aww the ending was UBER cute :D:D:D:D
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! I was afraid no one would :( so it's nice to see that plenty of people did!
Date: 05/13/09 02:43 pm Title: Always.
JIJIJI XD *Evil smile*
I like it so muxx!!!
Author's Response: I can always count on your reviews to make me feel better :D
Date: 05/13/09 11:29 am Title: Always.
Ohnononono! This was a fantastic chapter and I'm glad that Bill and Tom got to talk and to each see the other's side. It's not perfect, but it's a start and hopefully, their future together!
*huggles* Hope your day got better.
Author's Response: My day ended up getting better once I went out and came home to a bunch of lovely reviews, so thank you for adding to that :) I'm glad you liked the chapter, though!
Date: 05/13/09 09:52 am Title: Alaric Thomas.
ok
this was stupid !!!
sorry but ....i dint like it
she wasnt this kind of person and you just twisted her personality in this chapter .....to end the story happily maybe ....
anyway
you are amazing writer you kept me on edge till this chapter ....and i was shocked at how this chapter ended
i know how it feels like to go through this kind of relationships ...it hurts
especially if theres no one you can blame ......
Author's Response: Her personality has only changed due to being hurt. The story hasn't ended here and it may not end happily for Samantha or Bill. I had no intention on making it seem like I twisted her personality to try and make Bill and Tom happy together and I'm very sorry that it came off like that :( I didn't want it to. I probably should have included a note with the story that this was only my way of introducing Tom back into the story, since if it continued on, it would have just been Bill and Samantha in a harmful relationship. I wasn't expecting many people to enjoy this chapter (I was shocked at the pleasant reviews!), but I thank you for your honesty :)
Date: 05/13/09 09:09 am Title: Office Visit.
oh god A BABY??!!!!
POOR Samantha AND THE BABY !!!
OH
you know i really wish if you didnt make Samantha such a sweetheart and nice person i wouldnt have felt this bad for her if she was a mean character
WHY ?!!!
Date: 05/13/09 08:26 am Title: Always.
Weey can't wait! :D Your story is so freaking amazing! ^^
Author's Response: :D Aww danke!
Date: 05/13/09 08:26 am Title: Always.
I thought this was amazing, really, I love it. I'm so in love with this story, so glad I found it. Hope you update soon.
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much. I'm glad you found it, too and I'm glad you love it! I'll have an update soon :)
Date: 05/13/09 03:28 am Title: Always.
awww them and the baby
they look sweet together
and samantha is such a big idiot
post more
Author's Response: Samantha is a big idiot. I'm going to start the next chapter soon!
Date: 05/13/09 03:09 am Title: Always.
i like this story, keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Date: 05/13/09 02:25 am Title: Always.
I have mixed feelings...because I think Tom shouldn't forgive Bill that easily...ok he has a child and even I understand but...still it's not fair for him to just tell Tom he loves him and that's all...if I were Tom I would probably think that he wants me back because his girfriend/wife left him and he feels alone...but idok...I'm a weird person...
Hope you don't get angry by this review because I truly love and treasure this story! I've read it all since the very beginning since like an hour ago!!
I really really lve it but my heart just feels off about that...idk why!!
Please don't hate me!
Please update soon! :D
Author's Response: Tom isn't going to be quick to fully forgive Bill. I'm not sure if a lot of people noticed but Bill had told Tom he was in love with him more than once and Tom never responded to it. It's going to take Bill more than just a discussion to fix everything, so it's not going to be a quick apology and everything is fine. So, I don't hate you at all! I completely understand, one hundred percent!
Date: 05/13/09 02:13 am Title: Always.
aww....Tom does forgive Bill :3 yay~ oh! thank you with starting with my review first! ^^ i think i do come off a confused reader..or someone who keeps interpreting everything the wrong way. my bad. ah..Samantha...*sigh* oh well~ at least Bill has Tom now :D
Author's Response: It's quite alright. I like people who question certain things. I interpret a lot of things wrong so I'm sitting there like '.... Woah, did that really just happen? How could they do that?' but I haven't been a big reviewer until lately.
Date: 05/13/09 02:09 am Title: Always.
awwwwwwwww. that was such a CUTEEEE chappie. i friggen love that they made up!
Author's Response: Awww thank you! They haven't completely made up yet, but they're on the road!
Date: 05/13/09 01:51 am Title: Always.
I didn't think this chapter was bad at all, though I'm sorry you had a crummy day.
I love this story tons and it always makes me smile when I see you've posted another chapter. I'm very grateful for the quick updates, and so look forward to the next. :)
Author's Response: Coming back to all of these reviews made me feel a load better :) I'm so glad you like this story, though! I love quick updates, too. I don't like waiting very long. I'm far too impatient :(