Date: 05/14/09 08:31 pm Title: Laying the cards out.
I can't wait to see the look on her face. Update soon?
Author's Response: Her face looks something like >;O, if imagined correctly. With a lot of random outbursts of tears.
Date: 05/14/09 07:47 pm Title: Laying the cards out.
Oh man how I love this story. Really i do. Lol. This was definitely a better chappie. Filled some stuff in; interesting how its been about 2 months thats passed. I'm glad Tom is still in Bill and Alaric's life. Beautiful.
Cant wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much :) I'm glad I could fill a few things in for you!
Date: 05/14/09 06:44 pm Title: Laying the cards out.
Oh, dear. I'm terrified of what she will do. I really like it. I really do.
Author's Response: Nothing too drastic. We all know Bill would win in a cat fight ;)
Date: 05/14/09 06:27 pm Title: Laying the cards out.
OMG!!! This is to much.
Author's Response: Just take a deep breath!
Date: 05/14/09 05:39 pm Title: Laying the cards out.
Oh la la!!! The truth is revealed!! DUN DUN DUN!! XD Poor Samantha must feel so lost... I kinda feel bad for her...
Author's Response: She can learn to get over it :x Haha, I'm so mean. I shouldn't say that, buttt :D
Date: 05/14/09 04:06 pm Title: Laying the cards out.
wootwoot!.
Author's Response: I figured everyone would like that :)
Date: 05/14/09 03:44 pm Title: Laying the cards out.
oO I love this. Whut's she gunna say to thaaat?
Author's Response: I'm glad you love it :)
Date: 05/14/09 03:08 pm Title: Laying the cards out.
Hahaha a slap straight to the face. poor sami.
Author's Response: I felt bad for a second, but then I realized Bill and Tom are so much cuter together than Bill and any girl.
Date: 05/14/09 12:31 pm Title: Laying the cards out.
*claps* Bill has finally admitted he is in love with Tom to Samantha!!!!! Yay!
Author's Response: It was a big step for him!
Date: 05/14/09 11:37 am Title: Laying the cards out.
[O]_[O] oh, sht.....
Author's Response: Shit has hit the fan!
Date: 05/14/09 11:34 am Title: Laying the cards out.
At last he told her !!
Good chapter really
Author's Response: Aww thank you :) I felt like I had a load taken off MY chest when he told her, haha
Date: 05/14/09 10:11 am Title: Laying the cards out.
i'm proud of u Bill for telling the truth
awwwww Tom with Alaric....that was super sweet
Author's Response: The thought of Tom with a baby is always super sweet!
Date: 05/14/09 08:25 am Title: Laying the cards out.
ITS FREAKIN GOOD.
I dont like this samantha person.
Im sure that she will do something bad :(
Author's Response: :) I'm glad you like it!
Date: 05/14/09 07:50 am Title: Laying the cards out.
Waaay better! Good job! I'm desperately waiting to see what Samantha says about Tom, now. :)
Author's Response: I'm writing the next chapter now so it should be up soon :D!
Date: 05/14/09 06:48 am Title: Laying the cards out.
Aha now that's what I call dropping a bomb lol. But Tom with Alaric makes me squee!
Author's Response: Whenever I picture Tom and Alaric, I think of the manip of Tom holding the baby and it makes me squeal!
Date: 05/14/09 06:20 am Title: Laying the cards out.
Bleh, I don't like that woman..
Author's Response: She wasn't written to be enjoyed, though many people still feel for her.
Date: 05/14/09 05:34 am Title: Laying the cards out.
Wow!
What is she going to say to that? 0.o
Author's Response: Everyone will find out :)
Date: 05/14/09 04:38 am Title: Laying the cards out.
Oh... you can't stop there! o:
Author's Response: The next part is coming!
Date: 05/14/09 02:01 am Title: Laying the cards out.
Oh that was a great chapter and I feel that is SO real! You are truly a great writer...and I'm glad you updated so soon! I should be doing my homework but I'm reading this!
I hope Samantha and Bill get an agreement. Alaric really need both of them! I think that mostly I feel for him and Tom...Samantha...well...let's say that I think she's lame but maybe it's because she's in love...Why on earth do women thinks that a child can solve everything and make a man marry you?! I know that that shit still happens in real life, but man are SO deceitful...or at least that's what I think...but I liked that...as much people could think that is soup opera-like...it isn't! Not at all!
I like you do a resolution for Bill and Samantha first than to Bill Tom because right now it's more important...
Also...I wonder how Samantha is going to react to that last sentence! I'm willing to know!! SO please update soon!! This is really good...one of the few stories that seems real! Truly real!! :D Thanks for writing this!
Author's Response: I actually got the idea for Samantha trapping Bill in with Alaric from a story a family friend was telling my mom and I. She told us she was watching television about a girl who had just given birth to her first child. She was expecting her boyfriend to marry her after the birth, but instead he left her, saying he wasn't ready for that kind of life. I thought it would make a good story!rnI'm glad you liked this chapter, though! I tried to make it as realistic as possible, so I'm so glad you enjoyed it :)
Date: 05/14/09 01:31 am Title: Laying the cards out.
ah~ yay~ Samantha's side got explained..ah.. the pressure. poor girl. but i am glad they are um..giving their reasons. :] ah!! your author's note on top made me feel so bad. @_@;;
Author's Response: Oh, no! Don't feel bad at all! I just wanted to clear it up (for everyone) that I wasn't trying to manipulate Samantha's personality so that Bill and Tom could ride off into the rainbows on a unicorn with Alaric being pulled in his stroller after them :)There's no reason to feel bad about it at all :) Other people had im'ed me to tell me that it was starting to look that way, so I just wanted to clear all of that up!