Date: 10/17/09 11:13 pm Title: Making Plans for "Tom the boy" and "Dream Boy"
Awww, I like it! Georg seems to be an asshole...
Date: 04/26/09 11:48 pm Title: Making Plans for "Tom the boy" and "Dream Boy"
UPDATE! UPDATE! Give me upgrade, upgrade lalala!
HAHAHA! SORRY! Update soon please!
Author's Response: I'm sorry but is that a song or are you saying the story needs some work? hahaha I'm confused. lol Are you sure you want an update? Like really really sure? JK JK I will have an update up ASAP ;) Only if you really really extremly want one ;) I'm teasing! Author humor I guess lol. Thanks for Taking Time out of your life to read and reveiw my story! You have no idea how I feel when I get to read reviews like yours ;)
Date: 04/26/09 11:45 pm Title: His Eyes
LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT!! I wish that could happen to me! Anyway... THIS STORY IS GOOD! I just hope there isn't that much drama! I can't handle crying again!!! AAAHHH! Sorry... I'm weird...
Author's Response: Yes, Love at first sight ;) Thank you! Um, No, not that much. Crying? It just depends if you cry easily and if you do, there will be like two or three parts that you will cry. Sorry but your not weird! I will probley crying writing those parts... Thanks for reading and reveiwing! It makes me so happy to know that you like and read the story.
Date: 04/26/09 12:17 am Title: Making Plans for "Tom the boy" and "Dream Boy"
OH I want jumbie cookies! *fangirl giggle and clap*
Anyway, I loved this chapter! I like that we got a little more detail on what Tom and Bill's personalities were like. And Im so excited for when they meet! Its so cute that Tom has been having those dreams about Bill, even before he met him! I really like this story and I cant wait for an update!! *hugz*
Author's Response: For being sooo awsome you get Bill's virginity insted XD I'm glade you liked it! There is alot more to Tom and Bill but that comes latter in the story ;) These dreams have been happing for a while and in them, Bill is always some kinda angel =) Should I put more detial in about the dreams? ummmmm maybe I will ;) You should really be excited for when they talk to echother. An update is being thought about right now XD I need to be able to put my ideas on a paper XD It should come soon! Thanks so much for your feedback and time! *bear hug* *gives a TH concert ticket*
Date: 04/25/09 10:28 pm Title: Making Plans for "Tom the boy" and "Dream Boy"
awww wow, please post soon, um ideas huh? well they can be grouped together in class project, or be in charge of some sort of music thing, like science or music. love letters should be involved though..
Author's Response: Well, I know where to add in things like that but first I need sometime to go by. But how do I approche that without it being confusing? I just feel like the story's may feel rushed to the reader and I dont mean for that to happen. lol I'm like dumping this on you ;) sorry lol. Partners in class huh? Sounds awsome.. ummmmmm After they start passing notes, they become partners in reading class?... and are really shy because they havent found out yet whos passing the notes...ummmmm I think that sounds fairly interesting. BUt I just gave away some of the story lol Thanks for the Ideas! and thanks for reveiwing and reading! ;)
Date: 04/25/09 09:42 pm Title: Making Plans for "Tom the boy" and "Dream Boy"
*grins*i like this story so far...though i must admit it did seemed a little bit rushed the whole love at first sight thing i mean.
but then again i've never had the plesaure to live it..but i'm not saying i don't like your story ok??cos i do...a lot=DDD
i don't like geo in this story so much, he's being a meanie to bill=(me don't like it!
so yeah i hope you update soon=D
Author's Response: Yes, I was afraid that would happen... I just got in a hurry to get to the main events in my story and rushed it a bit. Darn it! um I'm trying to slow it down if it makes you feel better ;)I think I have gone through love at first sight before and in chapter two, I sort of explain what it felt like. It wasent a good desciption though XD I'm glad you like it and are telling me atleast. Like 180 people have read it and I have 14 reviews LMAO XD! So thanks alot! Georg is still kinda heartbroken about Bill leaving on the plane so he's coving up what he's really feeling, with anger. You dont like Geo? uh oh! Well, I will try to fix him for u! ;) Thanks for you input! You really made my day. When I updated a while ago and got no reveiws, I thought people stoped likeing the story =( But then you came along ;) Thank again! Update will come ASAP but when I write it, it takes time to type then I send it to my beta reader. With the first chapter, they were pretty fast, now I have to wait a little bit ;) But its totally worth it and I love them becuase they do that for me XD ;)
Date: 04/25/09 08:32 pm Title: Making Plans for "Tom the boy" and "Dream Boy"
Ooooh!!!
I want a Jumbie cookie! I want a Jumbie cookie!!!
I like this story, the idea is very sweet :D
lol, Beauty-Bunny :p
Author's Response: You get you Jumbie Cookie and a remote control cake ;) Thanks for the reveiw
Date: 04/25/09 06:15 pm Title: Making Plans for "Tom the boy" and "Dream Boy"
aww that's so sweet. can't wait for the rest of it
Author's Response: Sweet like fudge! Even though I'm the author, I cant wait for the rest of it too XD I just cant think of anything interesting fo the next chapter... lol Thanks buches for the review!
Date: 04/22/09 02:03 am Title: His Eyes
WELL YOU DONT KNOW ME BUT I REALLY LIKE THE WAY YOU BUT THE STORY IN PERSPECTIVE AND THE DETAILED WORDS?
IT REALLY HELPS OUT....WITH THE PICTURING OF THE STORY N ALL
Author's Response: um, Thanks. Its hard for me to make a story with details because I don want the reader to get bored. Thanks so much!
Date: 04/21/09 06:48 am Title: His Eyes
Oh my god.... I love you!!!!!!!! this is so sweet....
Author's Response: Next, chapter gets sweeter ;)
Date: 04/20/09 04:47 pm Title: His Eyes
Oh Dear Zeus God of All Gods in Ellysium!!
That was GREAT!!
You hade me laughing my ass off!! Beauty Bunny?! XD Georg rocks!! and that bad expericnce with them and Georg confession his love!! WOW...You just read my mind...in movies i'm always like...what would happen if she says no and goes to the plane? XD whatever...
TOM is JUST adorable!! I totally understand him I've fallen asleep on class and I'm cranky when I wake up, but what a wonderful way to wake up! I'd give everything for Bill waking me up!!
BILL is amazing!! The love at first sight thing is AWESOME!!
I wonder where this leads to!! YOu have no idea how much I've been looking forward for this update!! *.*
I find odd the all Georg thing...I wonder what that leads to...I felt like he said the ex-girlfriend thing on purpose or maybe I'm being paranoic?
Please update soon! :D
Author's Response: lol Thank you. I didn't think it would be that funny...lol Yes, georg and his love confession. I'm sorry but i had to put that in there. At first it was just a random thought. But then I got curious and wondered what would happen if I put it in the story. I'm glad I did! You dont even know that much about tomi yet!But yes, his adorable. I wanted to make his sleeping descition as detialed as possible. I seen it in my head and it was amazing! hmmmmm, Bill waking me up every morning? Would I want that? Heck yeah! Again, You dont even know that much about Billi! But yes he is amazing. This story had a bit of truth to it for me. When I seen this one guy, I felt the way Bill did when Tom looked into his eyes. So I imagend it to be love at first sight ;) For Bill and Tom anyway. This story has so much coming. Hopefully I can get an update out soon =) The Georg Thing is simple. He wanted Bill to think that he was a "man" and moved on from likeing bill. Sort of like an in your face thing. Or he wanted bill to say "I Love you! I dont know what I was thinking when I got on that plane!" LMAO! ;) Thanks for reading and Reveiwing! This makes me sooo happy! P.S. You get a big bag of cookies for the long review!
Date: 04/20/09 10:14 am Title: His Eyes
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! *fan girl squee*
Author's Response: This is a good sign? ;) Thank you!
Date: 04/20/09 12:46 am Title: His Eyes
*glomps* I loved this chapter! Im happy that they met and I wonder how Tom will react to Bill once they finally get to talk. I have a feeling this will be a great fic and Im excited to read more! *gives giant bag of gummyworms*
Author's Response: OMG! I Love gummy Bears that are giant! Good, I'm really happy that you liked it! Keep that feeling! It should be getting even better as soon as the climax comes around. The next chapter will hopefully come soon. I wanted to get this one up so badly, that I wrote a part during my state testing! XD hahaha! Thanks for the re-veiw, reading,and for making me feel happy ;)
Date: 04/20/09 12:39 am Title: Some First's Out of Many
Great start! You've got me interested to find out more. Im wondering what Tom will be like!! *rushes to read more*
Author's Response: Awsome! That means my evil plot is working! *evil laugh* lol I need to figure out what the next chapter should have in it.. Thanks for reading and reveiwing! I love it so much!
Date: 04/17/09 01:02 am Title: Some First's Out of Many
hmmmm, post soon? i like this!
Author's Response: very soon! ;)
Date: 04/16/09 09:22 pm Title: Some First's Out of Many
I like it so far. I wonder what caught Bill's eye....Tom perhaps =D I think i'm right.
Author's Response: maybe... maybe not... maybe... ;)lol rnI'm almost done with the First half of the next chapter so it wont be long before you find out.rnrnThank you for Taking the time to read and reveiw my story! Its means alot!
Date: 04/16/09 08:49 pm Title: Some First's Out of Many
it's not as bad as you make it sound.
Author's Response: Thank you! So its not that bad? The next chapter will be better!rnrnThanks for the Reveiw! ;)
Date: 04/16/09 08:29 pm Title: Some First's Out of Many
If it's a guy...Georg should be paired with...Julian Drai from Lovex!!
I hope to see this updated soon!
Author's Response: OMG! My first review! Julian Drai? Sounds good... I dont know him though. I will look him up. rnrnI'm working on the next chapter right now. rnrnThanks so much for reading and reveiwing! ;)