Date: 07/03/09 04:40 am Title: Chapter 15
UGH, CAN I TELL YOU HOW MUCH I ADORE THIS?
Author's Response: ...Go on xD
Date: 07/03/09 03:40 am Title: Chapter 15
awwwwwwwww its so cute poor bill never ben kissed before... i like it so keep writing
Date: 06/30/09 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 14
plzplzpzlplz update sooon thx soso much=]=]
Date: 06/29/09 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 14
Oooh! This should be interesting . . .
Date: 06/29/09 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 14
awww how cute this story seem so intresting and cute... poor bill he gets beat up his dad and his mom dosnt help him poor thing =(
i wonder wats going to happen between tom and bill
Date: 06/29/09 01:57 pm Title: Chapter 14
i've seen the uninvited before! it was twisted! especially when in the end, it turns out that the main character's a schizophrenic psycho and she was the killer! (schizophrenic psycho by puddle of mudd) loven the chappie and update sooon!!!!!!!!!
Date: 06/22/09 09:41 am Title: Chapter 13
Wow. They just left Bill all to himself without telling him. Maybe they've done that before...
Date: 06/19/09 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 13
Yay for Bill being free for four days! I love how Tom's body thinks he's gay. One of my fave lines was the whole "are you fucking serious?" That whole part was just great.
Date: 06/19/09 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 13
This could be an interesting opportunity for Tom and Bill.
Date: 06/19/09 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 13
Okay, my first review in the story. I have to say that I like it. I read the 13 chapters just today. I must say, though, that I saw some mistakes here and there. Like when Tom has to look for Bill's address, but he'd been there before (not IN the house, but near there, the day they go to the park, Bill was waiting for him on the steps). Then, you say Bill doesn't know how to get to Tom's house and gets lost, but actually he's been there before, both guided by Tom and alone when he went to ask Tom if he had seen anything. But don't mind this much, it's easy to forget those details between update and update. I usually have to read the previous chapter or even the whole story, because I forget details like that.
Apart from that, I like the story and I like the way you are developing it, not rushed at all. Good job, keep it coming.
Author's Response: Yeah haha. I forget these things. I can't really fix them now without it changing the story a little bit D:
Date: 06/19/09 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 13
plzpzlpzlpzlpzlpzl update soonnn thx soso much=]
Date: 06/19/09 11:09 am Title: Chapter 13
Tom's warming up to Bill ^_^!!!!
It's cute x3
Date: 06/19/09 10:26 am Title: Chapter 13
this is wonderful work! please, update ASAP for me!
Date: 06/19/09 09:23 am Title: Chapter 13
Huh, good chapter, kinda messed up that Bill's parents didn't tell him they were going on another honeymoon, can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 06/18/09 11:54 am Title: Chapter 12
cute!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 06/17/09 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 12
Aww, Tomi has a crush~^^
Date: 06/16/09 11:17 pm Title: Chapter 12
PLZPLZPZLPZL UPDATE SOOON=]=] I FREAKING LUVZ THIZ=]=]
Date: 06/16/09 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 12
I was hoping this would've been longer, but hey. It was still amazing. I want more soon!
Author's Response: I'm sorry, long chapters are not my forte
Date: 06/16/09 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 12
hehe i love this story =D