Date: 04/20/09 08:09 am Title: Chapter 3
this story is interesting...
poor bill. i hope tomi becomes his
friend and helps him threw it all xD
please put up another chapter soooon!
Date: 04/19/09 12:32 pm Title: Chapter 3
Amaaaaaazing chapter! Keep it going!
Date: 04/19/09 02:37 am Title: Chapter 3
T.T NO its a razor aint IT BAD BILL BAD BAD BILL... >O
Date: 04/19/09 12:47 am Title: Chapter 3
OMG this story is AMAZING! I love it. This chapter was wonderful. Ummm...just one critique but, basically, it's just a preference in writing style but I find that longer chapters help develop the character and plots easier. Just a thought. ANYWAY, wonderful story thus far and I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: It's not that I don't want to write ling chapters, it's that it just never happens D:rnI'll try to next time.
Date: 04/19/09 12:42 am Title: Chapter 3
DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD;
Oh bill. D;
And tom is hopeless. haha.
Great Update.
more soon? :D
Date: 04/18/09 10:46 pm Title: Chapter 3
really good. continue please!
Date: 04/16/09 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 2
This is painful, and Tom is an asshole for just letting that kind of shit go...And now you've swearing online. I try to avoid that... Great chapter.
Date: 04/16/09 05:09 pm Title: Chapter 2
Awww, poor bill! Great chapter! I can tell this will be a great story. Please update soon. :D
Date: 04/16/09 05:07 pm Title: Chapter 2
Awww, poor bill! Great chapter! I can tell this will be a great story. Please update soon. :D
Date: 04/16/09 10:41 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow! one word. A-ma-zing! keep reading!
Date: 04/16/09 06:04 am Title: Chapter 2
OWO -hides- I dont like mean Jorg.. >.>
I like Tom though cLuless to everything around him... its perfect. XD
Date: 04/15/09 04:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is wonderful. I like it so far, and I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thankyou :D I'll update very soon