Date: 09/03/09 03:48 am Title: The Chapter You Can't Forget
This was so sad and beautiful. ;-; I loved it, but I kinda wanted to know why Tom left.
And the emotions you described when Bill talks are just *no words*
Amazing writing, I can't wait to go read more stuff by you.
Date: 08/02/09 11:28 pm Title: The Chapter You Can't Forget
ugh, in tears.
Date: 04/24/09 10:16 pm Title: The Chapter You Can't Forget
You broke my heart...poor Bill... This was so sad, intense, wonderful and perfectly well written. Thank you for sharing this story. I loved it!
Author's Response: thanks for the wonderful review :) <3
Date: 04/16/09 09:06 am Title: The Chapter You Can't Forget
omg!! I don't even know what to say. I'm practically speachless. Uhm. Uh. WOW!!
*hugs Bill* that's absolutely horrible what happened. Maybe it truly could have been avoided. Where the fuck did Tom go!!
Author's Response: good speechless or bad speechless? haha, thank you for reviewing! Tom went across the country, but no one knows why...all we know is he got rich lol.
Date: 04/14/09 03:07 pm Title: The Chapter You Can't Forget
So emotional...
I really liked it. But my heart broke for Bill :(
Author's Response: thank you!
Date: 04/14/09 01:03 pm Title: The Chapter You Can't Forget
Damn.. that's one good story!
Author's Response: thanks :)
Date: 04/13/09 11:21 am Title: The Chapter You Can't Forget
I liked it .. alot .. but I am confused as to what happened before all this. Like back history. Could you please write some back history. Explain a little more. Thank you :)
Author's Response: well, since this was intended to be the sequel to my other story "Motion Picture," that's kind of where the back story is. you could read that if you already haven't, and hopefully that'll clear up any confusion. if it doesn't, let me know and i'll answer any questions you have.
Date: 04/13/09 08:50 am Title: The Chapter You Can't Forget
I don't have words to review with, but I'll try: fascinating, sad, intense, and wonderful. *Faved*
Author's Response: aww thank you! thanks for reviewing, glad you liked it enough to favorite it!
Date: 04/13/09 08:28 am Title: The Chapter You Can't Forget
That was so good I love allthe pain and hurt nice and depressing
Author's Response: thank you! pain is what i do best ;)
Date: 04/13/09 08:17 am Title: The Chapter You Can't Forget
Well, obviously my first reaction to this is that I want to know why Tom left him! What happened, where did he go, and why?
Sequel explaining??
This fic is really sad, but I think you did a great job with it. Well written :)
Author's Response: first of all, thank you :) and i'm not sure if i'd write a sequel to this since you're not really supposed to know why he left. if you really do want to know though, you can email me and i'll explain it all to you :)
Date: 04/13/09 07:46 am Title: The Chapter You Can't Forget
Man, this is weird. I just responded to your email in which I asked if you'd written anything new lately, and voila, you have! XD Anyway, this made me shake and my head spin but it's really fucking good and sad and yeah, fucking Tom. Don't like the Billshido, as always, but it's pretty easy to ignore it. The writing itself is excellent, as always, didn't find many mistakes, but man, I wished Tom hadn't died so he could read that letter. Anyway, I love this, it's the perfect sequel to Motion Picture. (:
Author's Response: hmm, never got that email? D: D: but anyway, thank you sooo much! your reviews make me so happy *__* anyway, in bill's mind, bringing it to tom (or the ashes) will allow him to read it (idk this is bill we're talking about :P) so in a sense, you can believe he gets to read it. and i'm glad you think it works as a sequel! i was worried that if i did put it as the sequel, people would be like wtf that so doesn't even work, or w/e. but yay! *off to read your new story!!!*
Date: 04/13/09 05:50 am Title: The Chapter You Can't Forget
'cutting myself to pieces' that's a really good metaphor. idk, maybe it's not a metaphor but hey, i like it :D i wonder how old was tom?
Author's Response: i guess it could be a metaphor, but it's a slight exaggeration of what he was doing to himself, cutting, you know? but i'm glad you like it :) and tom was about 19, though i don't think i said that, probably should have. so yeah, he was a lot older than bill. he was 19 when bill was 14. no, he wasn't a creep, btw :P
Date: 04/13/09 04:43 am Title: The Chapter You Can't Forget
Whoa. This was so full of pain, hurt, angst, and yet me, the old fluff-enthusiast loved it. Don't know, you wrote the emotions so well, Bill's pain and hurt are just screaming through the text. Well done.
Author's Response: thank you!! i'm really glad you like it :)
Date: 04/13/09 03:06 am Title: The Chapter You Can't Forget
that was sad...
Author's Response: Thanks?