I definitely liked it! This was realy sweet! :)

this hits kind of close to home...
damn you, now I want a happy ending too! :-s

Author's Response:

Don't worry, dear, I am working on it. Slowly. But I am! I have a general plotline in my head, and it's dying to get out, but there's other stuff I have to finish and get out of the way, so I can focus on it with no interruptions. A happy endng will be had, I swear.

Eventually...

Thank you for reviewing <3333

It was this that made me think Bill didn't really understand the depth of Gustav's feelings:
It was a loaded statement, but Bill took it all in stride, brightening as he nodded. “OK.”, the part about him taking it in stride. That could be taken that he didn't really think much about the statement and I figured he didn't understand.

Sometimes it's difficult when we know in our heads what our characters mean and subtle can be hard to do. I think it's good sounding vague, too, and leaving it open for interpretation.

Truth be known, I would love to see a sequel to this. :)

Author's Response: You know, that sounds like a pretty good idea. Perhaps from Bill's point of view...*waggles finger*  YOU!! I think you've just stuffed a plot-bunny in my head!!

Hallo!

I don’t know why, but there was something annoying about the beginning. Maybe you’re just genius by producing the same feelings that Gustav is feeling as one reads all those ‘ringing’s. XD It’s probably intentional annoyance. And that is definitely genius. And based on what you said about trying out a new sort of humorous style, I’m guessing that it wasn’t coincidental.

‘that condescending little chirping noise saying “that could have been important, you dope!” or “you can’t ignore them forever” or even, in his case, “clean your apartment already, you slob!”.’ Hilarious! The only thing I find wrong with this is that Gustav has admitted to being a neat person, not likely to have such a messy apartment. But oh well, just something minor to think about in the future.

No real mechanical errors! I like how you really went into what Gustav was thinking and what he thought Bill was thinking throughout the story. I really love the emotions too; it’s very real and very believable. I liked their relationship a lot. Very cute.

I loved it!

-BRE

Author's Response:

Mm, I know that Gusti's very neat, but that's what I love about AU's, lol!! I always read stories where Gustav is a neat freak, and all anal about stuff like cleanliness, but I mean, he is still a guy, and I wanted to do something different. Honestly, I don't know any guys that are neat and clean, they're all slobs, so I guess its a personal experiance thing? LOL

The whole first paragraph about the ringing wasn't really intended to annoy people, but if that's what happens, I guess its all for the best, because it puts you there, right? It was really supposed to be roll-your-eyes-and-shake-your-head-but-smile-anyway kind of humor, but now that you mention it, it does kind of drive on the point in an annoying way, and I think I like it, XDD

Thank you so much for your awesome review, I'm really glad you enjoyed it!!! <3333

awwwwe that was sooooo sweet.I LOVED IT=DDDD

but i didn't like tom at all*shakes head* nope in fact i hate this tomi, he's a manwhore not that he isn't one in real life...XD

i love gusti, he's so cute=DDD

Author's Response:

Ahhhh!! Thank you!!!! I'm glad you liked it!!!!

 Tomi? A manwhore? Nooooooooo!!!! *waves the thought away frantically* That's not possible!!

 Gusti being a reeaaallllyyy really, really nice guy? TOTALLY possible!! LOL

 Thanks for reading!!! <333