Date: 12/23/07 09:03 pm Title: On the edge.
this is clearly something different... im still trying to picture this in the real world relaly :P
i think you should continue and i see alot in this :D
Author's Response: Owww thank you so so much <3 yeah, it'd be a terribly cuteh scene to see in the real world, wouldn't it? <3 we're going to add some sweet-caring-Tomi in the future :] hope you'll like it!
Date: 12/23/07 08:25 pm Title: On the edge.
Oh, is it over? Aw. I want to read more..
As far as the beta.. It's a little off in places.. But still easy to understand. I could beta for you if you wanted?
Author's Response: No no! It's definitely not over! More coming today :] yeah, we have some difficulties with English (as we're Spanish and Italian), so your help is veeery welcome! <3 I'll try to contact you in a bit!
Date: 12/23/07 08:25 pm Title: On the edge.
Oo! I love it, I've been waiting for mpreg!!! You should definitely keep going!
Author's Response: Oh looks like we came just in time to let you read a mpreg! :] I'm glad you like this <3 more coming very soon.
Date: 12/23/07 08:20 pm Title: On the edge.
Oh yeee I have always wanted to read a fic based from that picture, it's one of my favourites. Can't wait to read more. A beta doesn't hurt anyone. :)
Author's Response: Yeah I thought we need a beta too :] I'm searching for one today, so it will immediately look better xD we're glad we've crowned your dream of reading a fic based on that picture :] you'll read more so soon.
Date: 12/23/07 07:41 pm Title: On the edge.
i loved it please write more
Author's Response: Sure, we'll write more today! ;]
Date: 12/23/07 07:36 pm Title: On the edge.
oh hell yes go on!! i've been waiting for some mpreg to show up. =] great job, i can't wait for more. oh and i love that drawing that you guys based this on... too cute.
Author's Response: :] yeah we immediately fell in love with that drawing too <3 it's oh so sweet and we thought about writing something on it immediately, and here we are now! We have all Christmas holidays to do it eheh we're glad we made you happy with this :] <3
Date: 12/23/07 07:34 pm Title: On the edge.
Definitely go on!
This is so cool1 It's really sweet and you're right about no one writing one like this before. I am really excited (:
Please please continue, i cant wait for more!!
Author's Response: Oh Tascha <3 I've never thought of you being a reader of mine, I'm so excited! We're happy you like this, we'll write more just today! :]
Date: 12/23/07 07:23 pm Title: On the edge.
this is good, and I want more!
you can't let it end here.
Author's Response: O.O you made my heart melt. The first review oh honey! <3 We were nervous as fuck to see if you people like this! We're utterly glad you like this, sure we'll write more! THANK YOU.