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Reviewer: in grayscale Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/25/07 07:17 pm Title: On the edge.

Ooh, awesome, let's get some more pregnant Bill up in here!

Author's Response: More coming soon, we just have to collect some ideas :[ any suggestions? ps. utterly glad you liked this! it means a lot!

Reviewer: ellos Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/25/07 06:15 pm Title: End of the beginning.

Aaawh, that's so cute

Author's Response: awww, thank you hun :]

Reviewer: black_tinker_bell Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/25/07 05:26 pm Title: On the edge.

yeah, i know, i'm not blind, but it still kinda doesn't add up, it's not... i don't know, just doesn't go with the flow. doesn't mean it's not good, though

Author's Response: It was just something to bring the past events back :] we wanted to add like more suspense to the reactions of Tom and stuff. Hope this doesn't mean that you didn't like it :'[

Reviewer: black_tinker_bell Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/25/07 05:17 pm Title: End of the beginning.

liked the chapter but it kinda doesn't go with the flow if you get what i mean

Author's Response: What do you mean, hun? It was a flashback, it's in the beggining of the chapter

Reviewer: xEmoPenguinx Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/25/07 05:16 pm Title: End of the beginning.

omg that was freaking AMAZING!!! like seriously THE best sex scene i've ever read!!! it was just SO damn sweet!!!

Author's Response: Aww, thank you hun *///* We're not that good ;D Anyways, thanks for the compliments :]

Reviewer: lixi05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/25/07 04:50 pm Title: On the edge.

wow, i love this story!!! i would have never expected anyone to come up with this....
please update soon!

Author's Response: Eheh we're brave :]

Reviewer: izzap Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/25/07 04:33 pm Title: End of the beginning.

aww yay. i was starting to assume that they were just strangers but then you came out and said "twin brother" and it just made it so much cuter and i'm not sure why. =] but i love it. i can't wait for the next chap.

Author's Response: aww... Thank you, hun. The readers choused, so, they're twins :] We're glad you loved it and keep reading, hun :D

Reviewer: lipa Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/25/07 04:12 pm Title: End of the beginning.

O.o

Wow, Bill got pregnant from his first time?
that was hot, I'm happy you decided to put them like twin brothers - it's a lot more HOT like that :)

Author's Response: Oww, thank you hun (: We're glad you liked it and yeah, that makes it more hot ;D

Reviewer: poison_girl616 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/25/07 03:56 pm Title: End of the beginning.

I love you girls!! *puppy eyes*
I love this!! There's so much love in me right now!! >.<
Update soon please or I'll die!!

Author's Response: Awww Thank you, hun :] We're glad you loved it. They're all love <3 We will, don't worry :]

Reviewer: Anna483 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/25/07 03:54 pm Title: End of the beginning.

i wanna c toms reaction....lol....write more!

Author's Response: Oww thanks for your comment, you'll see it in the next chapter :] Keep reading and commenting, hun

Reviewer: Silvia Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/25/07 03:39 pm Title: End of the beginning.

Oh hun

Author's Response: ...

Reviewer: billliebttom Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/25/07 03:39 pm Title: End of the beginning.

Ooh, I love this story, you two! It makes me happy to see it posted! ;D

Author's Response: We're glad you liked it, hun. Thank you for your review, hun we'll apreciate it so much =D

Reviewer: ellos Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/25/07 02:41 pm Title: On the edge.

Woah... when I first red about MPREG, I thought: Oh my god... that's just sick. But now... Okay, I must admit, I'm hooked xD

Author's Response: Glad we changed your mind :]

Reviewer: Little Living Doll Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/25/07 01:41 pm Title: On the edge.

how? This is so confusing, the writing is perfect, but the tought is so unbelievible to believe, how can a boy get a child, Will that be explained or will it be a normal thing in this fiction?

Love from kimmy

Author's Response: Oh, this means that you didn't like it? :[ oh I'm sorry.. it will be explained in the future, if you will keep reading? :']

Reviewer: Elle_Chan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/25/07 01:39 pm Title: On the edge.

*squeals* pregnant Bill yay! *bows to you guys*
it's so lovely..poor bill will get a rough time ahead..*giggles* please you two gotta update soon...as soon as you can...

:: hands you two a cookie::

Author's Response: Thanks for the cookie xD we've got it done, we'll update as soon as the beta reader sends the file us back ;]

Reviewer: Shidia Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/25/07 09:39 am Title: On the edge.

STRANGERS, THEY HAVE TO BE STRANGERS lol :'> I'll read it anyway if they are brothers, but strangers would be better. Maybe.

Author's Response: Twins would be sweeter :] people decided for twins, sorry :') hope you'll read it anyway ç_ç

Reviewer: tornribbon Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/25/07 09:35 am Title: On the edge.

wow, this is different xD I love it! please continue!

Author's Response: Sure, more coming soon! Thanks!

Reviewer: Sara Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/25/07 09:33 am Title: On the edge.

yay for the twins brothers
update soon

Author's Response: I'm writing more now :] Jaen came right now so we'll write it all now!! YAY!!

Reviewer: in grayscale Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/25/07 09:09 am Title: On the edge.

Twin brothers, definitely.

Author's Response: What Jess wants, is law. Sorry guys, I take whatever she says. TWIN BROTHERS, HERE WE GO!

Reviewer: black_tinker_bell Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/25/07 06:01 am Title: On the edge.

aaaaaah, i see. well i'd like to be someone's beta reader, but no one wants me... :'(

Author's Response: Hah don't worry, we'd be glad to have you next time :] our beta reader won't be here for some time, sooo you're next on the list kay? thanks for reviewing! Ps. Jaen, is it you who answered the other reviews? Cuz it wasn't me o.O"

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