Date: 12/29/07 04:14 am Title: Love is dead.
I love the story!
Really exciting I must say! :D
I'm really looking forward to the next chapter(s) to come :)
About the baby, I think they should only have one baby... Don't really know why, it's just my opinion xP
Anyway.. keep yp the good work! :D
Author's Response: Thanks for your review :] I really have to say, I'd like them having a little girl xp but we'll see, maybe I'll change my mind? Keep reading to find it out! And the new chapter is coming in some hours *big grin*
Date: 12/29/07 01:27 am Title: Love is dead.
Okay, I don't like them being twins in this thing. but... It's your story and I like it. And I think you should let them have twin girls!!! Or one girl. As long as it is a girl!!!
Author's Response: It'll be a girl for sure, don't worry :] it'd be a mess either way xD and why don't you like them being twins? We thought it'd be cute and also because we're totally into twincest, but then the public decided for twins too.. keep reading eh :D
Date: 12/29/07 12:31 am Title: Love is dead.
Twins!!! they must be twins!! XD I love this with all my heart! seriosly! I love you girls!!! *cries for such a joy*
Author's Response: *offers you a tissue and a cookie* naaah don't cry baby x] we're glad you like this, really <3 all your comments mean so much to us you don't even know! And I've written down your vote :p
Date: 12/28/07 10:28 pm Title: Love is dead.
FOR THE LOVE OF GOD MAKE BILL HAVE TWINS!!!!! PLEASE!!! TWINS TWINS TWINS!!!!!!
Author's Response: Ahah xD wow, people who want twins are 12 since now, instead the ones who want an only child are just 4! Well, I can't say anything, we'll all have to wait x] anyway, chapter 4 is done and corrected, in some hours we'll post! :]
Date: 12/28/07 09:34 pm Title: Love is dead.
ooh twins definately! it'd be so cute!!!
great story! ^_^
[Sagey]
Author's Response: Aww, thank you hunnie ^_^ Keep reading and commenting (:
Date: 12/28/07 06:47 pm Title: On the edge.
i loved this chapter! and it does sound like something tom would do!!!
and definitily twins!!!
please update soon!
Author's Response: Yeah We know *grins* Like we said in the Author's Notes, one of my friends psicoanalized Tom and we used that in the fic lol. *writing the vote* Thanks for your opinion, hun and don't worry, more's coming soon. We already have the next chapter and now we're waiting for Jessica to correct it (= Keep reading and comenting hunnie
Date: 12/28/07 06:38 pm Title: Love is dead.
TWINS! THEY MUST HAVE TWINS! TWIN BOYS!
o_O hehe Sorry about that. Its just so perfect in my mind. *sigh*
Author's Response: Aww, don't worry *grins* Well, we'll see. You have to wait at the end of the fic to know lol Keep reading and reviewing
Date: 12/28/07 06:09 pm Title: Love is dead.
twins!!!
I understand what tom is going thru. If I were him I'd be in fenian too.
Author's Response: Yeah XD Poor Tomi, he have to deal with Bill's state. Keep reading *writing down the vote* lol More coming soon x]
Date: 12/28/07 05:52 pm Title: Love is dead.
aww sweeeeet. i love this so much. and tom's reaction was so believable, good job with that.
awww... twins would be so cute. but i don't mind either way. just one child is cute enough for them. =]
eee i love it, great job.
Author's Response: *writing down the vote* Aww.. Thank you for your comment and yeah x] One of my friends psicoanalized Tom and she said that that could be his reaction XD Thanks for reading and more coming really soon. We have the chapter 4 finished, so, we're waiting for Jessica to correct it <3
Date: 12/28/07 05:02 pm Title: Love is dead.
... and I love the word love x]
Author's Response: chik <3
Author's Response: We too x]
Date: 12/28/07 05:00 pm Title: Love is dead.
Hmm... Maybe only child. I mean, maybe twins will be too much, the first time, and since he's a guy and all that stuff...
And enough with that! Time to tell you what I think of the chapter:
I loved it, you're both lovely writers as always, and you have the most lovely fantasy ever :] I love the way they talk, the way they think about stuff... and I love the way they act in this story :D
Author's Response: Well, we're going to write down your opinion x] And we think like you, though. I mean, it's the first pregnancy and it could be weird if they're twins, anyways, what the crowd decides XD And oww, thank you hun, that means so much for us *///* Thanks for your compliments, sweetheart. Keep reading, more coming soon :]
Author's Response: Oh, you love everything *-* thaaank yoooou this means a lot! You give us strenght to go forward >.<
Date: 12/28/07 04:26 pm Title: On the edge.
TWINS 8D
I'm in love with this story
Author's Response: Thanks for your review C: we'll see whether twins or not!
Date: 12/28/07 04:24 pm Title: Love is dead.
TWINS PLEASE!!!!!!!!!! LET IT BE TWINS!!! it will be so goddamn ironic!!! loool
LOVE THIS STORY
ps: i give you a cake you u choose twins!!! plz plz plz plz!!! let it be TWINS
Author's Response: omg xD you really want twins! Well, your vote will count for two then lol just wait, you have to wait 9 whole months (and, as far as I know, 36 weeks, this means 35 more chapters or so xD) thanks for your review!
Date: 12/28/07 04:22 pm Title: Love is dead.
I'm loveing this to death! Really! This is so adorable and cute! =3
I just hope you update this soon because I can't really wait to see the next chapter! ;)
Oh! And about the baby...I would like if they could have twins. OMG! That would be so totally cute! X3
Author's Response: Hehe thank you :] we'll see, but we will consider your opinion as well (as all the others). And thanks for your compliments! It means so much to us <3 you're all too good to us girls. More coming very very soon, just the time for it to be corrected, we've already written it *grins*
Date: 12/28/07 04:14 pm Title: Love is dead.
ohhh hard (?) o.o...-thinks- tins would be cool butt ....yealets say twiiinnss haha that would be werid but cool i hope to read more of this!^^great job!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing (and reading xD) :] we still don't know whether make them twins or not, we'll see. More coming soon (we've already written it, waiting to be corrected! I think, tomorrow?)
Date: 12/28/07 04:14 pm Title: Love is dead.
i think it would be interesting for them to have twins...but really i dont mind...as long as they have one..:)
Author's Response: They'll have one for sure, don't worry about that xD I think we won't make twins, I don't know.. or maybe, we could X\ thanks for your review and thanks for reading by the way <3
Date: 12/28/07 04:00 pm Title: Love is dead.
Hahaha, this is so awesome xD I'm so glad that someone finally decided to write something like this *runs around in circles* You both deserve a prize. And the ending was so touching... Tom's hand on Bill's stomach... X_X Ehm.. only child or twins... Twins WOULD be cute.. Hmm..
Author's Response: Heh, thanks for the compliments :D I'm glad you liked it, really! You like touching things don't you xD and yeah, twins would be cute, but...
Date: 12/28/07 03:54 pm Title: Love is dead.
I understand that this isn't realistic but how the hell is bill going to have a baby? Will he have surgery? In this universe male pregnancy is incredibly rare but not unheard of, where does the baby sit in the body? Does it just develop it's own sort of womb within bill's body? I'm so confused!!! And if some kind of female reproductive system is inside bill does it mean he could get pregnant again?
Sorry I have a bit of a scientific background so I tend to ask too many questions.
This was really good just so you know. On whether it's one or two kids, I think it shouldn't matter too much especially if this is more about coping with the pregnancy rather than skipping quickly through that bit and giving birth really quickly which I think it should be, (I mean you should describe a lot of what this pregnancy is like)
That was quite long review for me...
Author's Response: Well, this was pretty long yeah lol I'll try to answer to all your questions, though. First, when you read this you have to switch your scientific brain off - it's something completely absurd, we're writing this for fun and because mommy Bill and daddy Tom are just cute, not because we think this could actually happen. We're really not into medical things and science, so don't ask us those things please cause we don't know any of it xD we try to collect infos so we make this look 'real' as much as we can, but not 'real' meaning it could happen and stuff, 'real' because pregnant ladies do really the things we write.. I hope you got what I mean :] rnrnAs for the first questions: Yeah, he'll get surgery. The baby sits in his belly, as in women's bodies - I think there's a womb yeah, as Bill’s body could automatically create a place where the baby could grow up. And yeah, he could actually get pregnant again I think, but believe me when I say Tom will never want to have sex with him without wearing at least 5 condoms lol.rnrnThanks for the compliments anyway :] yeah, we'll describe week by week, so don't worry we won't left anything behind and you'll have a lot to read if you want. This fic is just about Bill’s pregnancy, not their life after the baby’s born – maybe we’ll do a sequel talking about it, who knows :]rnrnAnyway, thanks for your review. I hope you’ll continue reading our story! xoxo
Date: 12/28/07 03:47 pm Title: Love is dead.
omg u really are talented
tom's reaction was so real...perfect
i want them to have a girl,not twins
cuz it's boring,they are twins and it's enough
a girl will be sweet , i can imagine bill dressing her and making her hair,giving her fashion advices
update asap
Author's Response: OH MY GOD YOU READ MY MIND!! I was thinking the same thing!! I'd love Bill to have a little girl <3 it'd be too cuteh >.< daddy Tom would tell her not to go with boys xD and mommy Bill would dress her up all cute to attract them xD and in the end, they would hold each other saying "Oh, our little daughter - snif" xD thanks for the compliment anyway, it means a lot <3
Date: 12/28/07 03:38 pm Title: Love is dead.
Bill should have beed angry at TOM! that son of a bitch should have get his punishment! duh i dunno whybut anyway.
i need more.
Author's Response: We've already written the whole fourth chapter (trust me when I say that it's very very long ;]) and well, Bill was too shocked to be angry lol ps. how would you like him to be punished? ;p