Date: 04/19/10 05:53 pm Title: Rise of the Fallen
Hello!!
Remember me from tumblr? Well, I told you I liked the conversation between Bill and Tom when Bill Asked him if he believed love can survive betrayal? Well, you tld me to read the story and so I did. I´m very sorry I didnt' leave a review for each chapter, but, you see. I started to read it yesterday at night, and stopped only when it was 2:45 am (I had to wake up at 5:00am) I was so... enthralled I couldn't make myself stop reading... today I feel like a zoombie though, absolutely sleeping deprived, but happy for this amazing story.
I solemny promise I will read it again and leave a comment each cahpter as it should be.
Thanks for such an amazing story!!!
Hugs!!
Velia
Date: 04/17/10 04:59 pm Title: Taste and See
Thank you so much for this wonderful story! It's so different from other fiction. Characters are so unique... Really amazing.)
Date: 04/17/10 03:51 am Title: Rise of the Fallen
Your use of symbolism amaze the life out of me! Rain. Lavenders. Sun. *cries* OMG I can just squeeze you in an enormous bear hug.. except I'm really thin and you're nowhere near me D;
Anyway, I'm so happy you updated again!! Lavender Field reminds me of this old Taiwanese drama which is also set in a lavender field. I thought this fiction is going to be the same so I wasn't particularly interested in it. However, i am extremely grateful to the being who possessed me and made me click on the story so I can read it and enjoy it and love it up until now and possibly, forever!
Everything about this story is completely fabulous. I especially like Bill's optimistic attitude about everything and it's dangerously painful what I felt when I read Annabelle's speech to Tom. How Bill was described as so heartbroken and damaged made my heart break and feel such genuine sympathy... like I want to hug him. And Tom too. It's amazing that he came back and asked Bill for forgiveness.. How he explained that he doesn't care about what other people think anymore.. (I secretly wish someone would say that to me) That was painfully and so beautifully romantic.
The falling action is absolutely gorgeous. How everything falls into place like a jigsaw puzzle. How everything is resolved. How Tom finally understands his feelings and emotions. You, my friend is a very very very talented storywriter and I hope I get to be at least half as good as you are when I write my own fan fictions
Date: 04/16/10 02:44 pm Title: Rise of the Fallen
Oh my god this chapter was just beautiful, I nearly cried! haha!
Gosh it was brilliant, I think its the best chapter throughout the whole story so far
Thankyou soooo much for this! xx
Date: 04/15/10 01:47 am Title: Rise of the Fallen
Oh my gosh... I nearly cried. For real. My eyes are wet.
Date: 04/14/10 12:00 pm Title: Rise of the Fallen
AWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!! Perfect line to leave off at! AWWW
Date: 04/13/10 04:50 pm Title: Grandma Annabelle (Part I)
*noticed "black-haired girl" aka Bill in the ice creamery*
Mwahaha
Poor Tom, this is hell for him now.
Date: 04/11/10 11:21 pm Title: Rise of the Fallen
Idk why you're sayinq thank you to us. But, I wanna say: Thank YOU. This had me at the edqe of my seat. I read this story in two days, I don't usually read tht much. But I simply had to. I cried. It was beautiful. Plus, my love for Bill qrew/qrows more and more. Thank you from the bottom of my Columbian heart
Date: 04/11/10 10:25 pm Title: Rise of the Fallen
This was a gorgeous chapter. I loved it.
Date: 04/11/10 08:49 pm Title: Rise of the Fallen
THIS CHAPTER WAS SO PERFECT!!! i've been waiting foreverrrr for this chapter to come out & when i saw it today i nearly fell out of my chair!!! update faster please :DDDDD
Date: 04/11/10 08:32 pm Title: Rise of the Fallen
:) i loved it
Date: 04/11/10 08:23 pm Title: Rise of the Fallen
I am SOOOO glad you wrote another chapter, I kept this story on my tracked list just hoping you would return to it. Thank you so much =) Excellent!
Date: 04/11/10 07:19 pm Title: Rise of the Fallen
please dont tell me this is the end! this story is soo great. :)
Date: 04/11/10 06:15 pm Title: Rise of the Fallen
I love love love love love this fic and it needs to be updated again soon. *enthustiasticnod*
Date: 04/11/10 02:23 pm Title: Rise of the Fallen
oh,
soo beautiful!
now that tom nurished bill.
the lavenders live! :D
Date: 04/11/10 05:18 am Title: Rise of the Fallen
every time i read this book i go into a fit of hysterical giggles, random outbursts of crying or squeeling!!! its the most beautiful amazing book ever!!! XD I'm sorry to hear you struggled in this chapter but all in all it is BEAUTIFUL!!! awesome job! thank you for giving me the opportunity to cry, giggle, laugh, scream, and melt into a puddle of pink mush in my chair. XD xxx
Date: 04/11/10 03:20 am Title: Rise of the Fallen
This is such a beautiful story.I love it.
Date: 04/11/10 12:45 am Title: Rise of the Fallen
oooooooooomgggggggg I love it
Date: 04/10/10 07:20 pm Title: Rise of the Fallen
so i only discovered this AMZING story yesterday...read it today and i must day you have a way with plot, character and emotional connecting that i have never come across before...i just love this story so much, deserves to be published...i would definitly buy a copy XP
though i must say you completely played with my heart strings throughout the entire story...oh how loved the twists and turns, the journey tom went through....i SOOOO upset that it'll be ending soon but i'm just so extremely happy with the way it was written that i cant even hate you for it hehe
much, much, much and lotsa love
-xx
Date: 04/10/10 12:42 pm Title: Rise of the Fallen
UGH! YOU ARE SO GOOD AT WRITING.
Jesus, lol. I'm absolutely speechless. I have nothing to say but.. god damn lol.
Much, much muchmuchmuch love, my dear.
Wow lol