Date: 05/12/09 10:38 am Title: Grandma Annabelle (Part II)
Happy (late) birthday! I'm happy to meet Bill :) he seems so sweet.
Author's Response: Thanks for the late birthday wishes haha!
Date: 05/12/09 10:37 am Title: Grandma Annabelle (Part I)
Ahhh where's Bill?!? :)
Author's Response: He's coming soon!
Date: 05/12/09 10:36 am Title: Taste and See
Wow. This story is great!
Author's Response: Thank you. :]
Date: 05/12/09 04:26 am Title: Paint it on My Heart
What a wonderfully written story. I love the intense details you give, they really set the scene. I can already tell that this story will become a favorite of mine. Write more soon.
Author's Response: You just made my day. I love you. Thanks so much! :)
Date: 05/12/09 03:36 am Title: Paint it on My Heart
You updated!!!XD*squeals^^* At last, some decent story updated around here ahahaha..XD
Bad, bad Tomi!>.< Really hate it when people judge you immediately just because you're trying to be different. Ugh... Really sucks big time.
I want to know more about Bill!!!XD Hope you'll update sooooooooon!!^^ *huggZz*
Author's Response: aww *hugs you tight* that means alot! Mmhhmmm I hate that too; it's going to be one of the central issues in the story. Hehehe patience, everything about Bill will be revealed in due time! =] danke for the review
Date: 05/12/09 03:16 am Title: Paint it on My Heart
Oh Tom...Don't be like this cause at the end of the day, it's not worth it and everyone that you think you can count on will leave you high and dry. And this 'fag' would more than likely stick by you even after you're such an ass to him.
Author's Response: So true! Well put. Thanks for the review =]
Date: 05/11/09 11:01 pm Title: Paint it on My Heart
Those bastards!
Author's Response: True that. The G's gone mean...!
Date: 05/11/09 10:55 pm Title: Paint it on My Heart
Aw shit. That totally makes me hate Tom for being a coward. He's gotta stand up for people! I hope Annabelle beats him up, because that would be awesome. =D
Author's Response: HAHAHAHA that would be hilarious ;] maybe annabelle is secretly a ninja..?? haha :P
Date: 05/11/09 09:32 pm Title: Paint it on My Heart
poor andreas and poor bill.
Tom is such a coward, I do hope he'll learn from his mistakes soon
Author's Response: Agreed. =]
Date: 05/11/09 09:03 pm Title: Paint it on My Heart
wow DAMN! lol i like it but try and tone down trhe detail just a tad
Author's Response: too much?? sorry I get a little carried away hehe :P
Date: 05/11/09 09:01 pm Title: Paint it on My Heart
omg............okz update soooonnn..plz...omg..let it be bill catch him..and make tom apologize..idk mae tom kry in front of him...dont make it bad=[=[plz..
Author's Response: hmm, I guess we'll just have to see what happens next! thanks for the review! :]
Date: 05/11/09 08:46 pm Title: Paint it on My Heart
Oh, that was so sad :(
*bops Tom* What he did to Andreas was so mean. That poor kid...
I didn't think Georg and Gustav would turn out to be assholes xD But then again, Tom deserved it for even CONSIDERING spray-painting the house. I can't wait to find out who catches him :D
Love, love, love the chapter. I'm so glad you could update =]
Author's Response: Yup, Tom is a meany. Bill has his work cut out for him! THANK YOU FOR THE REVIEW :]]]]
Date: 05/04/09 12:51 pm Title: Grandma Annabelle (Part II)
I'm glad to see this updated, and I love the new banner by the way.
I'm so intrigued by Bill. With the way Grandma Annabelle acted in the beginning before Bill entered, I thought that Bill would be some deranged manicly depressed freak, or something. But you totally fooled me, and now I'm dying to know what exactly is ailing him. Bill has lots of quirks and I've been left guessing about him, which is always the best. :) I can't wait to find out more about him. The praying threw me for a loop, and I'm wondering why he didn't eat anything, but I don't want to jump to conclusions.
I'm still hooked and anxious for more, so I hope you will update soon. :)
Author's Response: Thanks =] I finally decided to ask somebody who knows what they're doing (unlike me) to make the banner. Yes, Bill is quite a complicated, interesting fellow with a past. We'll just have to delve more into it soon, eh? Don't worry, Bill's not some religious-nutcase, but I won't give TOO much away. Thank you so much for your feeback! =] *hugs*
Date: 05/03/09 10:02 pm Title: Grandma Annabelle (Part II)
Who ISN'T cranky when they're hungry? I know I am. What exactly are Jorg and Grandma talking about?
Author's Response: So true. I know I am! My parents can attest to that haha =] well, that is a very good question. Looks like we'll just have to wait and see doesn't it? =]]]
Date: 05/03/09 07:00 pm Title: Grandma Annabelle (Part II)
Haha I feel Tom's problem! I hate being dragged to friend/family things and my parents force me to mingle with other "kids". Sorry, got my own friends already heh
Ooooh, what's up with Bill? Crazy? Super-religious to the point of craziness? Now that I find a bit strange, but whatever. Care to share? =D
Happy sweet sixteen btw! Update soon please!
Author's Response: Me Too! It's so annoying and awkward haha. Lol Don't freak out- Bill's not that religious. They just say grace at their house, it's no big deal. It's just supposed to symbolize the close family community of the atmosphere. Thank you =]
Date: 05/02/09 05:03 pm Title: Grandma Annabelle (Part II)
I swear I can't get enough of this. This is one of the only stories where I actually take the time to read it word for word, because ever sentence opens up more distinction and imagery to the story. You truly have a knack for keeping peoples attention.
It's nice to finally meet Bill. He is a crazy thing isn't he? Haha, Tom needs to get a grip of himself and lighten up. Cranky indeed, my my.
Loving it thoroughly hun!
--Mona
Author's Response: Thank you so much; you are too kind =] hehehe I know Tom is quite the grouch lol
Date: 05/02/09 01:50 pm Title: Grandma Annabelle (Part II)
Cute! :D
I can't help but wonder what's wrong with Bill. I'm sure we'll find out later, though ;)
And Tom...is hilarious.
Oooh, and happy birthday! =]
Author's Response: Thank you =]
Date: 05/02/09 01:41 pm Title: Grandma Annabelle (Part II)
Happy Birthday!
Glad to see more of Bill here...
He seems so carefree and i like it, you could also see that as much as Tom doesn't like it, he's drawn to Bill.
Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you very much!! =] yes, I'm glad you picked up on that-it's just what I was going for.
Date: 05/02/09 01:11 pm Title: Grandma Annabelle (Part II)
Tom's sure is cranky when hungry lol!XD And wouldn't it be embarrassing if he went back with no pants on? LOL...
Bill's being a sweetheart. But what's wrong with him..??T____T I can feel the adults were talking about him. Is something wrong with him..??T^T Or is it another person??
OMG I can't wait for more updates...XDXD
Author's Response: Yes he is! HAHAHA a pantless Tom would go over real well at the dinner table :PrnWe will just have to find out later hehehernthanks so much for the review! =]
Date: 05/02/09 12:06 pm Title: Grandma Annabelle (Part II)
OOO: Awww...Bill is adorable! I'm so curious as to whatever Bill's ailment is. Please upate soon!
Author's Response: Hmm...maybe it's not an ailment? =P