Date: 04/26/09 08:31 pm Title: Grandma Annabelle (Part I)
I'm excited for the next chapter! Could it be that Bill will be there? =O lol
Good chappy, wish it was a bit longer though, but I like it! =D
Author's Response: Hmm! Quite possibly :PP he has already had a glimpse of a certain black-haired someone twice. Sorry it wasn't long; I had to debate between adding the dinner scene into this chapter, but that would make it freakishly long, so I'm saving it for the next one :) Thanks for the review!
Date: 04/12/09 09:14 am Title: Taste and See
Oh, this is really good so far =] I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!
Date: 04/12/09 03:35 am Title: Taste and See
wonderfully written.
I'm enchanted by it.
Author's Response: I'm happy that you like it =] thank you!!
Date: 04/12/09 01:48 am Title: Taste and See
Oh, this is absolutely beautiful! You're so eloquent!
The plot sounds extremely interesting, and this chapter was too. It drew me in, and by the end of paragraph three, I was won over completely.
The vivid imagery completely sucks you into a new world, makes you see what he's seeing, think what Tom's thinking, and feel what he feels. You have a powerful talent with words, and I look forward to reading more! :)
Author's Response: Wow thank you so much! I'm glad you like it. =]
Date: 04/12/09 01:32 am Title: Taste and See
Ooooh, I like where this is going! Nice use of details in your descriptions - I like that a lot. Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks!!! =] I really appreciate the review.
Date: 04/12/09 01:15 am Title: Taste and See
it's a really nice start
and I like your writing style.
please continue soon. :]
Author's Response: Thank you very much =]
Date: 04/11/09 10:51 pm Title: Taste and See
Oooh. It sounds interesting so far. I can't wait to read more. What inspired this, if I may ask?
Author's Response: Thank you =D Well, I'm not really sure. I guess I just wanted to try a different storyline with an outdoorsy-setting. And the first thing to came to mind was a cabin that my family owns on the Gorge so I guess this is kind of based off of that.