Date: 07/20/09 09:49 pm Title: Winds of Change
One thing (among the many amazing things about your writing and your story) that I REALLY love is how you are able to incorporate the surroundings so intricately in each chapter. You always describe the nature surrounding them so beautifully and it really paints a picture and makes the scenes so much more enjoyable. I really liked the whole sunset-thing! It was also really symbolic, although subtly.
Awesome! Ich LIEBE. :]
Author's Response: Aww thanks for the wonderful complements. I'm a sucker for beautiful sunsets haha, and I just couldn't help myself!
Date: 07/20/09 09:46 pm Title: Winds of Change
I thought this whole scene was really beautiful. You didn't rush anything, and you made sure to let us know that Tom is trying to change, but he is having a lot of trouble. You let us know that his inner conflicts and demons and whatever else that's eating him inside is STILL THERE even though he's choosing to fight it somehow. These conflicts didn't just evaporate. It was really well developed and I can't wait for things to progress!
This was a huge turning point! And it lived up to and OVER my expectations.
Good job, buddy. =)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad that you approve of my characterization and plot haha :]] Yeah, I guess this chapter was a little foreshadowing of things to come if you read carefully. Tom can never fully let go of his past...and even though it may seem he's making a big deal out of 'one gay remark', there is still much more to be revealed. *evil smirk*. I always love your feedback, thank you so much!
Date: 07/20/09 07:52 pm Title: Winds of Change
*Sniffs as well* I think I smell it too! I agree. Dialogue wasn't needed. I know what it's like to feel like it's not goo enough when that happens. But really, it was perfect. Short chapters can be good
Author's Response: Thanks for the support!! I was so nervous because usually I have multiple events in a chapter and this one was so short, but I'm really happy that most people liked it. It was about time to mix things up a bit =] thank you for reviewing!
Date: 07/20/09 07:26 pm Title: Winds of Change
I think this chapter was fine =]
I like the fact that Tom's somewhat changing x]
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, he most definitely is. It's a slow process, but a very gratifying one ;]
Date: 07/20/09 04:06 pm Title: Winds of Change
aww=] so cute..but sad=[ update soon plz thx=]
Author's Response: bittersweet! hehe. thanks for reviewing!
Date: 07/20/09 02:46 pm Title: Winds of Change
I love your story, its so well written that I feel like Im actually there in the room or outside wherever Tom and Bill are, watching their story coming together. keep it comin!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying this! I appreciate the review =]
Date: 07/20/09 02:46 pm Title: Winds of Change
i absolutly love it
Author's Response: thanks soooo much! I absolutely love YOU--thanks for reviewing!
Date: 07/20/09 12:33 pm Title: Winds of Change
Stupid Georg hurting Bill =(
Author's Response: Seriously! Georg = gigantic dummy!
Date: 07/20/09 10:06 am Title: Winds of Change
so when I checked my email, and I found an update to :avander Fields, I, no joke, 'Yessss'd and spazzed.
XD
I've been waiting for this update, after what happened at the end of the last chapter.
sooo, update soon?
I can't wait to see their relationship grow. :)
Author's Response: Haha I know the feeling!! rnHopefully you will be able to spazz again in the near future, the chapter is already written, I just gotta post it! THANKS FOR REVIEWING.
Date: 07/20/09 07:18 am Title: Winds of Change
You're gonna make me cry =/
Tom's emotions came across wonderfully, hun. You could tell how conflicted he was about getting closer to Bill, yet he decided to do it anyway. I'm sure Bill will be VERY grateful for what he did. I can't help but wonder what it was that Bill did. Hopefully we'll find out soon, eh? ;)
I loved it ♥
Author's Response: Awwww don't cry! Thanks so much for the complements. I tried really hard to show that even though some of himself wants to be friends with Bill, there's still a long way to go before Tom can be comfortable without anything weighing him down. And of course we will find out...eventually! :] your reviews really mean alot, THANK YOUUUU.
Date: 07/20/09 06:23 am Title: Winds of Change
Even if it was short and less dialgoue, the way you described the scene was well done..^^ It's a sad chapter, but it's a start of something new.. HeeeeXDXD
Tom und Bill moments... Ayeeeee
Author's Response: Aww thank you!!! You're righttt, it truly is. THANKS FOR REVIEWING! :]]]]
Date: 07/20/09 05:19 am Title: Winds of Change
Are you aware of how beautiful this chapter is? I found it absolutely breathtaking. I can't wait to see how their relationship changes. :D
Author's Response: *smiles like a doofus* your complements mean so much to me!! I was really nervous that it would be too short and un-fulfilling.
rnI can't wait to WRITE how their relationship changes :D thank you for the review.
Date: 07/20/09 05:15 am Title: Winds of Change
Awwww... I wonder what happened to my pookie Bill?! I feel bad for him. I hope Tom doesn't hurt his feelings on the near future.
Author's Response: Hmm, there's some clues! I guess we will just have to wait and see how their relationship develops :]]] thanks for reviewing!
Date: 07/14/09 10:38 am Title: Fair and Unfair
Your inspiration is beautiful, every bit as gorgeous as your chapter. I'm glad we're finally finding out why people hate Bill and everything, it was nothing like I expected. I am UBER excited for another update and I do hope with all my heart it comes soon.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! =) I really appreciate your support!
Date: 07/01/09 03:03 am Title: Fair and Unfair
You've got me hooked.
:)
Author's Response: Great! I'm so glad you're enjoying it! =]
Date: 07/01/09 02:38 am Title: Fair and Unfair
ok i know i already send you one but still thats so sad... poor poor bill i hope hes ok... and how can those other ppl not leave comments their retarted this is a really good story
Author's Response: That's alright, I don't mind another comment! Hopefully he will be okay ;] aww thanks so much! I really appreciate the support! As long as people enjoy the story I am happy. Although, it's reallllly nice to have good feedback haha. Anyways, thanks for reviewing!!
Date: 06/30/09 11:33 pm Title: Fair and Unfair
George is a bitch dude.
Author's Response: ah-GREED. *slaps Georg for being a bitch*
Date: 06/30/09 07:24 pm Title: Fair and Unfair
Rofl I loved this chapter! So picteresque... I could see Bill running with Tom in my head :D
Author's Response: Awesome; I'm glad you liked it!! =]]] just to clarify: are you referring to when Bill dragged him to the ferris wheel or the last sentence where Bill takes of and Tom follows?
Date: 06/30/09 05:09 am Title: Fair and Unfair
Hey I really like this story, but it sounds like your really busy but try and update, I read a lot of great stroies but the another of the story seems to not update much. Please keep to the story, its so good I cant say in words how good its turning out. Hope to see more breathtakeing chap's in the future :P
Author's Response: Yeah, I'm VERY busy but I will OF COURSE try to make time for this story because I really love writing it =) THANKS SO MUCH for the complements!! It makes me happy that you like it.
Date: 06/30/09 04:38 am Title: Fair and Unfair
Hi.
*lame review caused by my OCD problem where total number of reviews have to be even numbers and multiples of 5*
Author's Response: *sigh* what are we going to do with you?? =]