Date: 06/26/09 05:38 am Title: Curious Night
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i love bill.
like, so much.
you have no idea.
he's soo adorable!
but....butter raisins.....really?
GROSS lol!
Author's Response: crazy person! :D
Date: 06/26/09 05:37 am Title: Paint it on My Heart
me encanta! haaa i love how I was in your room AS you were typing this up. I feel special.
Author's Response: *reminisces* oh yes, you should :PP
Date: 06/26/09 05:36 am Title: Grandma Annabelle (Part II)
this is sooo cute ^.^ heheh
Author's Response: ;]
Date: 06/26/09 05:35 am Title: Grandma Annabelle (Part I)
BILLYBILLYBILLY...he's coming!!! i know it ;] *pretends that you didn't already tell me every detail of this story* iloveyou!
Author's Response: HUSH! don't you go spoiling anything for the readers now! If you do, I'll....uhh...subject you to Georg rapage! and MORE EVIL THINGS. yes *maniac laughter*..... rnrn*5 minutes pass* rnrnalright, my motivation for your suffering has passed. I LOVE YOU TOOO! :)
Date: 06/26/09 05:34 am Title: Taste and See
HIIIIIIIIIIIIIII! I am reviewing every chapter of every story you've written because I love you THAT FRICKIN MUCH :] and you're writing, too!
Author's Response: silly, silly goose! *gives love* haha
Date: 06/21/09 02:08 pm Title: Curious Night
Ah sorry for such a late review, but at least I'm reviewing, I suppose!
In response to the previous chapter, I like the little snippet of Tom's past that you included, and also the insight it provided to Tom's character. Tom is obviously very sensitive to other's thoughts about him and although that may have changed after some time, the fact still remains that he ditched his best friend simply because of rumors. It will be interesting how he treats Bill in a place that there's not many people around to judge him. Of course, there are Georg and Gustav, but I hope that they'll be Tom's only problem.
Bill seems very interesting, and also very eager for friends. He's quite quirky and unique, and I like how Tom is both attracted to him and---as I see it---slightly scared by him. I also really liked this quote;
"Some things that appear strange taste sweet,"
Like Bill, maybe? :)
Anyway, still a great story, can't wait for you to update :)!
Author's Response: I don't mind a late review; I'm just happy that you are reviewing in the first place! Yes, you caught onto Tom's character VERY well. I'm portraying him as someone very insecure. And yes, I agree! It will be interesting :P He also has major internal conflicts taking place (Georg and Gustav only add stress and push him in the wrong direction) that will ultimately determine the progression of Tom&Bill's relationship. Tom is very complex and Bill's simplicity throws him off guard. Hehe well basically everything about Bill throws him off guard ;) And yes, I'm sure Bill DOES taste sweet lol. That was supposed to be a subtle allusion-metaphor-thingy but I'm not very skilled with that stuff. *newbie writer*...Anyways, thanks for the feeback! I really do appreciate it :)
Date: 06/19/09 12:24 am Title: Curious Night
On a scale of 1 to this is amazing, this is seriously amazing. Can't wait for the rest.
Author's Response: YOU are amazing =D thanks for the wonderful compliment.
Date: 06/17/09 12:54 am Title: Curious Night
heyy I am glad Bill and Tom are getting somewhere!! Can't wait to see how they get together...if they do....PLEASE? :) hehe
Author's Response: Hahaha *points to the 'main pairing' section of the summary*!! But yeah, I just spent the entire day totally re-planning the future plot. With the first five chapters I have been writing just what comes to mind, but now I have a real plan and I'm excited! Thanks for the review :) rn
Date: 06/16/09 07:34 pm Title: Curious Night
i love this
Author's Response: thank you :]
Date: 06/14/09 02:43 am Title: Curious Night
Your story is like the type of water you rarely come across in the wild that is warm, but cool at the same time and just right to play in. Completely relaxing and fun and energetic all at once. Every small detail is something I absolutely love and your story is amazing, truly amazing. I wish i could write as good as you because I love this style of writing more than anything.
Totally sorry about your groundation from computer and stuff. Thanks so much for the update though, I loved it. I can't wait to get to read more of your story :)
Author's Response: This review literally made me do a happy dance. Your compliments warm my heart!!! Thank you SO MUCH. *hugs*
Date: 06/13/09 10:27 pm Title: Curious Night
*Le Gasp* Tom doesn't really have a heart, does he? Oh the world really must be flat! I thought it was so sweet that Bill covered for him. I can't wait for the obstacles you have in store!
This chapter was amazing, as always. Sorry I'm so late on my review *hides*
Author's Response: Flat, indeed. :P Well, other conflicts won't fully surface until later chapters...But I mean, the biggest obstacle has already been revealed, and that is TOM himself! (and his darn attitude)
Date: 06/13/09 03:13 am Title: Curious Night
OMG OMG OMG!!! This story is sooooo awesome.... Its like that one story I read, no wait I think it was another story hmmm.... Nevermind XD. I thought you would never update! I was all excited reading this. This story totally needs to be featured!!! Bu I don't know how.... Hmmm...BIG FAN!!
Author's Response: I appreciate your support! YOU ROCK :DD *hugs*
Date: 06/12/09 08:20 pm Title: Curious Night
Ugh, loved it! Please no more abscences :D I was sad during that wait
Author's Response: THANK YOU! I'll try my hardest to update regularly!!
Date: 06/12/09 01:37 pm Title: Curious Night
Bill is such a sweetheart =]
I love how guity and shameful Tom felt when he was about to get caught. He DOES have bit of a heart, eh? *haha*
But he's nowhere near deserving of Bill's treatment. Not yet, anyway. He's getting there, though ;) Great chapter!
Author's Response: I agree with all that you said :D thanks so much!!
Date: 06/12/09 12:51 pm Title: Curious Night
I CAN SEE YOU UNDER THE BITTERNESS, TOM! Bill has managed to shake your world, hasn't he? Since day ONE and you are powerless to stop it. You're ready for change, m'love and that's why you're angry, because you're trying to fight it.
And he just saved your sorry ass, so I would just shut up and be grateful.
There's a decent human underneath the hurt, Tom. You felt it as sure as the shame that you felt when Annabelle thought you did the vandalising. Time to change, dear. Time to change.
And don't be ashamed of who you are. Bill isn't, and he's had it rough too.
It was a beautiful chapter and definitely worth the wait.
And sorry about the grounded part. That has to suck when all you wanna do is write. :S
Author's Response: Yes! I'm so glad you are picking up on what I'm trying to get across with the story so far! XD Your reviews really mean alot, thank you. And yes, being grounded does suck...I wait until my whole house is asleep then sneak down on the computer to read/write fanfiction lol! My schedule has become nocturnal. I'm awful.
Date: 06/12/09 12:46 pm Title: Curious Night
Oh!!!!!! I love adorable, weird Bill x3
I was so happy when you updated this. This is one of the cutest stories >x]!
hahah. Much love ^_^
Author's Response: I know, right?! How can you not???? Jeez Tom lol. Aww thanks so much! *hugs*
Date: 06/12/09 11:35 am Title: Curious Night
AN UPDATE!! AN UPDATE!! Waaaaaaahhh!!!*throws confetti*
Yup, Bill's weird, but he's just sooo annoyingly cute in a good way.. Ahahaha..XD I wonder what happened to him in the past. Hmm..-___- And TOM!! He should really be thankful and think twice about Bill. He's adoraBill and all..XD And he needs to work on his issues too..-___-
THANK YOU for the update!! *mwahhuggZz*
Author's Response: He is a cutie, isn't he? hehehe. Lol yes Tom has many issues to work out before much can happen! THANKS SO MUCH FOR THE REVIEW! ich liebe dich!
Date: 06/08/09 07:40 pm Title: Taste and See
It's a wonderful that I didn't expect what I got :) Your summary isn't exactly misleading, it's just you get so much more in the story than you would think from the summary.
Author's Response: Okay! Thank you :D
Date: 06/08/09 11:04 am Title: Paint it on My Heart
Wow, that was a long chapter, Uber detailed, but Uber awesome! Anyways I totally enjoyed it like always. I wonder if Tom will stay friends with Georg and Gustav after this *ponders* I was curious if you write the things at the beginning of the chapter yourself or if you find them? Either way they're totally great. ANYWAYS PLEASE, PLEASE,
PLEASE, Update soon. I am dying to keep reading this you're an amazing author and I need more :)
Author's Response: you are awesome! thanks for reviewing all the chapters! Anyways, judging by how I developed Tom's personality he could go both ways I think :P Yup, I write those paragraphs at the beginning! I just choose a human characteristic that fits with the chapter and explore it in ways that tie into the situations. I'm glad you like them! I was actually planning on updating yesterday but I can't find the notebook that I wrote the new chapters in :( But I shall search! And hopefully put something new up in the next few days!
Date: 06/08/09 10:46 am Title: Grandma Annabelle (Part II)
Lol Tom is very cranky when hungry. Anyways I love your detail so much because it really gives you a sense of being there and you know exactly how the person is feeling at that moment. Now I am really curious as to what's up with Bill, and I can't wait to keep reading on to see how everything progresses.
Author's Response: Thanks! When I write I have a habbit of using alot of detail because I want to make it just perfect to imagine...sometimes I go a little overboard! Hmm yes, in later chapters we shall see :)