Date: 07/20/09 07:18 am Title: Winds of Change
You're gonna make me cry =/
Tom's emotions came across wonderfully, hun. You could tell how conflicted he was about getting closer to Bill, yet he decided to do it anyway. I'm sure Bill will be VERY grateful for what he did. I can't help but wonder what it was that Bill did. Hopefully we'll find out soon, eh? ;)
I loved it ♥
Author's Response: Awwww don't cry! Thanks so much for the complements. I tried really hard to show that even though some of himself wants to be friends with Bill, there's still a long way to go before Tom can be comfortable without anything weighing him down. And of course we will find out...eventually! :] your reviews really mean alot, THANK YOUUUU.
Date: 07/20/09 06:23 am Title: Winds of Change
Even if it was short and less dialgoue, the way you described the scene was well done..^^ It's a sad chapter, but it's a start of something new.. HeeeeXDXD
Tom und Bill moments... Ayeeeee
Author's Response: Aww thank you!!! You're righttt, it truly is. THANKS FOR REVIEWING! :]]]]
Date: 07/20/09 05:19 am Title: Winds of Change
Are you aware of how beautiful this chapter is? I found it absolutely breathtaking. I can't wait to see how their relationship changes. :D
Author's Response: *smiles like a doofus* your complements mean so much to me!! I was really nervous that it would be too short and un-fulfilling.
rnI can't wait to WRITE how their relationship changes :D thank you for the review.
Date: 07/20/09 05:15 am Title: Winds of Change
Awwww... I wonder what happened to my pookie Bill?! I feel bad for him. I hope Tom doesn't hurt his feelings on the near future.
Author's Response: Hmm, there's some clues! I guess we will just have to wait and see how their relationship develops :]]] thanks for reviewing!
Date: 07/14/09 10:38 am Title: Fair and Unfair
Your inspiration is beautiful, every bit as gorgeous as your chapter. I'm glad we're finally finding out why people hate Bill and everything, it was nothing like I expected. I am UBER excited for another update and I do hope with all my heart it comes soon.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! =) I really appreciate your support!
Date: 07/01/09 03:03 am Title: Fair and Unfair
You've got me hooked.
:)
Author's Response: Great! I'm so glad you're enjoying it! =]
Date: 07/01/09 02:38 am Title: Fair and Unfair
ok i know i already send you one but still thats so sad... poor poor bill i hope hes ok... and how can those other ppl not leave comments their retarted this is a really good story
Author's Response: That's alright, I don't mind another comment! Hopefully he will be okay ;] aww thanks so much! I really appreciate the support! As long as people enjoy the story I am happy. Although, it's reallllly nice to have good feedback haha. Anyways, thanks for reviewing!!
Date: 06/30/09 11:33 pm Title: Fair and Unfair
George is a bitch dude.
Author's Response: ah-GREED. *slaps Georg for being a bitch*
Date: 06/30/09 07:24 pm Title: Fair and Unfair
Rofl I loved this chapter! So picteresque... I could see Bill running with Tom in my head :D
Author's Response: Awesome; I'm glad you liked it!! =]]] just to clarify: are you referring to when Bill dragged him to the ferris wheel or the last sentence where Bill takes of and Tom follows?
Date: 06/30/09 05:09 am Title: Fair and Unfair
Hey I really like this story, but it sounds like your really busy but try and update, I read a lot of great stroies but the another of the story seems to not update much. Please keep to the story, its so good I cant say in words how good its turning out. Hope to see more breathtakeing chap's in the future :P
Author's Response: Yeah, I'm VERY busy but I will OF COURSE try to make time for this story because I really love writing it =) THANKS SO MUCH for the complements!! It makes me happy that you like it.
Date: 06/30/09 04:38 am Title: Fair and Unfair
Hi.
*lame review caused by my OCD problem where total number of reviews have to be even numbers and multiples of 5*
Author's Response: *sigh* what are we going to do with you?? =]
Date: 06/30/09 04:36 am Title: Fair and Unfair
Oooh this is getting very interesting! Please continue! you can't leave us hanging like that :P
Author's Response: Hehehe no worries, more is on the way!! =]
Date: 06/30/09 04:17 am Title: Fair and Unfair
OMK OMK OMK... Lemme have him, lemme have him!!!! *growls*
Go on!!! What happened???
Author's Response: Lol! Thanks for the review!
Date: 06/30/09 02:14 am Title: Fair and Unfair
oh my god wats wrong wit bill... why does everybody trat him diffrent... wat happend to his parents... wat going to happen... im losing my mind over hear wats going on plz keep writing
Author's Response: =DDD coming soon!!
Date: 06/30/09 01:52 am Title: Fair and Unfair
It's ok. I appreciate your attempted irony. This chapter was great though. :D
Author's Response: Haha..kind of a crash and burn, but oh well!! Thank you for the review :] I'm happy you're enjoying my story!
Date: 06/30/09 12:56 am Title: Fair and Unfair
Okay.
I seriously LOVE this story.
How is it that this story only has 70-ish reviews?
It baffles me, it really does.
You're an amazingly talented writer.
I love the description you put into everything.
Makes me feel like I'm really there.
I won't say 'Update soon' because I hate when people do that, but I will say I can't wait to see what happens next!
It has me on the edge of my seat =]
Author's Response: Wow, thank you very very much for the high praise!!! I'm soooo glad you like it :]
Date: 06/30/09 12:38 am Title: Fair and Unfair
Georg, you meanie!!!
I wonder what happened to Bill-___-
And Tom, you did the right thing. Go after Bill!! Lol..XD
So glad you updated..XD
Author's Response: Yay, we are seeing progress in Tom :))) run, boy, run! Hehe. So glad you reviewed! thank you!
Date: 06/30/09 12:37 am Title: Fair and Unfair
*Huge eyes* Wow. I gotta know what that was all about!
Author's Response: Oh yes! We will all know...in due time *evil laughter* :] thanks for the review!
Date: 06/30/09 12:28 am Title: Fair and Unfair
Ohh!!! Georg's usually my favorite character in the stories I read, why is he so mean >:|! *scowls at Georg* Bastard.
Well, I think you did a fine job =]. It was worth the wait.
Much love ^^!
Author's Response: I know! I had to make him the bad guy *sigh* Thank youu =] much love in return!
Date: 06/30/09 12:07 am Title: Fair and Unfair
Hey girly! :] I've been on here all day because I have nothing better to do....hehehe. So anyways, really good stuff right here! We're getting a small insight as to Bill and Bill's 'issues' which is intriguing.
Georg is a fucking douchebag, GOTT!!
Author's Response: awesome me toooo :D I've read about 12 fanfics since 8 o'clock this morning hehe. And then I was like 'Oh I should probably update MY fanfic' lol. I just get so caught up in reading! I love youuuuu thanks for reviewing all of my shit :] I would do the same, but you know how I am. I don't give reviews haha, just think them in my head! So yeah we learn things about Bill! woohoo! and yeah..... I feel bad for making Georg a douche because it's so out of character. Then again, we don't really know what his real character is, do we? *contemplates* haha thanks for reviewing chica!