Date: 09/07/09 05:34 am Title: In the Same Deep Water as You
Sorry to hear about your mom, I hope she's doing alright =)
This was an awesome chapter. The way Tom acts towards Alice is kinda childish, she seems like a nice person who just wants to bond. Nothing wrong with bonding with another human, its the circle of life lol. Bill is suppose to be innocent, so why is he skinny dipping? Lmao, but I don't really mine it though, were only 8 chapters in, and already getting some Bill/Tom nudity =P
That last part was so beautifully written, though the whole story is, but that part has got to be my favorite.
Your really inspiring me to get back into writing, but I haven't done it in soooo long, I'm probably very out of tune.
Great chapter, update soon :)
Author's Response: She is better, thank you. Yes, Tom is childish towards Alice, but he does have his reasons...or maybe he just uses her to take out his frustration with the world :P HAHA Well, I was trying to make it like he was skinny dipping in an innocent way... Kind of like how he's unaware of the implications of nudity because he's just so effortlessly free with himself. That sounded slutty, but I think you catch my drift here lol. Thank you so much for the compliment! It makes me really happy to know I inspire you, and I want to encourage you to do so! If your heart wants it, go for it, and don't worry about writing in tune or whatever, write for yourself, not for other people. I'm sure it'd be wonderful! :)
Date: 09/02/09 07:54 pm Title: In the Same Deep Water as You
i hope both you and your mom are doing alright. this is a great chapter. i think this is a great story. it is moving slowly, but that fits. keep up the wonderful work, i look forward to more! =)
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I wanted to keep the plot more realistic by taking it slowly and I'm happy to hear you don't think it's TOO slow, because it's hard to find the balance. :]
Date: 09/01/09 11:13 pm Title: In the Same Deep Water as You
this chap has got to be one of my favorites. the last part was beautiful!
Author's Response: Thank you (:
Date: 09/01/09 10:59 pm Title: In the Same Deep Water as You
I LOVED the last line. It was so...perfect
Author's Response: Thanks a bundle! :D It totally came to me out of the blue.
Date: 09/01/09 08:17 am Title: In the Same Deep Water as You
OMG, please write more soon!
This is such a fantastic story, I really love it.
*adds to favorites*
Author's Response: My time is really crunched right now, but I'll try my hardest! Yayyy thank you SO MUCH :D
Date: 09/01/09 03:23 am Title: In the Same Deep Water as You
tom is so hard headed why wont he admit he likes him
Author's Response: Because he doesn't really know the difference between friendship and something more than that because he hasn't experienced GENUINE feelings since he was a young boy. Tom is a little lacking in the social department, considering he's been hiding behind a facade for the better part of his teenage life. :)
Date: 09/01/09 02:37 am Title: In the Same Deep Water as You
I've a review for you, dear.
I'm sorry about your mother. I hope everything's okay.
I really love this story and I am so glad I stumbled upon it. Can't wait for the next chapter. ;)
Date: 09/01/09 02:37 am Title: In the Same Deep Water as You
I've a review for you, dear.
I'm sorry about your mother. I hope everything's okay.
I really love this story and I am so glad I stumbled upon it. Can't wait for rhe next chapter. ;)
Author's Response: She is now, thank you for the concern; I really appreciate it. It makes me happy to know you like the story thanks for reviewing [:
Date: 09/01/09 01:46 am Title: In the Same Deep Water as You
I'm really sorry to hear about your mom. ): I wish her well. On a happier note, I will say that I thoroughly enjoyed this. Your fic always know how to put a smile on my face. :D
Author's Response: Thank you. It puts a smile on my face to know that this put a smile on your face! :) If that makes sense.
Date: 09/01/09 01:02 am Title: In the Same Deep Water as You
O_______O
-intense~!
:O
loved it! i could totally imagine tom freaking out at seeing bill's beautiful ass.
XD
update soon! :D
Author's Response: Oh my, who WOULDN'T freak out?! Especially Tom, who doesn't need another reason to feel attracted to Bill. Who am I kidding, he totally needs it :P Thanks for the review!
Date: 08/31/09 10:30 pm Title: In the Same Deep Water as You
plz update soon..make them kizz girl=]
Author's Response: Summer ended for me two days ago, so I'm going to have a lot of trouble updating for a while. Junior year of high school is already very difficult with the classes I'm taking! Weekend are reserved for thff though, so don't worry :) Haha and MAYBE they will...just maybe!
Date: 08/31/09 10:11 pm Title: In the Same Deep Water as You
I'm really sorry to hear about your mom =[ *hugs*
And I loved the ending to this chapter; it was really touching. Makes me wish I had something like that =[
Lol, but anyway, good job, and much, much love.
Author's Response: It's alright now, but thank you for the concern! *hugs also* I know what you mean haha. Writing about people falling inlove makes me strangely lonely. Thank you so much for the review! Much love in return! :]
Date: 08/31/09 08:48 pm Title: In the Same Deep Water as You
Still love this story man.
The way you write.
Ugh.
Their relationship is slowly growing into something beautiful. I can definitely see it going past the stage of "friendly" just by the way Tom is reacting to Bill. He's very nervous, and scared...to get close to someone...and I think perhaps even more than that...Idk. Either way I love it!
--Mona
Author's Response: I'm so glad that you still enjoy this story! That's a very good point, but as you will hopefully see, Tom has a very hard time deciphering feelings of friendship from other romantic ones, considering he has only had one friend in his life and is inexperienced with these things, especially when it comes to things about himself. He's scared beyong belief, my friend. You're right on track! Thank you for the review! (: I really love hearing your feedback.
Date: 08/31/09 11:08 am Title: In the Same Deep Water as You
wow,, a beautiful chapter of an amazing story! and im sorry about your mother, i hope she gets well soon! :D
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Date: 08/31/09 08:46 am Title: In the Same Deep Water as You
I believe Tom has to work on the way he thinks of other people - and of himself. He's only hurting himself more with what he's doing. At least there's Biiiiiiiill who's making a change in him. Aaaaawww...XD
I really love Bill and his innocence and the way he can just brighten people's hearts.. Haha..
Thank you.. This has been a lovely update!!^^
Author's Response: He most definitely does *hint hint*. Haha. Bill is a beauitful person inside and out! And no, thank YOU!!! :D It's nice to know you are liking it.
Date: 08/31/09 06:45 am Title: In the Same Deep Water as You
Sorry to hear about your mum. Mine is also unwell, so *understanding hug*
I admit I haven't read this before because Tom/Ofc pairings put me off. I'm strictly a Bill/Tom girl. Lack of other fics I want to read brought me to this ....
I'M SO GLAD IT DID!!! This is such a beautiful and touching story. It's impossible not to have thoughts about what has happened to Bill in his past, but really looking foward to that unfolding. Even if it's clearly going to be heart breaking!
Just really glad I've 'found' this fic. Added to faves and eagerly awaiting more!
Author's Response: Thank you very much, I really appreciate it. Best wishes to your mother as well! Of course the tom/ofc pairing is insignificant compared to that of tom/bill :D I'm so glad you are enjoying this story, I really am. Thank you.
Date: 08/31/09 05:09 am Title: Taste and See
your skills really amaze me. i love where this story is going!!! it's starting to feel more like a romance type of plot now =]
Author's Response: :D
Date: 08/31/09 05:06 am Title: In the Same Deep Water as You
Srry bout your mom! :(
This chapter was really good. It's nice to see progression with Tom. He seems to enjoy Bill's presence alot more than before. The imagery was splendid and I'm surprised you can writet this well under stress. Props!
Author's Response: No worries. Tom DOES enjoy Bill more that he has stopped fighting a little bit. thank you!
Date: 08/24/09 07:35 pm Title: Solidified
I haven't been on this site in a while, but I see you updated while I was away :D
Okay I'm gonna go ahead and say it, Georg and Gustav are a-holes seriously. Tom is one too, for wanting to join them in that prejudice act. They all need to grow up. But it's sweet that even though Tom is a complete jerk, Bill still sticks up for him. Like he can see something in Tom that no one else can and that's realy beautiful. I guess he does that, because he wants people to do the same with him. Bill may look different on the outside, but he's a really nice person on the inside. Beautifully written , I'm addicted to it now, so thanks for that lol. Can't wait for an update =)
Author's Response: They do need to grow up, and Tom is on the path to doing so! Exactlyyy Bill's kindness is overwhelming to Tom! Bill's such a cutie, I love writing his character hehe. Thank you very much for your review! (:
Date: 08/19/09 06:39 pm Title: Solidified
ya keep fightin tom but in the end you'll lose the struggle. and he needs to be more sure of himself it makes me sad that he's so convinced he will hurt bill. complex emotions.....love itttt...
Author's Response: thanks :D