Date: 09/01/09 01:02 am Title: In the Same Deep Water as You
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-intense~!
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loved it! i could totally imagine tom freaking out at seeing bill's beautiful ass.
XD
update soon! :D
Author's Response: Oh my, who WOULDN'T freak out?! Especially Tom, who doesn't need another reason to feel attracted to Bill. Who am I kidding, he totally needs it :P Thanks for the review!
Date: 08/31/09 10:30 pm Title: In the Same Deep Water as You
plz update soon..make them kizz girl=]
Author's Response: Summer ended for me two days ago, so I'm going to have a lot of trouble updating for a while. Junior year of high school is already very difficult with the classes I'm taking! Weekend are reserved for thff though, so don't worry :) Haha and MAYBE they will...just maybe!
Date: 08/31/09 10:11 pm Title: In the Same Deep Water as You
I'm really sorry to hear about your mom =[ *hugs*
And I loved the ending to this chapter; it was really touching. Makes me wish I had something like that =[
Lol, but anyway, good job, and much, much love.
Author's Response: It's alright now, but thank you for the concern! *hugs also* I know what you mean haha. Writing about people falling inlove makes me strangely lonely. Thank you so much for the review! Much love in return! :]
Date: 08/31/09 08:48 pm Title: In the Same Deep Water as You
Still love this story man.
The way you write.
Ugh.
Their relationship is slowly growing into something beautiful. I can definitely see it going past the stage of "friendly" just by the way Tom is reacting to Bill. He's very nervous, and scared...to get close to someone...and I think perhaps even more than that...Idk. Either way I love it!
--Mona
Author's Response: I'm so glad that you still enjoy this story! That's a very good point, but as you will hopefully see, Tom has a very hard time deciphering feelings of friendship from other romantic ones, considering he has only had one friend in his life and is inexperienced with these things, especially when it comes to things about himself. He's scared beyong belief, my friend. You're right on track! Thank you for the review! (: I really love hearing your feedback.
Date: 08/31/09 11:08 am Title: In the Same Deep Water as You
wow,, a beautiful chapter of an amazing story! and im sorry about your mother, i hope she gets well soon! :D
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Date: 08/31/09 08:46 am Title: In the Same Deep Water as You
I believe Tom has to work on the way he thinks of other people - and of himself. He's only hurting himself more with what he's doing. At least there's Biiiiiiiill who's making a change in him. Aaaaawww...XD
I really love Bill and his innocence and the way he can just brighten people's hearts.. Haha..
Thank you.. This has been a lovely update!!^^
Author's Response: He most definitely does *hint hint*. Haha. Bill is a beauitful person inside and out! And no, thank YOU!!! :D It's nice to know you are liking it.
Date: 08/31/09 06:45 am Title: In the Same Deep Water as You
Sorry to hear about your mum. Mine is also unwell, so *understanding hug*
I admit I haven't read this before because Tom/Ofc pairings put me off. I'm strictly a Bill/Tom girl. Lack of other fics I want to read brought me to this ....
I'M SO GLAD IT DID!!! This is such a beautiful and touching story. It's impossible not to have thoughts about what has happened to Bill in his past, but really looking foward to that unfolding. Even if it's clearly going to be heart breaking!
Just really glad I've 'found' this fic. Added to faves and eagerly awaiting more!
Author's Response: Thank you very much, I really appreciate it. Best wishes to your mother as well! Of course the tom/ofc pairing is insignificant compared to that of tom/bill :D I'm so glad you are enjoying this story, I really am. Thank you.
Date: 08/31/09 05:09 am Title: Taste and See
your skills really amaze me. i love where this story is going!!! it's starting to feel more like a romance type of plot now =]
Author's Response: :D
Date: 08/31/09 05:06 am Title: In the Same Deep Water as You
Srry bout your mom! :(
This chapter was really good. It's nice to see progression with Tom. He seems to enjoy Bill's presence alot more than before. The imagery was splendid and I'm surprised you can writet this well under stress. Props!
Author's Response: No worries. Tom DOES enjoy Bill more that he has stopped fighting a little bit. thank you!
Date: 08/24/09 07:35 pm Title: Solidified
I haven't been on this site in a while, but I see you updated while I was away :D
Okay I'm gonna go ahead and say it, Georg and Gustav are a-holes seriously. Tom is one too, for wanting to join them in that prejudice act. They all need to grow up. But it's sweet that even though Tom is a complete jerk, Bill still sticks up for him. Like he can see something in Tom that no one else can and that's realy beautiful. I guess he does that, because he wants people to do the same with him. Bill may look different on the outside, but he's a really nice person on the inside. Beautifully written , I'm addicted to it now, so thanks for that lol. Can't wait for an update =)
Author's Response: They do need to grow up, and Tom is on the path to doing so! Exactlyyy Bill's kindness is overwhelming to Tom! Bill's such a cutie, I love writing his character hehe. Thank you very much for your review! (:
Date: 08/19/09 06:39 pm Title: Solidified
ya keep fightin tom but in the end you'll lose the struggle. and he needs to be more sure of himself it makes me sad that he's so convinced he will hurt bill. complex emotions.....love itttt...
Author's Response: thanks :D
Date: 08/19/09 06:38 pm Title: Winds of Change
yessssss tom finally a step forward...took you long enough! i can't wait for them to be [[friends]...hopefully] XD
Author's Response: Totally! It can't be rushed though
Date: 08/19/09 06:36 pm Title: Fair and Unfair
sveeeeeet
Author's Response: (:
Date: 08/19/09 06:36 pm Title: Curious Night
Y is Bill so freakin nice 2 Tom?! He doesn't deserve it...but I liked the semi-fluff in this chap..
Author's Response: He has a good heart!
Date: 08/19/09 06:35 pm Title: Paint it on My Heart
Good peek into Tom's past. Now I know his character a little better....he's a jerk and needs to stop caring about wht ppl think..
Author's Response: Easier said than done ;)
Date: 08/19/09 06:33 pm Title: Grandma Annabelle (Part II)
Bill seems really sweet...and odd....but cool...
Author's Response: Jaaa!
Date: 08/19/09 06:33 pm Title: Grandma Annabelle (Part I)
Tom's a little shit!!!!!!
Author's Response: Haha indeed.
Date: 08/19/09 06:32 pm Title: Taste and See
Very interesting. I can't wait until you continue!
Author's Response: :]
Date: 08/19/09 06:30 pm Title: Solidified
I'm really liking the progression of this story.
Author's Response: Guuut!
Date: 08/18/09 03:55 pm Title: Solidified
I wonder what's wrong with Bill. I loved Tom attempting to get into his room, and how Bill launched himself at him.
Author's Response: yupyup, don't we all? :P Haha I'm glad you liked those scenes!!