Date: 11/01/09 01:57 am Title: In the Same Deep Water as You
I have loved this FF from beginning to end!
Please, update it soon!
Author's Response: I'm so glad!!!!!
Date: 10/24/09 06:28 am Title: In the Same Deep Water as You
the last sentence gave me goosebumps! Im so sorry about your mom, i hope shes alright :)
Author's Response: Awesome :) Yes, she is doing so much better, THANK YOU! :D
Date: 10/24/09 06:04 am Title: Winds of Change
amazing! i wish i could right as awesome as you! but... im just a reader lol :)
Author's Response: Aw thank youuuu :)
Date: 10/24/09 05:58 am Title: Fair and Unfair
WOW! that really pretty! I wish I had a lake house...
poor bill, is his dad dead or is he crazy or is something just wrong.... omgosh i cried at the last part!
Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, Bill has issues. T'will be revealed in due time :) *hands tissues*
Date: 10/24/09 05:46 am Title: Curious Night
Yay! TOmi has a heart! i still absolutley love Bill's character! So mysterious... but i still want to know what Jorg and Annabelle were talking about at dinner that one night! i must read on!
Author's Response: :D All in due time!
Date: 10/24/09 04:17 am Title: Paint it on My Heart
omgmosh!! caught!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Indeed!
Date: 10/24/09 04:05 am Title: Grandma Annabelle (Part II)
lol i like ur little comments at the end they're nice! awesome storyline! i love bill's character!
Author's Response: Thanks!!!! Me tooo :D
Date: 10/23/09 10:30 pm Title: In the Same Deep Water as You
I think this is incredibly beautiful. I think you should continue it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I will continue it soon. :)
Date: 10/22/09 11:52 am Title: Solidified
"I know this is progressing very slowly, but I hope you still like it"
oh, not at all honey. keep the story's pace like it is now. your setting is a laidback lazy mountain area, so your pace should match your setting. srsly. reading this fic is like -i dunno- a Gilmore flashback only better and calmer.
Author's Response: Thank you!!
Date: 10/22/09 11:22 am Title: Winds of Change
my hearts all a flutter reading this chapter.
now excuse me while i whack georg's head with the thickest italian vogue i can find. mark my words... vogue magazine can be lethal when used as weapons.
Author's Response: :D I love the feeling of a fluttering heart! Haha I believe it...thanks for the review.
Date: 09/08/09 02:21 pm Title: In the Same Deep Water as You
This is an amazing and beautiful story. I adore how Tom is coming out of his shell because of Bill's balming persona. :)
It's good stuff :)
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Maria
Author's Response: I'm very glad to know you are enjoying it. :]
Date: 09/07/09 05:34 am Title: In the Same Deep Water as You
Sorry to hear about your mom, I hope she's doing alright =)
This was an awesome chapter. The way Tom acts towards Alice is kinda childish, she seems like a nice person who just wants to bond. Nothing wrong with bonding with another human, its the circle of life lol. Bill is suppose to be innocent, so why is he skinny dipping? Lmao, but I don't really mine it though, were only 8 chapters in, and already getting some Bill/Tom nudity =P
That last part was so beautifully written, though the whole story is, but that part has got to be my favorite.
Your really inspiring me to get back into writing, but I haven't done it in soooo long, I'm probably very out of tune.
Great chapter, update soon :)
Author's Response: She is better, thank you. Yes, Tom is childish towards Alice, but he does have his reasons...or maybe he just uses her to take out his frustration with the world :P HAHA Well, I was trying to make it like he was skinny dipping in an innocent way... Kind of like how he's unaware of the implications of nudity because he's just so effortlessly free with himself. That sounded slutty, but I think you catch my drift here lol. Thank you so much for the compliment! It makes me really happy to know I inspire you, and I want to encourage you to do so! If your heart wants it, go for it, and don't worry about writing in tune or whatever, write for yourself, not for other people. I'm sure it'd be wonderful! :)
Date: 09/02/09 07:54 pm Title: In the Same Deep Water as You
i hope both you and your mom are doing alright. this is a great chapter. i think this is a great story. it is moving slowly, but that fits. keep up the wonderful work, i look forward to more! =)
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I wanted to keep the plot more realistic by taking it slowly and I'm happy to hear you don't think it's TOO slow, because it's hard to find the balance. :]
Date: 09/01/09 11:13 pm Title: In the Same Deep Water as You
this chap has got to be one of my favorites. the last part was beautiful!
Author's Response: Thank you (:
Date: 09/01/09 10:59 pm Title: In the Same Deep Water as You
I LOVED the last line. It was so...perfect
Author's Response: Thanks a bundle! :D It totally came to me out of the blue.
Date: 09/01/09 08:17 am Title: In the Same Deep Water as You
OMG, please write more soon!
This is such a fantastic story, I really love it.
*adds to favorites*
Author's Response: My time is really crunched right now, but I'll try my hardest! Yayyy thank you SO MUCH :D
Date: 09/01/09 03:23 am Title: In the Same Deep Water as You
tom is so hard headed why wont he admit he likes him
Author's Response: Because he doesn't really know the difference between friendship and something more than that because he hasn't experienced GENUINE feelings since he was a young boy. Tom is a little lacking in the social department, considering he's been hiding behind a facade for the better part of his teenage life. :)
Date: 09/01/09 02:37 am Title: In the Same Deep Water as You
I've a review for you, dear.
I'm sorry about your mother. I hope everything's okay.
I really love this story and I am so glad I stumbled upon it. Can't wait for the next chapter. ;)
Date: 09/01/09 02:37 am Title: In the Same Deep Water as You
I've a review for you, dear.
I'm sorry about your mother. I hope everything's okay.
I really love this story and I am so glad I stumbled upon it. Can't wait for rhe next chapter. ;)
Author's Response: She is now, thank you for the concern; I really appreciate it. It makes me happy to know you like the story thanks for reviewing [:
Date: 09/01/09 01:46 am Title: In the Same Deep Water as You
I'm really sorry to hear about your mom. ): I wish her well. On a happier note, I will say that I thoroughly enjoyed this. Your fic always know how to put a smile on my face. :D
Author's Response: Thank you. It puts a smile on my face to know that this put a smile on your face! :) If that makes sense.