Date: 05/15/10 02:07 pm Title: Rise of the Fallen
awsomeawsomeawsomeawsome
Date: 05/14/10 11:11 pm Title: Rise of the Fallen
i cant believe this is almost over...i want it to go on forever and ever and ever
Date: 05/01/10 06:53 pm Title: Rise of the Fallen
This chapter was so sweet, towards the end. Glad Bill excepted Tom's apology. Anyways, I so can't wait for you to continue.
Date: 04/22/10 09:36 am Title: Rise of the Fallen
Excellent!!
Date: 04/21/10 02:03 am Title: Rise of the Fallen
wonderful...delightful...I love it...what more can I say
Date: 04/20/10 10:42 pm Title: Rise of the Fallen
I... omg. T____T This is the sweetest fanfic and I love it, I need more! It's even more beautiful with all the forgiveness and the love between Bill and Tom. You're an amazing writer. I saw and felt everything clearly as if I were Tom or Bill. Your metaphors are beautiful, just like your story. :) Please update soooon! DDDD:
Date: 04/20/10 10:05 pm Title: Buried Casualties
Omg crying from that scene with Andi that was so fucking sweet. The forgiveness, and then Andi's sweet understanding. Ahh it was beautiful, but I'm scared for Bill. But Tom loves him..
Date: 04/20/10 09:48 pm Title: Fools of Follies
T_________T why Tom? Sorry, my reviewing may get annoying, it's just too good of a story to not review, though D:
Author's Response: Reviews never get annoying! I appreciate you taking the time to leave a comment. Thank you!
Date: 04/20/10 09:33 pm Title: Bend and Break
Aww wow! That was so sad. But their first kiss yay!
The 'please don't leave me' part made me cry a little. So sweet. :) Gonna go finish reading now :D
Date: 04/20/10 05:51 am Title: Bend and Break
you probably have enough reviews...but I really do like this story...thanks for writing it...
Author's Response: I always love hearing feeback, there's never enough! Thank you for the review :) I appreciate it
Date: 04/20/10 12:23 am Title: Grandma Annabelle (Part I)
I love this story, and I love lavender...I think I'm going to be very miserable if you end this story..:)
Date: 04/19/10 05:53 pm Title: Rise of the Fallen
Hello!!
Remember me from tumblr? Well, I told you I liked the conversation between Bill and Tom when Bill Asked him if he believed love can survive betrayal? Well, you tld me to read the story and so I did. I´m very sorry I didnt' leave a review for each chapter, but, you see. I started to read it yesterday at night, and stopped only when it was 2:45 am (I had to wake up at 5:00am) I was so... enthralled I couldn't make myself stop reading... today I feel like a zoombie though, absolutely sleeping deprived, but happy for this amazing story.
I solemny promise I will read it again and leave a comment each cahpter as it should be.
Thanks for such an amazing story!!!
Hugs!!
Velia
Date: 04/17/10 04:59 pm Title: Taste and See
Thank you so much for this wonderful story! It's so different from other fiction. Characters are so unique... Really amazing.)
Date: 04/17/10 03:51 am Title: Rise of the Fallen
Your use of symbolism amaze the life out of me! Rain. Lavenders. Sun. *cries* OMG I can just squeeze you in an enormous bear hug.. except I'm really thin and you're nowhere near me D;
Anyway, I'm so happy you updated again!! Lavender Field reminds me of this old Taiwanese drama which is also set in a lavender field. I thought this fiction is going to be the same so I wasn't particularly interested in it. However, i am extremely grateful to the being who possessed me and made me click on the story so I can read it and enjoy it and love it up until now and possibly, forever!
Everything about this story is completely fabulous. I especially like Bill's optimistic attitude about everything and it's dangerously painful what I felt when I read Annabelle's speech to Tom. How Bill was described as so heartbroken and damaged made my heart break and feel such genuine sympathy... like I want to hug him. And Tom too. It's amazing that he came back and asked Bill for forgiveness.. How he explained that he doesn't care about what other people think anymore.. (I secretly wish someone would say that to me) That was painfully and so beautifully romantic.
The falling action is absolutely gorgeous. How everything falls into place like a jigsaw puzzle. How everything is resolved. How Tom finally understands his feelings and emotions. You, my friend is a very very very talented storywriter and I hope I get to be at least half as good as you are when I write my own fan fictions
Date: 04/16/10 02:44 pm Title: Rise of the Fallen
Oh my god this chapter was just beautiful, I nearly cried! haha!
Gosh it was brilliant, I think its the best chapter throughout the whole story so far
Thankyou soooo much for this! xx
Date: 04/15/10 01:47 am Title: Rise of the Fallen
Oh my gosh... I nearly cried. For real. My eyes are wet.
Date: 04/14/10 12:00 pm Title: Rise of the Fallen
AWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!! Perfect line to leave off at! AWWW
Date: 04/13/10 04:50 pm Title: Grandma Annabelle (Part I)
*noticed "black-haired girl" aka Bill in the ice creamery*
Mwahaha
Poor Tom, this is hell for him now.
Date: 04/11/10 11:21 pm Title: Rise of the Fallen
Idk why you're sayinq thank you to us. But, I wanna say: Thank YOU. This had me at the edqe of my seat. I read this story in two days, I don't usually read tht much. But I simply had to. I cried. It was beautiful. Plus, my love for Bill qrew/qrows more and more. Thank you from the bottom of my Columbian heart
Date: 04/11/10 10:25 pm Title: Rise of the Fallen
This was a gorgeous chapter. I loved it.