Date: 01/25/10 05:43 pm Title: Fools of Follies
....Yeah. I should have guess it since when I read it. And right now, I am smacking myself on the forehead for not seeing the obvious. A tough guy, with an ugly secret from the past, meets the one person he could understand and relate to. Some people want to start problems and when they confront the guy, he pushes the one person away, but feels real guilty about it.
Whats next?
Because I have taken an interest in this story, I will continue on reading and reviewing. Needless to say, I am very mad. And no, I'm not blaming you. You're the author and we should have more trust in you. I am mad at the situation that's happening. Over all, it was very bittersweet.
Author's Response: I think that the story is in reality far more complex than how you summarize it. I'm sorry that you are mad because I know the feeling when I read some stories on the fandom as well. I agree, you should have trust in me! I will lead the story where I see fit and if anyone disagrees with it, that's their problem. This story isn't all fluff lol. Thank you for the honest review! I really appreciate that you read and possibly review :)
Date: 01/25/10 04:07 pm Title: Fools of Follies
... it's killing me...
it's like i feel the pain that Bill's feeling at that right moment... it's killing me...
please, make it all better! :(
LOVEEEEEEEE! :)
Author's Response: I shall try :) Thank you for the review!!
Date: 01/25/10 02:51 pm Title: Fools of Follies
But Bill knows that Tom didn't mean it *nods*. He said it to Tom the day before, and will say again. :)
*is positive*
Now, I hope you already started the next chapter because I am waiting for it soon. lol
Author's Response: Yes! I love positivity! Don't lose faith. Haha I have a portion of it written...but I will work on it more, just for you! ;) Thanks for the review
Date: 01/25/10 02:23 pm Title: Fools of Follies
Really Tom? Wow. Good move -_-
Author's Response: Definitely. His life will totally improve because of this. :P
Date: 01/25/10 12:33 pm Title: Fools of Follies
ohhh i do not like u write now.
poor bill 8(
Author's Response: I'm sorry you feel that way.
Date: 01/25/10 12:30 pm Title: Taste and See
Tom is an ass. you are good
Author's Response: Thank you! Haha.
Date: 01/25/10 10:51 am Title: Fools of Follies
*gasp* *cant stop gasping* *jaw starts hurting* *jaw hits the floor* OMG!
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Date: 01/25/10 10:32 am Title: Fools of Follies
DDDDDDDDDDDD: tom is...SO FUCKING STUPID!!!
gotta go
but this fic is awesome!! :D
Author's Response: He's just searching for acceptance in all the wrong ways. I'm so glad you like it! Thank you for the review :)
Date: 01/25/10 07:48 am Title: Fools of Follies
He's an idiot. Mellissa should be smacked as well. And Georg and Gustav shouldn't be left to terrorize people the way they do.
Date: 01/25/10 07:47 am Title: Fools of Follies
Aw. :( This chapter was great (and sad) but yeah, I did kind of see this coming. Especially with this line from the last chapter - "It wasn’t hurting Bill. It was only hurting Tom."
I loved the flashbacks too even though they hurt my heart a bit.
Author's Response: Exactly!! I'm so glad you caught that line. :) And I'm also glad you liked the flashbacks. I'm curious, did you see the Andreas part coming as well or just the betrayal? Thank you thank you for the review!! :]
Date: 01/25/10 07:30 am Title: Bend and Break
That's horrible. And it was totally an accident. Georg should be whipped for saying all the hurtful things he does, but children can be cruel. That's a fact.
Author's Response: It's true. We live in a cruel world. Thank you for the review!
Date: 01/25/10 06:26 am Title: Fools of Follies
It was ok, you where right we new it was coming, but hopfully the drama ends soon.. :)
Author's Response: I'm going to write exactly what I think needs to happen in the progression or the story. If that includes drama or not, I guess we shall see :) Thank you for the review.
Date: 01/25/10 06:20 am Title: Fools of Follies
Oh dear, now I really have to review this. *is a very lazy ass but when a story shocks her, she'll review*
I'm following this story since the beginning *hides* and I like it, because although the introduction plot is pretty ~known~ (Tom meets Bill who is the loner, possibly gay too, that everyone makes fun of) the developing is different, with hints coming from here and there and the reader can start to get his own idea, without actually having confirmations and having to be prepared for not-expectations. And this was what I wasn't expecting. Tom's outburst. And the kiss. How dare he? Kissing girls in gross, that filthy traitor *pouts* He should run, not really after Bill, but for sure away from me, 'cause I'm gonna follow him and kick his ass -_-
I'm not sure I'm making some sense here, so I'll leave it here, waiting in a corner for the update ;-;
Date: 01/25/10 04:51 am Title: Fools of Follies
oh tom. sigh...he could say he wasn't a fag and still be with bill. because he isn't that insult, regardless of if he is with bill or not. poor bill. i hope he doesn't forgive tom too easily. thanks for the speedy update! can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Yes, of course! But Tom doesn't recognize this, that's the problem...yet. And, of course, Bill is very hurt and the relationship will need time for healing (if it even does). Thank you for the review! I appreciate it!
Date: 01/25/10 03:58 am Title: Fools of Follies
I think I just died a little inside.
*whistles innocently and shoves Tom off a cliff*
There you go. Problem solved. His homophobia is cured and he can hurt no one anymore. DIEDIEDIE HOMOPHOBIA!
I'm off to cry for the lonely and painful death I will be receiving anytime now because I just feel awful for Bill. DAYM. AT THE WORST TIME TOO HE GETS BETRAYED. And there I was, wishing against hope that the TITLE would have nothing to do with the OUTCOME of the chapter. Sad sad sad...
UPDATE WOMAN, YOU'RE KILLING ME! XDD
Author's Response: Hahaha violence is never the answer! :P I know, Tom was terrible. I guess we'll have to see what happens next :) Thank you for the review!
Date: 01/25/10 02:50 am Title: Fools of Follies
OMG... OMG OMG OMG...T^T
Tom has his issues to fix..T^T I feel sorry for Bill though.. OMG..T^T He didn't deserve that. Gaaaaaaahhh... Tom needs to know that there's nothing wroooonngg... That it's okay. He's hurting himself more, and also Bill. Gaaaaahhh I hope he'll come around. And I hope Bill won't do anything that will harm himself.*sniff* I hate this thing!!T^T
But I don't hate the update though. No worries. The anticipation is the one killing me...O__O HOMG... Updates please..@__@ *dies slowly inside*
Author's Response: I'm glad to know you don't hate the update :) Some people have been pretty pissed at me for making this happen, but it's not like I could help it, the characters have minds of their own! I'm just the vessel! Thank you soooo much for the review, darling! Updates on the way :)
Date: 01/25/10 02:16 am Title: Fools of Follies
Ugh! Tom! He makes me soo mad first he betrays the first love of his life andreas and now bill the second. Ugh now Melissa Is going to think they're together. I just want to punch tom so much right now. Please make this feeling go away and update soon.even though you are updating faster than before and for that thank you! :)
Author's Response: Haha I know the feeling, trust me!! Just have faith :) I'll update sometime this week when I have time to write the next chapter haha. Thank YOU for the review! I really appreciate it :D
Date: 01/25/10 02:03 am Title: Fools of Follies
I hate Tom for doing this D:
He was finally happy and then he had to ruin it all>.
Author's Response: As Bill would say, "hate is a strong word." :PP He did ruin it, but he couldn't really help it. Have hope!! Thank you for the review
Date: 01/25/10 01:23 am Title: Fools of Follies
Oh f*ck! I want to hit Georg!!! Poor Bill and poor Tom!
Author's Response: me too! I don't like him! Hahah. Thanks for the review!
Date: 01/25/10 01:19 am Title: Fools of Follies
no...damn it tom....
Author's Response: mistakes are a part of life. keep your hopes up! :)