Date: 01/25/10 07:47 am Title: Fools of Follies
Aw. :( This chapter was great (and sad) but yeah, I did kind of see this coming. Especially with this line from the last chapter - "It wasn’t hurting Bill. It was only hurting Tom."
I loved the flashbacks too even though they hurt my heart a bit.
Author's Response: Exactly!! I'm so glad you caught that line. :) And I'm also glad you liked the flashbacks. I'm curious, did you see the Andreas part coming as well or just the betrayal? Thank you thank you for the review!! :]
Date: 01/25/10 07:30 am Title: Bend and Break
That's horrible. And it was totally an accident. Georg should be whipped for saying all the hurtful things he does, but children can be cruel. That's a fact.
Author's Response: It's true. We live in a cruel world. Thank you for the review!
Date: 01/25/10 06:26 am Title: Fools of Follies
It was ok, you where right we new it was coming, but hopfully the drama ends soon.. :)
Author's Response: I'm going to write exactly what I think needs to happen in the progression or the story. If that includes drama or not, I guess we shall see :) Thank you for the review.
Date: 01/25/10 06:20 am Title: Fools of Follies
Oh dear, now I really have to review this. *is a very lazy ass but when a story shocks her, she'll review*
I'm following this story since the beginning *hides* and I like it, because although the introduction plot is pretty ~known~ (Tom meets Bill who is the loner, possibly gay too, that everyone makes fun of) the developing is different, with hints coming from here and there and the reader can start to get his own idea, without actually having confirmations and having to be prepared for not-expectations. And this was what I wasn't expecting. Tom's outburst. And the kiss. How dare he? Kissing girls in gross, that filthy traitor *pouts* He should run, not really after Bill, but for sure away from me, 'cause I'm gonna follow him and kick his ass -_-
I'm not sure I'm making some sense here, so I'll leave it here, waiting in a corner for the update ;-;
Date: 01/25/10 04:51 am Title: Fools of Follies
oh tom. sigh...he could say he wasn't a fag and still be with bill. because he isn't that insult, regardless of if he is with bill or not. poor bill. i hope he doesn't forgive tom too easily. thanks for the speedy update! can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Yes, of course! But Tom doesn't recognize this, that's the problem...yet. And, of course, Bill is very hurt and the relationship will need time for healing (if it even does). Thank you for the review! I appreciate it!
Date: 01/25/10 03:58 am Title: Fools of Follies
I think I just died a little inside.
*whistles innocently and shoves Tom off a cliff*
There you go. Problem solved. His homophobia is cured and he can hurt no one anymore. DIEDIEDIE HOMOPHOBIA!
I'm off to cry for the lonely and painful death I will be receiving anytime now because I just feel awful for Bill. DAYM. AT THE WORST TIME TOO HE GETS BETRAYED. And there I was, wishing against hope that the TITLE would have nothing to do with the OUTCOME of the chapter. Sad sad sad...
UPDATE WOMAN, YOU'RE KILLING ME! XDD
Author's Response: Hahaha violence is never the answer! :P I know, Tom was terrible. I guess we'll have to see what happens next :) Thank you for the review!
Date: 01/25/10 02:50 am Title: Fools of Follies
OMG... OMG OMG OMG...T^T
Tom has his issues to fix..T^T I feel sorry for Bill though.. OMG..T^T He didn't deserve that. Gaaaaaaahhh... Tom needs to know that there's nothing wroooonngg... That it's okay. He's hurting himself more, and also Bill. Gaaaaahhh I hope he'll come around. And I hope Bill won't do anything that will harm himself.*sniff* I hate this thing!!T^T
But I don't hate the update though. No worries. The anticipation is the one killing me...O__O HOMG... Updates please..@__@ *dies slowly inside*
Author's Response: I'm glad to know you don't hate the update :) Some people have been pretty pissed at me for making this happen, but it's not like I could help it, the characters have minds of their own! I'm just the vessel! Thank you soooo much for the review, darling! Updates on the way :)
Date: 01/25/10 02:16 am Title: Fools of Follies
Ugh! Tom! He makes me soo mad first he betrays the first love of his life andreas and now bill the second. Ugh now Melissa Is going to think they're together. I just want to punch tom so much right now. Please make this feeling go away and update soon.even though you are updating faster than before and for that thank you! :)
Author's Response: Haha I know the feeling, trust me!! Just have faith :) I'll update sometime this week when I have time to write the next chapter haha. Thank YOU for the review! I really appreciate it :D
Date: 01/25/10 02:03 am Title: Fools of Follies
I hate Tom for doing this D:
He was finally happy and then he had to ruin it all>.
Author's Response: As Bill would say, "hate is a strong word." :PP He did ruin it, but he couldn't really help it. Have hope!! Thank you for the review
Date: 01/25/10 01:23 am Title: Fools of Follies
Oh f*ck! I want to hit Georg!!! Poor Bill and poor Tom!
Author's Response: me too! I don't like him! Hahah. Thanks for the review!
Date: 01/25/10 01:19 am Title: Fools of Follies
no...damn it tom....
Author's Response: mistakes are a part of life. keep your hopes up! :)
Date: 01/25/10 12:47 am Title: Fools of Follies
wow,that's a record,less than 24 hours to betray someone. :/
oh,and why,at the beginning,does tom show so much resentment for melissa?
does she represent homophobia, or something?
i always look forward to this story (:
Author's Response: I know :( Not to justify Tom's betrayal, but he really couldn't help it after the depth of pain caused by homosexuality. Just have faith!! Well, Tom has been acting very stnad-offish toward Mellissa for a while now. He was just done pretending that she is the type of person he wants to be with when he doesn't. She's too perfect and really has no depth, but most of all, she's a GIRL. Tom doesn't like girls, as revealed through the last few chapters. I hope that explanation helped? Thank you very much for the review :)
Date: 01/25/10 12:46 am Title: Fools of Follies
I cannot even TELL you the noises I made when Tom kissed Mellissa! My husband gave me the strangest looks. My stomach is churning, I swear to god and I just want to shake Tom HARD. UGH! I know, I know, it's drama, but Dammit! Bill is too precious, too raw, too OPEN now to Tom and he fucking did THAT? UGH. I think you wrote it well because you totally got a huge reaction out of me.
Author's Response: Hahahaha exactly the reaction I was trying to provoke! I know the majority of readers despise Tom right now, but they've got to understand Tom's sensitivity and the depth of pain that his homophobia and homosexuality has caused him. He'll make mistakes, but that's just life. Have faith! Thank you so much for the review!
Date: 01/25/10 12:25 am Title: Fools of Follies
Damn Tom for trying so hard to fool not only Georg, Gustav and the other's around, but himself too, and in the process ruin everything good he had...poor Bill-having gone through what he has, then to trust Tom completly only to be betrayed...he will be lucky if Bill will even look at him. I can just see the tear's flowing down his face...
Ready for more!!!!
Author's Response: Yes! I agree! Thank you for the review :) More will be up next weekend. Count on it!
Date: 01/25/10 12:19 am Title: Fools of Follies
I hadn't expected that one! Geeze, I really hope this all works out.
Author's Response: Just have faith! Trust me as the author to take the story where it needs to go. Thank you for the review :)
Date: 01/24/10 05:03 pm Title: Bend and Break
oh my god...
you don't know what that story is doing to me... i'm crying a river right now... it's simply beautiful... and i'm glad we learned Bill's past! :)
i can't wait to read what's next! i hope they'll make it through together! :)
i love it! :)
Author's Response: *hands tissue* thank you so much! for reading. for enjoying it. for reviewing! Just have faith in the future, that's all I have to say. :)
Date: 01/23/10 09:24 pm Title: Bend and Break
omfg that was so cute :) poor billa though. but tomi is so sweet and cute :)
Author's Response: yesss thanksss :D
Date: 01/23/10 07:13 pm Title: Bend and Break
THAT WAS EXCELLENT and so unexpected! Great job!
Author's Response: thank you so much :DD
Date: 01/23/10 04:52 pm Title: Bend and Break
oh wow... this chapter was unbelievably powerful! i almost cried, your an amazing writer, please dont let this story end anytime soon!
Author's Response: Oh wow. Thank you so much! It makes me so incredibly happy as the author to know the emotional investment of the readers :) OF course not! Hahaha trust me, we have another journey to go through before it's all over. between 17-20 chapters I speculate total.
Date: 01/23/10 03:26 pm Title: Bend and Break
Oh HAPPY DAY!!! I'm so happy right now! Awesome chapter ah i can't wait for more now!!! :D
Author's Response: :) I'm glad! Thank you for the review!