Date: 02/09/10 10:03 pm Title: Buried Casualties
OK. I have to tell you that I actually used this story on a state exam. LMAO. We were supposed to use two works of literature, and technically this wouldn't have counted, but I used it anyway. I got 92%. LMAO. So thanks a lot. This story is amazing. Good job!
Date: 02/09/10 09:59 pm Title: Buried Casualties
oh i almost cried at this chapter....i'm glad tom patched things with Andreas now there's only bill and his dad, who cares about alice....loved this chapter and can't wait for the next one
Date: 02/09/10 09:51 pm Title: Buried Casualties
OMFG I NEED BILL WITH TOM
Date: 02/09/10 09:30 pm Title: Long Way to Run
OMG. Update pretty please.
Date: 02/02/10 10:24 pm Title: Long Way to Run
OH my God! This chapter was so heartbreaking. You described everything so litterally that I could feel Tom's heartache. I was crying with him at the end, too, and I still am. You did a great job and I cannot wait for more.
Date: 02/02/10 05:30 pm Title: Long Way to Run
Oh, wow ;_;
I really hope that Andi will be forgiving, and help Tom. Maybe then he can go back and patch things up with Bill :)
What Alice said, however, was out of line and totally uncalled for -__- Tom's a bit of an asshole, but I feel so sorry for him right now. Brilliant chapter, hun.
Date: 02/01/10 01:43 pm Title: Long Way to Run
No!! How could you!? :'(
Date: 02/01/10 11:00 am Title: Long Way to Run
Awwwww *holds Tom close*
Date: 02/01/10 09:55 am Title: Long Way to Run
oh poor tom..i know he screwed up but i feel sorry for him :(
i hope andi and him can be friends again and that he returns and apologizes to bill
Date: 02/01/10 06:05 am Title: Long Way to Run
HOLY SHIT!!
YOUHAVETOUPDATERIGHTTHISSECONDORIWILLDIIIIIIEEE
:O
:O
:O
HE LEFT THE CUTE LITTLE TWON ????? :O :O
He left Billa???????????
WAAAAA PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!!
This is seriously amazing!
I need more.
What's gonna happen with Andi? With Jorg? Woth BILL?????
I NEED TO KNOW!!
T_T GAH!
Date: 02/01/10 05:45 am Title: Long Way to Run
No... no.. no?
No... I am not believing that Tom left. Nope. Me is not believing this! I mean.. Tom? Did you loose your mind or what? You LOVE Bill, god damnit!
Oh, those teens are so stupid nowadays.... Yeah. So blind, Tom...
Anyway. Ah yeah. At least he went to Andi, right? I hope Andi will forgive him and send him back to Bill with the next plane. Andi must be the savior there...
Hm. I beg you to update now. This chapter was just awful...ly great. Damn I loved it even if it was such a sad piece. I even cried a little in the end...
So.. I'll let you go back to writing now :)
Date: 02/01/10 05:08 am Title: Long Way to Run
awwww you couldn't have done better, even if I would have loved for tom to go after bill I like how you know what this is going. I wasn't expecting him to go at Andi's but the moment they met was so heartwrenching. I can't wait for more!
Date: 02/01/10 04:46 am Title: Long Way to Run
HOLY SH*T - this has to be the bestchapter so far, the rollercoaster of emotions, you write so well, so beautifully! i am so close to tears reading about tom's anguish, and OMG the scene where he left Jorg's i was like T.T
im so glad you updated - and you certainly came back with one hell of a chapter! OMG it was actually amazing. i think im babbling now, i just cant get over how amazing this was. i honestly think this chapter alone was the best thing iv'e ever read before. <3 <3 <3 <3
SO looking forward for the next chapter! x :D
Date: 02/01/10 04:16 am Title: Long Way to Run
OMG! o.0 Now I really can`t wait for more!
Date: 02/01/10 04:16 am Title: Long Way to Run
I am so saad for tom :/ it was good that he came and met andi so maybe he can get over the things that happened when he was younger and then he can go and say sorry to bill and then they can live happyli ever after ;)lol XD
Date: 02/01/10 01:24 am Title: Long Way to Run
I feel so bad for Tom, but it will be good for him to confront the person who has mattered the most to him throughout his life. I hope that when he clears things up with Andreas he'll go back to Bill, to admit that he messed up and that he is in fact gay, he just needs to stop being afraid of saying it.
My heart is breaking for Tom, even if he's an asshole ;_;
Date: 02/01/10 12:07 am Title: Long Way to Run
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwww
just wanna kill toooom soo aaaaaaaaaaawww :Q
andi :0
omg poor bill and and aw
xD
tom *slap* get your ass back to bill! NOW!
doing origami here so i will leave early xD
bye :D
CONTINUE IT *angry face xD*
Date: 01/31/10 11:43 pm Title: Long Way to Run
AAAHH!! TOM GO BACK AND KIDNAP BILL, YOU BASTARD! I LOVE YOU! And I certainly dont blame you but dont leave Bill!!!
Oooh, Alice is such a bitch. I cant believe I ever let my guard down for one second. I wish Tom slugged that cow before he left. She's f-ing awful.
Poor poor poor Tom. And now he's in the city. Without Bill. I wonder how long it will be before they see each other.
OH MY GOD! BRAIN FART JUST OCCURED!!!!!
LET TOM GET CORN-ROWS BEFORE HE SEES BILL. AS, LIKE, A PHYSICAL TESTIMONY TO HOW HIS HEART CHANGED FOR THE BETTER. I LOVE HIS CORNROWS, THEY ARE THE EPITOME OF SEX. *dies*
Oh oh oh what happens with Andi. Im so excited, please please please dont take as long to update this time. Its a killer!
:(
Date: 01/31/10 11:34 pm Title: Long Way to Run
Aw demmet, this chapter is breaking my heart!!!T^T *grabs tissue*
But I think in a way this thing has to happen. Tom is not okay and not fixed from within, and he will not be completely happy and be truly himself with Bill if those wounds, those inner demons from his past will not be reopened and dealt with. I think that would be the purpose of Tom going to Andi... OMAGAD I CAN FEEL HIS PAIN RIGHT NOW...*sob*
I think Andi will be forgiving with Tom, and I think it will be a moment for Andi to heal too and patch things up with Tom, although things wouldn't be quite the same after all that had been said and done between them(ehh.. That's how life goes, right?T_T). After Andi has forgiven him it's Tom's time to forgive himself for everything*huggles*
Bill's pain is another story...T^T Again, like I said previously, he didn't deserve that kind of pain...*sob*
This is a very, VERY sad chapter..*sniff* But still, any update is a good update for me. Thank you very much!! *huggles* Please keep writing *puppy eyes* OMAGAD I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER...O__O *flails*