Date: 02/21/10 09:29 pm Title: Where the Heart Is
absoluley fabulous. i am hanging on every detail. wonderfully written. cannot wait until next chapter is up!
Date: 02/21/10 09:06 pm Title: Long Way to Run
I usually don't review until I hit the most recent chapter, but I loved this one so much it hurts.
I hated when both my step mom and my dad insulted my mom. They never even actually said it to me. They said it to my younger sister when I wasn't in the room, but I still heard. If I hadn't been as young as I was, I'd have acted on the urge to go and tell them to fuck off. And now I haven't talked to him in almost two years, because he doesn't feel the need to call. And I'm glad. Oh, how I can relate to Tom in this whole child-father relationship thing.
Date: 02/21/10 05:11 pm Title: Where the Heart Is
Uphill! Uphill! Uphill we go! Finally you’re becoming smart, Tom, I’m PROUD of you ^^
Update is gold ^^
And now I have to go to bed REALLY quickly, for if my mom finds me now I'm going to be dead. O.o
Date: 02/21/10 04:50 pm Title: Buried Casualties
Tell you what I thought?
Nope, I’m going to tell you what I did. What I felt.
At the first part I felt relieved, for Tom, for Andi. But also a little confused, because Tom did love Bill, right?
The next thing I recall is not being able to read farther than those three sentences: ~~~ Tom’s arms trembled. Andreas stared up at him, beautifully and openly presented beneath Tom, but not really there. He suddenly didn’t fit there. ~~~
I cried.
Then, at the last part of the chapter I smiled again, maybe a little watery, I mean ANDI O.o
But I smiled.
Reaction? TOM GET YOUR ASS BACK TO THE LAVENDER FIELD, OR I’M GOING TO KICK IT THAT WAY! (A)
Hate you? How can I hate someone who posts such abeautyful story O.o Wait, don’t tell, I don’t wanna know.
Love you? Well, let’s not take it thát far, shall we? ;-p
Date: 02/21/10 04:45 pm Title: Where the Heart Is
he came back! HE CAME BAAAACK! yeeeey! *jumps up and down with stupid grin on face* YEEY! I THINK I LOVE YOU! and you have to update soon!:')
Date: 02/21/10 04:33 pm Title: Long Way to Run
Lineke, you're not going to cry, no you're NOT...
This isn't helping...
This is the crisis, right? The most miserable part, right, after this it will go uphill, right? *tiny little girl voice*
Date: 02/21/10 04:21 pm Title: Bend and Break
What do I think? I think I’m beginning to love this story even more than I already did (If that’s possible)
Expected? I sort of expected them to open up to each other and kiss, and they did and they’re so extraordinary CUTE o.o
Unexpected? Hmmm I didn’t expect Bill and Georg to have been friends, I guess…
Thoughts? Again? I WANT ICE CREAM TOO o.o
Random comments? Didn’t I just do that? Hmm all right, one more then…
~~~“Jorg stared at Tom with his mouth agape, shocked and silent. Tom felt immediately insecure and wondered what was the motivation behind that look.
“What?” Tom snapped, uncomfortably adjusting his napkin.
“You’re eating the pancakes.”
Tom raised his eyebrows. “Um. Yeah?”
Jorg continued to gawk. “But you never eat the pancakes.”
Tom scoffed. “I’m hungry,” he replied vaguely with a shrug.
Jorg laughed loudly. “You’re hungry…you’re always hungry! But you never eat the pancakes.”
Labeling his father’s argument pointless, Tom rose from the table. He rolled his eyes and proceeded to wash his plate and utensils neatly before sticking them gently into the washer. When he turned around again Jorg was still staring.
“You did your own dishes?” Jorg asked, shocked. “Since when do you do your own dishes?”
Tom sighed before grabbing a shirt from the stair banister and tossing it over his torso with a small smile on his face.
Jorg gasped. “You smiled!” ~~~
That part was BRILLIANT xD
Author's Response: Yay! Thank you for the amazing review!!
Date: 02/21/10 04:16 pm Title: Fools of Follies
Allright, I think you need to know that you’ve got me nearly screaming “NOOO!” To my computer. O.o There aren’t much people who can do so, be honored.
And now I really just have to say this;
TOM YOU STUPID IDIOT!
So, that’s out of me…
Author's Response: I feel honored! Thanks for the review.
Date: 02/21/10 03:34 pm Title: Feel This
Allright, what did I think reading this chapter?
First; In (almost) every definition at the beginning of the chapters, you compare something with lavenders, it keeps coming back (I actually realized that way back in the story, but I forgot to mention that) I really like that, it gives a certain unison (am I saying this right?) in the story.
Then second; Yay! What a philosophic thinking! *adores Bill* (Yes I have Philosophy class in school and I love it!)
And last (but not least); GOOD BOY TOM! You’ve surrendered! You like the raisins! Say you like them, say it! SAY IT! ^^
Author's Response: Yes, I try to relate it to lavenders! Thank you, I'm glad you enjoy it. It's just a little feature I added to carry out the motif of lavenders throughout the story. Bill's philosophies are definitely interesting! HAHA he does, he does! Thank you for the review!
Date: 02/21/10 03:12 pm Title: Vines of Vacillation
O. My. God. *immitation of st. Trinians* The MAYOR?! o.o
Author's Response: YUP. Oh my!
Date: 02/21/10 03:08 pm Title: Where the Heart Is
I just started reading this, and I can't tell you how much I love it bby. I've just had this overriding sense of peace while reading it, like things will somehow be easier once it's done. And you know what? I have the faint smell of lemon ice cream following me now. Can't wait for the next chapter :)
Date: 02/21/10 02:58 pm Title: In the Same Deep Water as You
Loving it, as all the chapters before. Especially the last sentence, so poetical ^^
Author's Response: Why, thank you! It was a spontaneous addition as I was writing. :)
Date: 02/21/10 02:46 pm Title: Solidified
I can convince you, I’m still liking it. I like the way you begin each chapter, with a definition of a important word for the chapter. ^^
Author's Response: I'm very happy you are! (:
Date: 02/21/10 02:25 pm Title: Winds of Change
I think you're right about giving this scene a chapter of it's own, it's beautyfull, yet again.
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Date: 02/21/10 02:06 pm Title: Fair and Unfair
Nice Pictures!
Author's Response: Thank youu.
Date: 02/21/10 01:11 pm Title: Where the Heart Is
omg i loooveeeeeeee this story!! it enlightens my days just by thinking of it!!! i keep smiling like an idiot the whole day!! omg :DDDD
Date: 02/21/10 12:06 pm Title: Curious Night
You will eat a raisin Tom! Surrender! xD
I love this story, really
Author's Response: Oh, don't worry, the time will come! :P I'm very glad you do. <3
Date: 02/21/10 11:53 am Title: Paint it on My Heart
Good chapter! Stupid Tom!
Author's Response: Indeed. Stupid, stupid. Thank!
Date: 02/21/10 11:51 am Title: Taste and See
oh my... i read this story in like... 2 hours... and it's so fucking amazing! at last i sat here with wet eyes :O
i never had anyhting like this before after reading a story...
well, i can't remember...
this is soooooo emotional :O
i really really like this story,
i'm glad i found it in the tons and "aber"-tons (sorry i don't know how to express this in english :O) of stories!
i guess i would write so much more if i knew how to express it...
that's actually so hard, i didn't notice before...
well, all i can say is, that this story really really moved (i hope this is the right word oO) me...
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It makes me very, very happy to know you enjoy the story. I appreciate it all! :D
Date: 02/21/10 11:21 am Title: Grandma Annabelle (Part II)
He most certainly is, and I really like grandma Annabelle!
Author's Response: Me too. She's a wonderful character :) Thank you for the review!