Date: 05/15/26 05:59 pm Title: Feel This
Bill was his delicate angel was a cute line. What you wrote towards the end however “he didn’t know where the lines of friendship was and how to cross it” seams like Tom consciously wants Bill in an intimate way and wants to cross over from friendship to more but that doesn’t seam to be the case otherwise right now - yet? I don’t know some things you write are very contradictory just so you know.. and also I hope they will get intimate soon since the story seams to be over soon
Date: 05/15/26 05:47 pm Title: Feel This
Tom is 18 you said, so NOT underage in Germany actually :)
Date: 05/15/26 05:47 pm Title: Feel This
Tom is 18 you said, so NOT underage in Germany actually :)
Date: 05/15/26 05:33 pm Title: Vines of Vacillation
Shoot CRACK up their nostrils? Oookey xD It feels like the wine cellar moment really should’ve been a bigger thing, I don’t know maybe you were like 12-14 when you wrote this so I’m sorry if I’m being harsh with my critiques
Date: 05/15/26 05:33 pm Title: Vines of Vacillation
Shoot CRACK up their nostrils? Oookey xD It feels like the wine cellar moment really should’ve been a bigger thing, I don’t know maybe you were like 12-14 when you wrote this so I’m sorry if I’m being harsh with my critiques
Date: 05/15/26 02:22 pm Title: Winds of Change
I liked the ending part though, it was cute
Date: 05/15/26 02:20 pm Title: Winds of Change
Oh wow boohoo he was ONCE questioned to be a fag not even punched meanwhile and now it’s such a big trauma for him? When he got popular immediately after that? Yeah well if he IS a closeted gay (doesn’t seam like it with what you’ve written with so many girls and his lust after Bills “sister”) well bi then or more like Billsexual as always, hehe no but then I get that it was scary for him but not to the point you’re writing it to be :P and also it’s just overly dramatized but I guess many likes that. For me it has to have more depth and intelligence intertwined to it though. And more nuance. Either way I’m gonna keep reading and sorry if I’m offending you..
Date: 05/15/26 02:11 pm Title: Fair and Unfair
Yeah so again, are they 12? Because 18 year olds don’t bully people with words like these lol. And Tom in most storys have no problem taking a swing at people and it’s also his character in real life so that you paint him as SUCH a coward bothers me, at least he followed Bill..
Date: 05/15/26 01:11 pm Title: Curious Night
Uhm Michael Jackson isn’t a pedophile, also spelled wrongly above btw. And Tom is written like a boring and weak jerk and also like a ALWAYS grumpy old man, not something that fits Tom at all, even if you’re doing it for character development he should still have a bit more different sides to him. And it bothers me that the Gs are sup villains too. And spray painting words like that what are they 12 here? It also bothers me that Tom describes his lust for Bills “sister” so high it was more overpowering than his appetite for food but he has yet to have a thought about how EXTREMELY beautiful Bill is which is super clear and should be a thought he has even if he’s still negatively inclined about him.. I’m sorry if I’m very negative now but I had higher hopes reading the comments.. I’m sure it’ll get better:)
Date: 12/12/15 08:30 am Title: Taste and See
pls update soon?
Date: 06/15/15 02:18 am Title: Rise of the Fallen
I absolutely loved this story! It is all kinds of amazing.
Date: 01/08/15 04:47 pm Title: Rise of the Fallen
Cute :)
Date: 05/12/14 11:26 am Title: Rise of the Fallen
It is amazing story! I miss next chapters :(
Date: 08/24/12 10:16 am Title: Rise of the Fallen
It's been ages since I have been on here and his is in my tracked stories. I have re read it all and remembered why I love it so much. Please finish it, it's amazing :)
Date: 05/22/12 07:51 am Title: Rise of the Fallen
Somewhere in the middle of the story I strongly regretted that it’s incomplete. And also wanted to express my indignation to the author:)) But... God, it’s so beautiful, true and overwhelming! It gave me so powerful emotional impact I never thought any fic could bring! (Especially that part, when Tom came to visit Andi.) Glad it has such ‘end’ – that definitely looks like an end, that could be an end, since things seem to work out, more or less. Still, such a pity it left unfinished, cuz I very much want to see the whole author’s vision of the story, to hear everything author wants or wanted readers to hear. *sigh* Could say more about characters or psychological insight or thoughts, but... they leave me speechless. Anyway, better feel yourself.
Date: 04/19/12 04:09 pm Title: Rise of the Fallen
I love this so much! I really hope there is more to come. It's such a beautiful story!
Date: 01/24/12 12:09 am Title: Rise of the Fallen
I just have to say this and this only:
This is one of the most amazing and beautifully written fics that I have ever read. It made every single emotion come out of me and god, it was just brilliant.
SO yeah.
loved it.
xx
Date: 01/16/12 02:00 pm Title: Rise of the Fallen
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW................... ;'D *speechless*
Date: 01/16/12 01:28 pm Title: Where the Heart Is
you got me crying again for the 4th time in this fic Q__Q huaaa
Date: 01/16/12 01:13 pm Title: Buried Casualties
you. YOU MADE ME CRY Q_Q it's so unexpected, beautiful, bitter, sad, hurt, and arrgh..... you are a brilliant writer you know