Date: 02/23/10 10:38 am Title: Solidified
I love slow progress :) I makes it all more believable !
Date: 02/23/10 10:26 am Title: Fair and Unfair
Yesss! Tom followed ! I was worried he would start insulting Bill too or something... poor Bill, people are so mean to him :(
Date: 02/23/10 09:05 am Title: Taste and See
So, I finally decided to read this story! It's been on my to-read list since forever... and when I saw it on the main page, I figured it couldn't be anything but amazing ! And it is, just one chapter and I'm already addicted !
Date: 02/23/10 04:40 am Title: Where the Heart Is
Fabulous. Dramatic. Oh I've become so emotionally caught up in this story! It really illustrates the purest form of love... I'm almost rocking back and forth, needing another chapter. I can't wait for an update, like nothing else!
Date: 02/23/10 02:15 am Title: Where the Heart Is
Ahhhh what a truly amazing story...
It's an emotional roller-coaster all right! xxx
Date: 02/22/10 10:48 pm Title: Solidified
This is an amazing story so far!!! =D please keep writing!!
Date: 02/22/10 08:32 pm Title: Where the Heart Is
omg .. it's so a-fucking-mazing .. jesus .. i can't explain how .. wonderful this story is .. omg .. i've been taken aback .. i can't .. wow ..
Date: 02/22/10 11:13 am Title: Where the Heart Is
I have to say I desperately DO NOT want this to end at all. I'm terribly confused on how everything will work since Bill lives there and Tom may not do so well living with Jorg but we'll see. I really love this still and I adore how everything worked out. Hopefully Bill will forgive Tom's stupidity (even though he prolly shouldn't) I think Tom now sees though that it's alright to love whoever, and not listen to people's judgment.
Date: 02/22/10 11:02 am Title: Where the Heart Is
love it!!!! update!!!
Date: 02/22/10 10:21 am Title: Buried Casualties
CONGRATULATIONS!!! You got the...what's it called....you know..OH! The featured story (yes i had really forgot the word for a second) Anyway, I was SOOOO happy to see you featured because no one deserves it more. Also, the way you did this chapter was delightful, totally perfect. I'm sorry I wasn't able to read your updates as soon as you put them up, I was terribly sick with kidney infection. I do enjoy the way you always write and describe things too. You know I love when I get your responses to my reviews, they're always so sweet.
Date: 02/21/10 09:32 pm Title: Where the Heart Is
I started reading this story yesterday and could barely tear myself away from it today! this is so wonderful and heartwrenching and just what everyone needs. A piece of themselves to come together again. Beautiful work.
Date: 02/21/10 09:29 pm Title: Where the Heart Is
absoluley fabulous. i am hanging on every detail. wonderfully written. cannot wait until next chapter is up!
Date: 02/21/10 09:06 pm Title: Long Way to Run
I usually don't review until I hit the most recent chapter, but I loved this one so much it hurts.
I hated when both my step mom and my dad insulted my mom. They never even actually said it to me. They said it to my younger sister when I wasn't in the room, but I still heard. If I hadn't been as young as I was, I'd have acted on the urge to go and tell them to fuck off. And now I haven't talked to him in almost two years, because he doesn't feel the need to call. And I'm glad. Oh, how I can relate to Tom in this whole child-father relationship thing.
Date: 02/21/10 05:11 pm Title: Where the Heart Is
Uphill! Uphill! Uphill we go! Finally you’re becoming smart, Tom, I’m PROUD of you ^^
Update is gold ^^
And now I have to go to bed REALLY quickly, for if my mom finds me now I'm going to be dead. O.o
Date: 02/21/10 04:50 pm Title: Buried Casualties
Tell you what I thought?
Nope, I’m going to tell you what I did. What I felt.
At the first part I felt relieved, for Tom, for Andi. But also a little confused, because Tom did love Bill, right?
The next thing I recall is not being able to read farther than those three sentences: ~~~ Tom’s arms trembled. Andreas stared up at him, beautifully and openly presented beneath Tom, but not really there. He suddenly didn’t fit there. ~~~
I cried.
Then, at the last part of the chapter I smiled again, maybe a little watery, I mean ANDI O.o
But I smiled.
Reaction? TOM GET YOUR ASS BACK TO THE LAVENDER FIELD, OR I’M GOING TO KICK IT THAT WAY! (A)
Hate you? How can I hate someone who posts such abeautyful story O.o Wait, don’t tell, I don’t wanna know.
Love you? Well, let’s not take it thát far, shall we? ;-p
Date: 02/21/10 04:45 pm Title: Where the Heart Is
he came back! HE CAME BAAAACK! yeeeey! *jumps up and down with stupid grin on face* YEEY! I THINK I LOVE YOU! and you have to update soon!:')
Date: 02/21/10 04:33 pm Title: Long Way to Run
Lineke, you're not going to cry, no you're NOT...
This isn't helping...
This is the crisis, right? The most miserable part, right, after this it will go uphill, right? *tiny little girl voice*
Date: 02/21/10 04:21 pm Title: Bend and Break
What do I think? I think I’m beginning to love this story even more than I already did (If that’s possible)
Expected? I sort of expected them to open up to each other and kiss, and they did and they’re so extraordinary CUTE o.o
Unexpected? Hmmm I didn’t expect Bill and Georg to have been friends, I guess…
Thoughts? Again? I WANT ICE CREAM TOO o.o
Random comments? Didn’t I just do that? Hmm all right, one more then…
~~~“Jorg stared at Tom with his mouth agape, shocked and silent. Tom felt immediately insecure and wondered what was the motivation behind that look.
“What?” Tom snapped, uncomfortably adjusting his napkin.
“You’re eating the pancakes.”
Tom raised his eyebrows. “Um. Yeah?”
Jorg continued to gawk. “But you never eat the pancakes.”
Tom scoffed. “I’m hungry,” he replied vaguely with a shrug.
Jorg laughed loudly. “You’re hungry…you’re always hungry! But you never eat the pancakes.”
Labeling his father’s argument pointless, Tom rose from the table. He rolled his eyes and proceeded to wash his plate and utensils neatly before sticking them gently into the washer. When he turned around again Jorg was still staring.
“You did your own dishes?” Jorg asked, shocked. “Since when do you do your own dishes?”
Tom sighed before grabbing a shirt from the stair banister and tossing it over his torso with a small smile on his face.
Jorg gasped. “You smiled!” ~~~
That part was BRILLIANT xD
Author's Response: Yay! Thank you for the amazing review!!
Date: 02/21/10 04:16 pm Title: Fools of Follies
Allright, I think you need to know that you’ve got me nearly screaming “NOOO!” To my computer. O.o There aren’t much people who can do so, be honored.
And now I really just have to say this;
TOM YOU STUPID IDIOT!
So, that’s out of me…
Author's Response: I feel honored! Thanks for the review.
Date: 02/21/10 03:34 pm Title: Feel This
Allright, what did I think reading this chapter?
First; In (almost) every definition at the beginning of the chapters, you compare something with lavenders, it keeps coming back (I actually realized that way back in the story, but I forgot to mention that) I really like that, it gives a certain unison (am I saying this right?) in the story.
Then second; Yay! What a philosophic thinking! *adores Bill* (Yes I have Philosophy class in school and I love it!)
And last (but not least); GOOD BOY TOM! You’ve surrendered! You like the raisins! Say you like them, say it! SAY IT! ^^
Author's Response: Yes, I try to relate it to lavenders! Thank you, I'm glad you enjoy it. It's just a little feature I added to carry out the motif of lavenders throughout the story. Bill's philosophies are definitely interesting! HAHA he does, he does! Thank you for the review!