Date: 04/09/10 03:53 am Title: Rise of the Fallen
I REALLY enjoyed this story!!! Also like how at the beginning of each chapter you start off with a very touching statement!!! Can't wait for more!!! :D
Date: 04/09/10 03:01 am Title: Rise of the Fallen
*sigh* Beautiful
Date: 04/09/10 03:00 am Title: Rise of the Fallen
I love you. I freaking love you. Oh My Word. AMAZING!
Date: 04/09/10 02:31 am Title: Rise of the Fallen
Amazing chapter! I absolutly loved it! =)
Date: 04/09/10 01:50 am Title: Rise of the Fallen
I am soo glad to see that you updated. I know that life gets in the way..I can relate. But this chapter made my day. It was so nice to see they finally made up. cause i will tell you...I WAS DYING WHERE YOU LEFT IT! haha. after I saw this story was featured my life was comsumed by this story for 2 days straight reading one chapter after the next. this may sound really personal but I fell in LOVE with your story. It hit home an in amazing way. and i think thats why i grew so attatched to this story. its so beautifully written. The way you created Bill's character is just beautiful, he's what I connected to the most in ways. How you came to write a wonderful story from a field of flowers was gorgeous. I love the little quotes relating to the lavenders before each chapter that you put. it fits so nicely.
Now that I left you a short story review..hehe..I will patiently wait for your next update. Congrats again on being featured as well.
-TomsTeddy
Date: 04/09/10 01:16 am Title: Rise of the Fallen
Apparently, the site didn't like my first review, so I'll try this again... This story is absolutely amazing. At some points, it makes me sad, but at others, it makes my heart smile. You are doing a fantastic job and I can't wait to find out what happens next.
Date: 04/09/10 01:10 am Title: Rise of the Fallen
Well, since you've /begged/ and all... haha. No way, this was fabulous. I saw the update (I don't know if the last time I read this was on my former account or not....) but I was ecstatic. I had a small fear it would never be updated, and that's terrible because it's one of the most heart felt stories I've read in some time. They're finally back together, yay! I love the end of the chapter, it's pretty, hmm, classic, but so tender that it warms you up in all the right ways. Fabulous~ I can't wait to read the upcoming chapters. ^^
Date: 04/09/10 12:55 am Title: Rise of the Fallen
I swear to God, when I got the email for this update, I tripped over the THF banner trying to get here
Tom's word vomit made me cry! It was just so..so...WAH!!
And...and Bill....NAH I HAVE NO WORDS
Date: 04/09/10 12:48 am Title: Rise of the Fallen
wow. i forgot how amazing you are. but damn this sure reminded me :D
Date: 04/09/10 12:21 am Title: Rise of the Fallen
After I finished that, I smiled so hard.
That was so relaxing and cute. I loved how you introduced Tom's comeback and Annabelle's conversation with him.
This entire chapter connected perfectly.
That chapter was worth the wait. Beautifully written. So much pretty emotion. Loved it dear. (:
Date: 04/09/10 12:20 am Title: Rise of the Fallen
Ohhh, oh girl. I loved it. Tom pouring his heart out like that made me ache for him! When they first talked and Tom wouldn't say it, couldn't get it out, I just wanted to shake him into saying he loved Bill. But it was perfect the way it worked out. Tom needed that talk with his father and with Grandma Annabelle. Just a wonderful chapter! ♥
Date: 04/01/10 01:21 pm Title: Taste and See
wow, justin bieber fiction. he's getting pretty big.
Date: 03/27/10 08:36 am Title: Taste and See
OMG, when will this be updated!? i am dying here!!! this is the BEST story i've EVER read!
Author's Response: I've been out of town for two weeks and super busy, but I'll try to work on it this weekend! Sorry to keep you waiting! Thank you SO much, that's so nice of you to say :)
Date: 03/26/10 11:18 pm Title: Where the Heart Is
PLEASE UPLOAD THE FINAL CHAAAAAAPTERS!!! I'M GOING INSANE NOT KNOWING WHAT'S TO BECOME OF BILL & TOM!!!
Date: 03/19/10 03:25 pm Title: Where the Heart Is
THIS IS THE BEST FIC I HAVE EVER READ! HOLY FUCK! Please, hurry up! I need to read more!
Date: 03/19/10 02:13 pm Title: Fools of Follies
DDDDDDDDDDDDDDD: THIS CAN'T BE GOOD.
Date: 03/07/10 02:07 pm Title: Where the Heart Is
OMG! hehe..I can't wait till the next chapter! I really like Bill in this story, the way you portray him, like he's both so childish yet so mature..nice done! hehe :)
Date: 03/07/10 02:05 pm Title: Buried Casualties
I love this story!! you write really well:) and the part with Andi: I don't really read anything but twincest, but I really liked and felt what you wrote about Tom/andi..loved it! ;D
Date: 03/06/10 11:56 pm Title: Where the Heart Is
omg, you totally need to update sooner!! i finished this story in 2 days it was so good XD & now i'm bouncing in my chair to see what happens next!!! i'm not really a bill/tom fan [or twincest in general] but you worked it in this story!! i hope bill takes tome back & they live happily ever after :D
