Date: 09/05/10 10:30 pm Title: You and Me
hmm I like the whole thing... I'm just not too sure about the ending. If they weren't gonna be all not twinly together...why would they have to leave? but then that might just be whole a "normal" *and i used that term loosely* teenager might react. I dunno I can't remember ever being that stupid. (and I'm only 21 so dont believe those 30/40 something parents who say they remember being that age I think its BS)but hey...It was a great ending paragraph though very well written.
Date: 02/13/10 01:08 am Title: Before
I hated Simone and David. I am kind of disappointed that Bill and Tom didn't end up together in the end. But it was a good story though.
Date: 12/17/09 10:37 am Title: Listen
a voice, so mature it could’ve had wrinkles lol funny
gordon needs 2 get a hint! lol
Author's Response: lol. thanks for reviewing. *smiles* ... your username got me singing, btw. =)
Date: 10/06/09 10:57 pm Title: You and Me
They're leaving? Just like that? Well bestof luck to them. Congrats on finishing.
Date: 10/06/09 10:51 pm Title: Over
That was a career that needed to end anyway.
Date: 10/06/09 10:45 pm Title: Knowing
well what's he gonna do about it?
Date: 10/06/09 10:44 pm Title: Headline
David should have just told him.
Date: 10/06/09 10:37 pm Title: Photograph
I don't know if simone gets it.
Date: 10/06/09 10:33 pm Title: Dad
Jorg sounds like a peice of work.
Date: 10/06/09 10:28 pm Title: Harlot
Kiss him and kick him out. smart.
Date: 10/06/09 10:24 pm Title: Friends
What happened to Bill's dad? And where'd Jack come from?
Date: 10/06/09 10:16 pm Title: Listen
I don't get how they forgot or why Simone's hiding it.
Date: 10/06/09 10:13 pm Title: America
So Bill's miserable and famous in America. Where's his dad again?
Date: 10/06/09 10:08 pm Title: Before
seperating them is a mean thing to do.
Author's Response: wow. thanks for reading my story. and reviewing every chapter. that means a lot. i'd answer every review, but i'd just be saying the same thing anyway. i'm sorry you found my story a little confusing in places (i dont write all that well as i forget what i've written before - lol), but thanks so much for continuing and finishing. glad you liked it... :)