Date: 10/18/09 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hot damn... is there more? I mean after all he's not done yet....
mmmmm, yummy
Author's Response: No, no more. The rest is up to your imagination, lol
Date: 04/12/09 08:13 am Title: Chapter 1
itīs just that... I know Bilwas hard... But he also did say Let me go. And thst to me shows he is scared. And that he doesnīt want it. No matter how hard he may be.
Author's Response: It's more of a reflex... He's nervous, but not SCARED. It's kind of a "warning" for Tom to know that he feels insecure. Unless you've been in this situation a few times before with the same partner, this is usually a very standard reaction. :)
Date: 04/11/09 03:54 am Title: Chapter 1
"wacks Tom in the head" thatīs just... no... to me one more warning should be added. But thatīs just the way i look at it i guess.
Author's Response: LOL Sorry, what warning was that?rnI tried putting in all the warnings I found fitting to the story :x
Date: 04/11/09 02:08 am Title: Chapter 1
Yay!! first review!! I think...lolz
This was good...I liked it. At least Tom isn't so selfish at the end! haha
Author's Response: Thank you :D