Date: 04/04/19 09:29 pm Title: Not good!
This will never not break my heart. It gives me the chills. God, when I read it back in the days, I didn't know what to think of toms gf. But I love how I still get all the strong emotions as I got back then! I love this!
Date: 03/27/19 08:56 pm Title: Progress?
“Did you dream about that horrible man?” Tom didn’t expect Bill to react at all, so he got surprised when Bill blinked and nodded. Not much, just a little bit. -- this will never not make my heart skip a bit. it is so gorgeously written. and it doesn't matter how many times I read it. every time I do, my heart skips a beat and my eyes tear up a bit. beautiful!
Love you!
Date: 03/25/19 09:41 pm Title: Prologue
Hi hon! I realized I never reviewed this! And I thought, since I am reading this atm, why not? It totally deserves a review.
God, it breaks my heart. It's so good and the way it's describen when tom cmomes to visit? holy shit. its so good. and the way tom talks to bill, and receives no reply but remains so patient. it always breaks my heart. it's so good, so it's good that it does, but damn. I love this so much!
Date: 01/01/12 06:44 pm Title: Progression is better
wow, really really good. i hope you update soon! xx
Author's Response: Ah I'm so behind on this one! I only need the epilogue, but it's taken me about a year already -.-' Sorry about that!
Date: 09/06/11 09:18 am Title: Prologue
Loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 08/18/11 05:48 pm Title: Prologue
Hi! I just want to say you thanks for this story. I didn't understand everything, I saw lots of new words but I'm glad that I found your story. This is the only one that has managed to captivate me. In real, I'm not English ( I'm French)but I want to improve my English and I'm pretty sure that your fanfiction will be a good way to.
Thanks again and '' see you '' with the next review ;)
Author's Response: Aww, you're welcome! :) I'm so glad you want to improve your English, I did it with the help of reading and writing Fan Fics, a great way to learn! rnAw no thank YOU! Merci :)
Date: 09/29/10 07:54 pm Title: Progression is better
this the MOST lovely fan fiction ever , i usually don't read anything about family in it , but THIS .oh wow just is just great beyond words . really really well done.
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! Aww! This warmed my heart! Thank you so much! ^^
Date: 07/07/10 07:13 pm Title: Progression is better
I like Bill's cute and childlike affect, but I am ready for him to speak correctly. I think we should get to see Tom and Lily's wedding. I wouldn't mind seeing Bill become a dad, but he needs to be better than he is now.
Author's Response: Yeah, I love it too! ^^ Well, he did speak normally in the newest chapter though... rnYou will at some point^^ Yup, he will!
Date: 07/07/10 05:17 pm Title: Progression is better
Bills cute but not ready yet :) marissa is very sweet with him and hopefully soon he will be as normal as Tom but not yet. I'm certain now that he will be ok. I think that a sequel is a good idea and maybe ending this one with Tom and Lilly getting married is good if that is where you will end it. Then you can write more about Bill and Marissa and Bill regaining his life.
Author's Response: Yeah, Bill hasn't recovered yet^^ Yup! ^^ Aww, you are? Hmm... maybe I will make something bad happen then...? lol, j/k ^^ Are you a mind reader or something? That was exactly my thoughts!
Date: 07/07/10 04:28 pm Title: Progression is better
ahhhhh!!!!! yay!!!! i love it that you finally updated!!!!!! cookies for you!!! hmmmmmm...ideas....what if bill (somehow) comes face to face with his dad and this time he stands up to him!!! in front of tom, gordon, rissa, and his mom!!! that would 1 show some amazing progress and 2 just be plain awesome!!! so yeah, theres my idea!! lovelove untill the next chappie!! (which i hope you post very, VERY soon!!!)
Author's Response: Aww, yeah I'm sorry about the long wait! Haha, thank you! *munchies* Yum! Hmm... I shall think about that^^ lol, it could be cool, let me think about it^^ Thank you for your idea! ^^ lovies! I hope so too^^
Date: 07/07/10 04:25 pm Title: Progression is better
omg-the ending is too cute!
I love this story so much and was thrilled to see an update! Thank you.
Author's Response: Aww thank you^^ rnAww you're so sweet, thank you! Yeah, I'm really sorry about that, but as I say, I lost my muse and... I've been busy with school and writing a new story to come^^ Aww, you're welcome hon!
Date: 12/31/09 10:04 pm Title: When you talk about love 2
AWWWW :) ideas, ideas, ideas...
maybe Marissa and bill could get married in another thirty chapters? We don't want to rush things now, do we?
Author's Response: ^_^ rnMaybe yeah ^_^ I don't know if there will be that many more chapters, but if you're up for it and have a lot of ideas to go with the future for them, i guess we could talk about a sequel? ^_^ Thank you for your lovely idea! Nope, no rishing things ^_^ Thank you!
Date: 12/23/09 06:24 pm Title: When you talk about love 2
As far as progress goes, Bill needs to stop referring to himself in the 3rd person, heh. It's okay that he's still afraid of being hurt again and has reverted a bit, but he's not 3. Especially if he's trying to be in love with his caretaker. ;)
Author's Response: I was getting to that point in my mind where I wanted to stop that, I feel like it's getting too much;D You are totally right, awe, yeah;D Thank you and Merry X-mas!
Date: 12/23/09 03:27 pm Title: When you talk about love 2
Oh wow....the chapter was really really good, I'm glad to see Bill is still coming out of his shell! Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Aww thank you so much! Yeah, I'm really glad he did too;D More soon! (I hope!)
Date: 12/23/09 11:35 am Title: When you talk about love 2
Okay...i litterally cannot BREATHE. Have I told you your amazing? Have I told you I love you?
YOU ARE AND I DO!
We should so get married haha (;
anyway. your awesome love. i have never smiled so much.
oh! and compleanos a ti! (happy birthday to you!)
i hope your birthday is filled with lovely billa kisses and tomi hugs!
ill be sure to send you a bday present with your xmas present ^^
love yoou!(phew, that was long!)
-Rissa.
Author's Response: Twinnie! Remember what I told you! BREATHE!!!!! ^_^ Aww hon! I'm not that amazing... *blush* Oh, sheisse, I forgot to be macho again... Ganstahs don't blush... oh well, my twinnie Billa does that... ^_^ rnAww Billa! I love you tooooo! You are so amazing yourself! rn*sniff* too bad we're twins... Hey! We can run off to Las Vegas and pretend to be... not twins and get married! OOOH! Wanna go? *sticks out hand* rnrnAww hon! You are so sweet! Awe! Thank you so so much Billa! Awe, I know you give me lots of kisses ^_^ Thank you! rnrnTWINNIE! You are the bestest twinnie, ANYONE could ever ask for! rnrnLove you tooooo! ^_^ Merry Christmas Billa!
Date: 12/23/09 04:10 am Title: When you talk about love 2
i read this from my small ass phone.....and loved it! yay ur back with this story :D
Author's Response: Couldn't wait, huh? ^_^ Aww thank you so much! Yay! I'm back ^_^Merry x-mas hon!
Date: 12/22/09 10:15 pm Title: When you talk about love 2
I think we should have Christmas fluff but we also need to get into Bill and Rissa more. I love the relationship with Tom and Bill and also Tom and Lily not to mention with little Emily. I kind of want to see how Bill deals with his feelings for Marissa now that he kind of understands to take it slow. He seems so gentile so I can't imagine him being any other way :) I love him.
Author's Response: Awe, yeah, that would be nice! Aww, me toooooo! Mhmm... Alright ^_^ I'll se what I can do hon;D Aww, I love him too! Thank you so much and merry x-mas!
Date: 12/22/09 06:30 pm Title: When you talk about love 2
TT.TT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it was worth the wait!! i love it!! HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!!!! have good times and may wishes come true!...but dont forget about this story! please!!!!!!!!!!!!! hehe lovelove! ^~^
Author's Response: Aww really? Hon you're so sweet! Thank you! Aww, thank you so much! Awe! *le gasp* I would never forget this! ^_^ Merry x-mas!
Date: 12/22/09 06:28 pm Title: When you talk about love 2
awww that was sweet
Author's Response: Awe thank you! Merry x-mas!
Date: 12/22/09 04:17 pm Title: When you talk about love 2
Oh yay!!! I love this chapter a lot, Bill and Marissa should be together forever at this rate. Thanks for the new chapter, more more more please!!!
Author's Response: Aww hon! I'm so glad you do! Yeah, I agree ^_^ Aww, you're welcome;D Hopefully soon;D Thank you so much!