Date: 05/09/09 03:59 pm Title: God Damn it!
ooooooooooooo plz finish itz getting interesting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Lol;D Someone impatient? YOU! lol;D Just wait... just wait and see;D lol, thank you for your nice reivew!
Date: 05/09/09 02:18 am Title: God Damn it!
ooh, some revelations! god, poor bill! i'd like to see more about him and tom when they were younger. i just love how devoted tom his. keep up the great work!!
Author's Response: YEAH! Yeah, very poor Billa! Okay;D I'll try to see if i can write it in somewhere;D I've already written the intire story, so i'll try to see;D Yeah, well, Bill is his little brother, so... yeah;D I WILL! Thank you for your review!
Date: 05/08/09 08:42 pm Title: God Damn it!
it clears up a lot, as usual love the chapter, waiting anxiously for next friday.....;)
Author's Response: Great! I hoped it did too;D I read it through and thought..."read it like you don't know what's gonna happen" and i was like... what the fuck???? so yeah;D lol. Thank you! Waiting too;D lol, thanks for your review!
Date: 05/07/09 06:08 pm Title: God Damn it!
Poor Bill =(
Make things better for him pretty please =)
Author's Response: Yeah, very poor Billa =(rnI can't promise you anything... maybe, maybe not... Who knows? I DO!!! lol;D
Date: 05/07/09 05:30 pm Title: God Damn it!
it was amazing! post more please!
Author's Response: Awww thank you! I will;D
Date: 05/07/09 03:49 pm Title: God Damn it!
awww Bill didn't say anything ;D
oh so Jorg was the rapist?
Nasty Jorg, lol
Author's Response: Lol;D Yeah, Bill is very cute;D rnYep, Jorg is the bad guy... Nasty, nasty Jorg, that's right;D Thank's for reviewing!
Date: 05/07/09 03:27 pm Title: God Damn it!
This story is amazing. The way you write makes everything seem so *real*. I can't wait for the next chapter of this story, please updates soon.
Author's Response: Thank you! Awwww that was so sweet of you! *fangirl squeal* Thank you!
Date: 05/07/09 03:04 pm Title: God Damn it!
it was good. I like the backstory to clear some things up although I kind of assumed that it was rape. Since I'm so messed up I'd love to have some flashbacks of those situations bewtween bill and his dad. I love rape... Great job once again
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad it did;D I thought that too when i read it throug and though... "What the fuuuck?" So yeah;D I think there will be some flashbacks;D I have to check it out when i get home sunday, if there isn't, i'll just write some into it;D Thank you, i love rape too;D Thanks!
Date: 05/07/09 11:33 am Title: God Damn it!
I really like your story....it`s totally different plot from what i`ve had read about...but in the good kind of different tough...keep going, hope that in your plans bill will get much better, ok till your next chapter then.
Author's Response: Awww thank you! It is? lol;D i'm glad you decided to read it anyway;D Thanks;D Maaayyyybeeeee;D lol, you can never know with me... though i prefer happy endings;D YAY!
Date: 05/07/09 09:54 am Title: God Damn it!
Ooooh, I had a feeling Bill's snapping had something to do with a family member, can't wait for the next chapter, it's getting better and better.
Author's Response: You did? Lol, then great job;D I'm glad you liked this and i really hope you will like the others;D Thank you!
Date: 05/04/09 07:53 pm Title: If there is a god.
oooooooooooooo like this story plz continue
Author's Response: OOOOOOO Thank you so much! I will;D Next Friday;D
Date: 05/03/09 06:28 pm Title: If there is a god.
great! (even though its het, lol) I can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I know... it seems like i can only write het ATM... LOL! Thank you!
Date: 05/01/09 04:41 pm Title: If there is a god.
Love. Like always. I liked reading that bit of flashback to give some plot to the story. The plot of bill is a bit slow but it doesn't matter becuase you put so much emotion into each moment that it makes each chapter so different from the last. I love reading this but it kills me to have to wait until Friday each time!!!
Author's Response: Aww thank you! Yeah, it does;D It's slow, because it has to. He was abused and after my head he's taking slow steps;D Awww thank you honnie! Lol;D Yeah, i'm sorry about that, but i like to have some... yeah;D lol
Date: 05/01/09 02:05 pm Title: If there is a god.
Ok sooo, I have a question.... Is Bill younger than Tom because you said that this started a year ago when Simone married Gordon and then in the flash back Bill was like 7 years old. So when did this really start if the twins are the same age and still twins in this story? Maybe I'm just missing something. Also, if this started when Simone married Gordon then that would lead me to believe that Gordon is the one hurting Bill? This is really good though. I really want Bill to get better and maybe get with Marissa. She seems sweet and like she cares for Bill more than just a nurse caring for someone she is supposed to.
Author's Response: Well, Bill is ten minutes younger than Tom. And in my head, the picture was taken the year when Bill and Tom was sevenand that same year, Jorg(the rape scene) raped and abused Bill. No, Gordon is not the bad guy, Jorg is... The next chapter will clear a lot of things out. rnrnAww thank you! Yeah, so do I;D I really want them to get together and be happy forever. But maybe Bill can't accept that someone loves him or something like that... we have to wait and see what they're up to;DrnThanks again for your review and if you're still confused after the next chapter, write me an e-mail so i can get things cleared out again;D
Date: 05/01/09 01:25 pm Title: If there is a god.
thats cute ;D
wow, gordon is nasty o.O
Author's Response: Thank you!rnrnI don't think you got it right dear... It was their real father, Jorg... not Gordon. lol;D we love Gordon here;D Thank you!
Date: 05/01/09 12:38 pm Title: If there is a god.
i love this story poor bill
Author's Response: Awww thank you! Yeah, poor Bill
Date: 05/01/09 11:17 am Title: If there is a god.
good really good, i love this story so far ;)
Author's Response: Awww thank you! I'm glad you like it;D
Date: 05/01/09 10:06 am Title: If there is a god.
OMG!!! Bill talked:D I love this chapter, you have to post more soon:D
Author's Response: YAY! He talked;D Thank you so much! Don't worry! I won't forget my stories and just maybe... lol;D
Date: 05/01/09 10:02 am Title: If there is a god.
It's getting good, and it wasn't a crappy chapter, can't wait for the next one...which'll probably next friday *Cries*
Author's Response: Awww thank you! I'm so glad that you liked it;D Yay! Well, yeah... maybe;D *dries tears*
Date: 04/27/09 10:22 pm Title: Not good!
like it like it, keep posting ;)
Author's Response: Thank you! I will;D