Date: 01/07/08 01:50 pm Title: Cause and Effect
So their magic only works on each other if they're touching? This moment reminds me of another fic. I think you've read it.
Road to Nowhere by Haylz - "They had both curiously inspected the sticky stuff that had come out of Bill and from then on Bill had never been able to look at Tom the same way again. He was convinced that Tom was magic to be able to do that. Only minutes later they found out that Bill could also do it to Tom, and they figured that it was a twin thing and both felt very, very lucky to have each other."
I am falling further in love with the boys. They interact with each other so spectacularly. It kind of lulls me, if you know what I mean. It makes me sleepy it's so comfortable.
Really really good. Duh.
Author's Response: Tom's abillity becomes more powerful when he's touching someone. Bill, as Tom's twin, is able to ignore the pull until they're touching. But I do love Haylz. She's awesome. Thank you for the review!
Date: 01/07/08 10:22 am Title: Cause and Effect
the dream!! oh my god, update the next chapter quickly! =O
And of course, great chapter as usual. Love how the story's developing and I especially love the magic.
Author's Response: lol I'll update as soon as possible. Thank you and thank you for your review.
Date: 01/06/08 10:18 pm Title: Cause and Effect
how-... how what?! are you seriously trying to mess with my mind???? i probably won't be able to sleep now. ugh. ^_^ this is great. the butterfly scene was beautiful-- and your descriptions are very vivid. i could even sense that fear pouring off of bill. verrrrrrry good. i love it. and sheesh your chapters are always so long, i love itttttttt!!
Author's Response: lol I'm glad you like the length of the chapters, because sometimes they get on my nerves. Thank you and thank you for your review.
Date: 01/06/08 07:25 pm Title: Cause and Effect
exactly how WHAT??? omg...
you're killing me...
Author's Response: you'll have to see sandyclaws, lol. And I don't want to kill you.
Date: 01/06/08 06:01 pm Title: Cause and Effect
This story is just great! You write so good and I'm so excited about what's to come *_* Great work!
Author's Response: *bows* Thank you Gisele. I appreciate your review greatly.
Date: 01/06/08 04:30 pm Title: Cause and Effect
ahhh omg no u didnt!!! u did not just end it!!!! omg come on!!! whuts the deal your killing me here!!!!...gawd.... lol!!! update soon please i love this story!!!
Author's Response: Breathe... now relax. lol I'm sorry for the mini!kill, but the cliffhanger was nesscessary. Sorry! :D
Date: 01/06/08 04:17 pm Title: Cause and Effect
You're a very talented writer. I love everything about this fic - plot, characterization, humor, even the evil cliffhangers! :)
Author's Response: *bows* thank you!
Date: 01/06/08 03:20 pm Title: Cause and Effect
Awww! That's not fair ending it like this!
Author's Response: *shrugs* *laughs* *clears throat* Sorry.
Date: 01/06/08 02:05 pm Title: Cause and Effect
holy crap no! its gonna be that dream all over again isnt it??? youre evil for leaving it there
Author's Response: lol yes, I am evil. I thought that was no longer questioned? :D Thank you for the review!
Date: 01/06/08 01:57 pm Title: Cause and Effect
"you’re both too pretty to be real" Lol that just made me laugh *sigh* isn't it the truth though.
i really loved the part about the butterflies, especially since i LOVE them. i thought it was really cool how they gathered themselves around Bill when he was happy and in a good mood. and what really made me shudder was when he reapeared in Tom's room. what made me like it the most was the fact that he wanted to be somewhere he felt safe, so no duh he would end up there.
Um, i'm enjoying the fact that you have more spells coming in each chapter, it's just the way you explain and express them, it's so different from what i'm used to.
i also like how you have them both feeling these strange emotions and happenings. Not just beacuse they're you know elves but beacuse of their twin bond, i'm not sure if that makes any sense but for some reason i feel it plays a HUGE part in everything going on around them.
I litterally gasped when i read the last line, i know what's that means... and i'm worried, the fisrt time i read it i wanted to cry and now i'll do it all over again.
but seriously, great work Puddin, you always know how to leave me speachless.
Author's Response: lol thank you Kat, I appreciate you and your review greatly!
Date: 01/06/08 01:54 pm Title: Cause and Effect
exactly how- WHAAAAAAAAAAT???
gosh thisis exciting!
this is so good. i love it, this is amazing.
Author's Response: lol thank you annie!
Date: 01/06/08 01:35 pm Title: Cause and Effect
Darn you and your cliffhangers.
:)
Jk.
Author's Response: lol sorry! (not really...)
Date: 01/06/08 01:24 pm Title: Cause and Effect
Fucking hell i love this story. Haha "you cant marry your hand georg" lol XD this story is progressing amazingly and i can tell its just another Majestrix masterpiece XD love ya doll x
Author's Response: *bows* Thank you so much, I appreciate your reviews greatly!
Date: 01/05/08 04:28 pm Title: Understand
Amazing! I really love your writing style...the way you've slowly built things up; nothings rushed.I really like that I find it more realistic and justmore statisfying really. Keep it up!
Author's Response: thank you, and thank you for your review!
Date: 01/04/08 06:57 am Title: Understand
I sure enjoyed it... it was so beautiful ^^
Author's Response: Thank you sandyclaws, and thank you for your review!
Date: 01/04/08 05:15 am Title: Understand
i did more than enjoyed it i loved it!
oh gosh, thats like the girl in Heroes with those skills. woah.
that is soooo goood!
i need really more.
Author's Response: lol thanks!
Date: 01/04/08 02:02 am Title: Understand
I loved it :D the whole concept of Tom using logic and Bill using emotion to control each their powers is just awesome :D
Author's Response: :D
Date: 01/04/08 12:53 am Title: Understand
Ooh, exciting! I wonder why Bill's so jealous though. It seems like they can do anything they want if they just try to do it. Bill just hadn't tried to do those things Tom did.
Anyway, wonderful chapter! Keep writing!
Author's Response: I definitely will, thank you and thank you for your review!
Date: 01/03/08 09:42 pm Title: Understand
oh my... you make me so happy... i keep smiling at the computer monitor as i read and i can't help it... your writing just pulls those emotions outta me. =] I LOVE it. seriously. and i love how you used the same "i didn't - i don't - go ahead" quote thing at the end like in that one memory... so cute. haha... and tom's power... wow.
you amaze me. honestly... all that out of your head? you're brilliant. =D and i actually cheered when i saw you updated this earlier... i just had to wait until now to get a chance to read it. keep it up--it's amazing.
Author's Response: Thank you izzap, And thank you for your review!
Date: 01/03/08 06:01 pm Title: Understand
LOVELI !!
Author's Response: thanki!